Twilight Sparkle has lost her memory and no matter what she does she can't seem to remember what happened in the last two weeks since she awoke. During that time, however, zombies have broken out in Ponyville and no one seems to understand where they came from. Gathering courage from each other, everypony struggles to survive as they try to figure out what happened to cause the undead to rise, as well as figure out a plan to stop them for good. Will they manage to figure out what happened and save Equestria? Find out now.
Chapters (10)
Just a heads up i believe there's a story already out there with the same name :/
First, it's Ditzy Doo, you know with a Z.
Now, on to the story...
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Just when I thought I could go a day without seeing a wall of text...
Either way, from what little I read, It's a good Idea, piss poor execution.
Break it into paragraphs using enter, not space.
And if I see you write another wall of text, then so help you.
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Oh, shoot. :( I'll have to change it, then. Thank you for the heads up!
Edit: I just searched around and the only thing I found was "Equestria Undead". I hope that's different enough to be okay. I'd really like to keep the title I have.
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Dang, I'll fix it so that it's a "z" instead of an "s". Thanks!
As for the paragraphs being separated with enter and not a space, it shows up that way on my computer... So I don't know what you mean. :/
Actually Ditzy Doo and Derpy was used in show to relate same character.
Interesting i'm waiting for Chrysalis you will have very good idea with her or tragically lame lets see with one it will be
Oooh I love it! Continue, Continue!!
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Try mashing the enter key a few times then, otherwise it'll be the formatting.
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Chrysalis wont be showing up for quite some time but hopefully what I have planned for her will peak your interest!
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Thank you! I'll try that.
Wiwona and other zombi pets! XD
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I guess you'll have to find out!!
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Maybe ZombieShy?
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The drama! We desire thou write with great haste and finish thy story!
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With as much haste with my busy schedule as I possibly can, my princess!
Your princess enjoys this story. The story shall be doubled!
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Thank you very much, Princess!
this story just gets better and better keep up the great work.
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Thank you very much!! I truly appreciate you saying that.
The spacing was really weird in this chapter but great as always. You always express emotion so well.
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Do explain what you mean by weird spacing. I would really like to improve in any way I can on the story. :)
And thank you for saying that. Sometimes I get so lost in writing that I feel like I'm straying too far from the plot line.
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The fact that paragraphs just start halfway through the previous one? Does it not show up on your copy? If not maybe log out and look at it? It made it difficult to read properly.
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Shoot, yes. I see what you mean now. I upload this story to multiple websites and on other ones they require you to do that. I will fix it as soon as I can.
Sweety Belle nuuuuu.
I know I'm hooked. The cliffhangers at the ends of the chapters is what hits me. That's why I can't wait for more. Good work so far.
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Thank you so much!
I'm glad to hear you're hooked. I was worried some people might think the story was too cliche and boring.
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It's hard not to be a little cliche when coming to the whole zombie situation in general but I think you've got great originality with a lot of it. Not sayin its not your story, just saying I don't know if you got the ideas from someone else but if you have I haven't found them.
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All of the ideas are original unless I purposefully put in a cliche zombie moment. In chapters ahead, for example, there will be a few scenes that I put in as a joking tongue-in-cheek display of the classic things that happen in zombie movies/shows. After all, in almost every zombie-related story, hitting them in the head is the most often found way to kill them. I can, however, guarantee that I have made up everything else on my own. I have three papers that I wrote down everything that will happen before I began typing. I wrote it out while at a cafe in my hometown. Any similarities to other stories are coincidental, I assure you.
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Alright I 100% trust you and must say your talent is greatly shown. I'm really looking forward to the rest of this story and others that you may have in the future!
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Thanks for keeping with it! You're in for a good long story, I hope!
so is this a cross with 28 days later or maybe dawn of the dead.
2279077 zombieshy still adorable now with a dash of funny/creepy
2998492 so 4 years later huh
You should do small summarize for all of those who read it from start. And Applejack is one word name
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Shoot! That's the second time I've got a character's name spelled incorrectly. How embarrassing. Thanks so much for pointing it out! I'll definitely go back and fix it.
The plot of the story is good and a little realistic. I do expect only a few zombies (or in this case, zom ponies) shambling in Ponyville unless the cause of the infection is an airborne virus. I'm going to ignore the mistakes since i'm not really good at making stories. I was surprised Derpy was actually technically a friendly zompony, hay i was convinced she was alive for a little while until her wing got detached from her. I could imagine the sickening crack made by the bones when the wings fell off. I'm so disappointed this story hadn't been updated for years. Please continue the story and don't let it stay dead.