The past is a mysterious thing. Everything that seems to remain of it are memories. And some ponies may be unable to forgive themselves for the memories they have. Other may be able to do so. But what if the past doesn't forgive you? What if it catches up with you? What if memories are not the only thing that remains?
After the coronation of Twilight Sparkle, the newest addition to the royalty of Equestria, Celestia finds out, that she isn't the only one who hasn't forgiven herself about what she did in the past. She finds out that not only memories are haunting her. And, one after annother, the heroes of this story will be forced to ask themselves: Could you forgive someone who has taken everything from you?
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This is my very first FIM-fiction so please comment on it. Tell me what is good, tell me what is bad, tell me what to improve.
And I still need someone to preread this story. If you are interested, just tell me.
First and a bloody good fic I hope that it will update soon
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Well, thank you. And yes, the update will be very soon. Maybe even today if I find some time to finally finish chapter 1. The scripts and the main-story of the first 7 chapters already exist but I'm not satisfied with them yet. However, chapter 1 will be about 3 times as long as the prologue.
I am desperate for a critic or maybe a prereader or someone who helps me to get foward faster! There are about 20 hidden clues about twists in the story in the existing 3 parts already and I don't know if anyone noticed them! I am also unsure about my writing-style... Please, just a little assistance would incredibly increase the development of this fanfic.
Hello. I came across this story via Google and see that you have a very interesting story. And that you need a prereader. (or at least you did 11 weeks ago.) If that position is still open, I'd be willing to help you.
~A Dark Reminder
Its really good