I am the ginger brony. I occasionally write some stuff about ponies. Most of it is trollfiction. Some of it is actually a little bit good.
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well, that was... something. It did give me some nice kawaii mental images of Twilight though, so that's cool.
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Only two things would have made this better:
1. Instead of a sword fight, you should've made them get into an exploitable, broken, and dragged out children's collectible card game.
B. Made this a harem, where Mac gets all the mares.
Fish. Gotten the advice from some old, drunk, perverted and wise old man/pony.
Johnny Bravo. Some incredibly long, unnecessary flashback where Twilight remembers she learned, grew, something or other.
Not a bad job.
No powering up/spiky blond manes? Also no pinkie pie in giant robot? Otherwise pretty good.
This gets my seal of approval.
Too bad for you (or lucky for you, who can even tell?) I don't have an image of it handy. So have a smiley that's halfway down appropriate street instead.
This is strange, to say the least.
Backs away....slowly.
I'm sorry, but this hurt my head way to much
YAY FOR PINKIE PIE!
Hooray for "Niggas love the bento."