Fluttershy and Rarity enjoy one of their weekly spa dates. However, due to a promotional mimosa give away, Fluttershy becomes uncharacteristically talkative and tells her friend how she really feels. Awkwardness and discovery over how much she puts up with ensues.
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this was weird but not bad damn good work for a first fic
but that last part with her suddenly just went drunk off her ass felt weird it shouldve been a bit more fleshed out with slurring and other shit instead of just taking one drink and boom(even though she had many drinks before the last one)
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Thanks for the input. Pacing was kind of an issue for me in this, so I appreciate it.
Oh god, that was funny! You could probably do this with all of them and let us see the mane six drunk personalty. ah but I'm faving this, good work!
That was hilarious! I always love drunk ponies and your drunk Fluttershy is excellent. Please continue!
How is Applejack a racist?
Applejack a racist made me lol.
sorry AJ.
Amused, but still confused as to weather Flutters is actually not a pony pegasus or if the title was metaphorical.
hahahaha this is gold! MOAR!!!
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Oh yeah, I never really thought she was a "people person." She lives alone, takes care of animals, and aside from her friends (which is a big aside, but it's a silly story), she is kind of a crazy cat lady. But with bunnies.
Oh dear, poor Fluttersh, all this is going to give her a heart attack soon.
Oh dear oh dear. Love it. Your dialogue is perfect. I bow to you, sir. But transition to what? Obviously Flutters made out with AJ's bro. Applejack is super protective of the big lug.
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Oh just transition from a possible one off, to something lengthier. I needed to reset the setting a bit and figure out where to go. You are quite perceptive about 'ol AJ,
ooooooooooooo whats going on with AppleJack??? lol dis gun be guuudd
Oh your Celestia this is funny,
Been there, done that. Drinking mushrooms is never a good idea. Ever.
So...
Flutters ÷ drunk = humor?
Yeah I can see it. Good job!
Oh sweet mother of Celestia this will not end well for anypony involved....
5408964 Unless it's in mushroom soup. Mushroom soup is delicious.