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The Man. The Legend. The World's Strongest Writer

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You can't just stop it there. How will Twilight react to Spike bleeding out on the floor? And what does Sweetiebot do next?

3732697 Make this into a series?

3732712 Oh my non existent god. You did it... I'm not sure how, but you made this and I loved every second of it.

face it everything he writes is good

Story description = WANT
Written by Shakespearicles = WANT
Sweetie Bot? = WANT
I can't wait to read this story.

3733424 He's got the Shakespearicles to prove it.

Excellence levels are at 100%!

Another amazing story from the World's Strongest Writer!

GREAT AS ALWAYS! :pinkiecrazy::heart::rainbowdetermined2:

Shouldn't there be another "i" in Critical for the chapter title.
Or a "1" in this case, I guess.

Edit: Fixed, also great story

OH MY GOD..........................

Exhaust fan.

That is all.

3733424 You put an extra 'o' in that.

Strangely refreching. guess I had not quite seen this coming?
Now it only remains to ask for when the next part is up?

3733882 I like how you accidentally combined refreshing and retching.

Reading this on my lunch break at work... I had to clap my hand over my mouth so I wouldn't spit coke all over the window. Absolutely hilarious, great job.

oh my gawd! Poor Spike!
Honestly, I was hoping for more.
I still like the concept though. could have used more puns...

Sweetie Bot requires additional RAM.
Please convert floppy disc into hard drive.
Primary Interaction sequence: /failure/
engage secondary sequence: pick-up-lines.exe

3734312 That's a great idea! You should write it!

it is! if only I wasn't a terrible writer. :pinkiesad2:
maybe I'll sit on it. look up some bad pick up lines, and babble out a sequel.
with your consent of course.

OH HO HOOOO DAYUM!!!! Spike, I am so, so sorry for your loss.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
Sadly, all I can offer you is a moment of silence.:ajsleepy::ajsleepy::ajsleepy:

Hey, EQAD rules state no foalcon.

3734625 It's not. There is no explicit sex.

The whole time I couldn't help but read Sweeties voice as Sweetiebots. This is truly....something.:rainbowlaugh:

I guess it's innuendo comedy then. Eh, in that case it's placement is for Alex to decide. :derpytongue2:

Where the Hell do I even begin? I can't even tell if this was some kind of troll, or just so beautiful I cannot accurately process it. Sweetiebot is, like, my best friend. I've gotta say, you really captured her antics quite well... her bugs too. I'll have to help her tweak those out later. Anyways, great story. :moustache:

raw19 #30 · Jan 5th, 2014 · · 1 ·


Huh. Reminds me of a Pokemon fic i read once. Most interesting.

Poor Spike lost his Dangle in Sweetie's Exhaust Port. I hope Twilight can grow it back. That being said ....

Friendship is Witchcraft fic FTW!

The sad part is, reading this story, it makes all of Sweetie Belle's failures seem like SOP for a robot pony.
Good work. Now Sweetie is a robot and I can't unsee it. Ever.

sequel? next chapter??... please? :rainbowderp:

So much wut

Comment posted by sofaking deleted Jan 5th, 2014

Man, this was trashy. I was in the same thread when I sew this idea being purposed.

This is...

is it wrong that i wanted this to be legit? ...:twilightblush:

My mind feels violated!:rainbowderp:

I don't know what I just read but I thought it was funny.

jesus christ how horrifying.jpg

lol, silly dragon, you should know better than trying to interface with a fan, i can imagine a "Vrrrr*Crunch*"

patiently waiting on a sequel or continuation, maybe not of her 'epic' quest, but just more

Fuck man, poor spike.

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