Long hating his own cutie mark and the unpleasant destiny it likely has in store for him, Snails decides to embark on journey to change it while also learning about his famous ancestor and his trials. Taking him across the entire continent, he travels and perhaps one day, with the help of people like Trixie, he will become something of legend.
notes: Snails is more intelligent in this series.
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This is a pretty good idea for a fic, the question of whether cutie marks are descriptive or proscriptive is one that is interesting to try and answer. There are a few grammatical errors here and there. "Just so you know you're cutie mark isn't that bad" is an example, as well as the typo at the top of the page. Overall it's pretty promising, I'll definitely be keeping an eye on it.
Hey man! I'm an editor/proofreader and I'd like to help! I do a bit of writing in my spare time so I could be your ideas bouncer-offer too. Pm me if you're interested.
Great story so far; it has a lot of potential, and I find the topic to be a very interesting one that provides lots of room to expand new ideas. Good use of dialogue contrasted with Snail's own thoughts. Keep it up, I'm really interested to see where this goes.
Any chance for an update soon?
2449554 Not anytime soon sorry. I feel like the story isn't too popular and I kind of want to write some shorter works first.
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I understand. It's too bad more people haven't read this, because I think it's a very promising start to a story. Hope you decide to revisit it in the future.
Interesting.
Really sad that this hasn't been continued. I love snails fics, and look forward to this ever being continued!