It was cold, and dark. The nothing in the something was driving her insane. Only magic can save her now.
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Searous X20
I am 15 as of writing this (9/26/13) I mainly focus, for some reason, on sad stories. However this does not mean I only write sad stories. Just wait to see what happens next...
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How about posting a thousand words next time champ.
P.S This was an atrocious story. How is anyone supposed to rate your writing when you type up this puny excuse for a fic? And you spelled meet MEAT. Hilarious.
Nope
The story looked pretty decent at this point, but after that the story was pretty bad. If you had worked on the original concept (the bit in quotes) then this could be a very good story, you should also read over what you wrote(or get someone else to) so that you can avoid posting a story with errors in it and potentially get more than 1 like
Edit: For some reason fimfic decided to cut off the last bit of my comment
2294295 I'll rewrite it after I finish writing LAST-DAYS. P.S. I wrote it on my phone at 3AM. Also I didn't edit it. It was a test to see if my unedited work is ok, obviously its not. But thanks for the feedback
Well, this might be a first for me. In my one year here, I don't think I've ever seen a story get past the mods by having the same chapter twice to meet the 1,000 words requirement. Seriously, just...
Reminder: ANY negative comments will be removed, also I am rewriting the story but you must give me time.
Update Plan (WARNING! Spoiler)
Chapter 1: Alone
Synopsis: Rainbow Dash has been struck, and killed by lightning. Leaving her friends broken, and alone. Even Pinkie, and especially Fluttershy. Follows the POV of Fluttershy as she observes her friends behavior after Rainbow's tragic demise.
Notes: I got the idea for this after looking back over my work, and removing all the romance. (Estimated release date: 4/15/13)
Chapter 2: Moonlight
Synopsis: Twilight discovers some anomalies in with the fabric of reality. Time has stopped flowing perfectly. One day is replayed with different events. It started the day Rainbow died. She contacts the other four ponies, and together they recreate the universe; fixing everything and resurrecting Rainbow Dash. However, they released an ancient evil witch will slowly grow over time...
Notes: This came to me after I finished watching the last episode of season 6 of Doctor Who. The idea of Moonlight came before that when I was thinking of story ideas, and before Alone popped into my head. Why I scraped it at the time? I don't know.
(Estimated release date: 5/20/13)
Overall Notes: I hope you enjoy the sneak peak of what's to come. I'm a cool brony, and have a nice day!!
I think it was a great chapter, just very rushed.
That... That was... Beautiful... Like seriously, aside the grammar errors, that was amazing.
[youtube=http://www.youtube.com/watch/?v=RzhAS_GnJIc]
Listen to this as you read it.
Gosh the feels...
2460713 Thanks! Also, I'm rewriting it to be about 50% sadder. So just wait and you can read it again!