Don't know why this is being downvoted so much. I mean sure, it's pretty much just pointless clop, but it's pretty well written. Admittedly, you could have done a little bit of development between Twilight and Rarity before going straight to the clop, but that would defeat the point of pointless clop. All in all, this is pretty good, and as such you have been given an upvote in an attempt to balance things out a little.

I enjoyed this.

Well, this was okay...
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My suggestion... Its not a bad thing to have a little romance before you jump into the clop.

Good fic, needs a bit of work, but still alright.
This part -

"Louder bitch! Make the neighbors know my name!"

- killed me, lmfao.

""Louder bitch! Make the neighbors know my name!" Twilight yelled."

I was laughing so hard.

I like how Rarity doesn't even let Twilight go with just silence as an answer, she pretty much demands that she confess her feelings.

"You like me don't you?" Rarity pushed with a keen grin.

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