• Member Since 17th Sep, 2012
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musicalreader


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To read or not to read.... that is the question. :trixieshiftright:

...... i wonder if the six who voted it down just don't like ponies in intimate stories? :applejackunsure:

It's um interesting to say the least:twilightoops:

Comment posted by Fluttermac36 deleted Mar 13th, 2013

Fluttershy taunted, turning away from him and starting up the stairs. He made to go after her, but she turned around and shot him....

The End. :applecry:

2261489 What you did there...
I see it

2264614 :rainbowderp: thinking.... thinking.... thinking....
:derpyderp1: still thinking...
:ajbemused: .....i get it now...

This was fun to read, but I can't help but think it's the middle of a much bigger story. That's excluding the Chapter 13 at the top:ajbemused:
And that yellow text in the authors note was very hard to read.

4225083 I heated an hi-lighted the text, which made it much easier to read than it would have been.

I'm going to give everypony here a hint as to what Slaeynie just said:
2261489 I guess you'll just have to shoot me a dirty look for doing so (or for not just giving it away). Great story BTW, definitely worth a (re-)read.

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