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yes new chapter !!!!
Thats right Lance stand up for your rights *claps* Extremely great chapter but Dana really likes to force men around, even on dates...... poor captain
wow lance's mom is a jerk how dare she push twilight sparkle!!!
like a hoss
MOAR!!!!!!!!!
Twilight nodded, "We all was."
Shouldn't it be we all were?
Either way great chapter, keep up the good work
Great Chapter bro.
hope you get weller
The grammar errors are a bit annoying, but you're in the hospital, so you have an excuse. Otherwise, keep up the good work!
About time she gets the message through
Dam at first i was like "First post yay!" then i refreshed the page and was like
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Kickass I can't find your Christmas special thing.
Kickass I can't find your Christmas special thing.
Stupid double post
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Now you made a stupid triple post
It hasn't been accepted yet. When ever its accepted, it will show. I've been told its great
76820 actually the third one was intentional.
76821 oh on. But if it's not up then who said it was? good
Finally she leave Lance alone... for now maybe, i have the feeling she aint gonna give up yet. either ways nice chapter and get better soon
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The people on fanfiction.net
I notice that many times you use 'was' where it should be a 'were' instead. not just I this chapter but throughout the story.
i.e. "Twilight nodded, 'We all was.'"
I'm off to bed, the Christmas Special should be up late tonight or tomorrow. When ever its accepted
76932 awwww i was hopping to read it today
i wonder what was goin through gregs head during all that. and i think it minght have bean one of those wind up clapin monkies.
kickass222yourmom
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you made lance make his mom cry
I luv this story and its chapters Kickass222urmom, srry tht i have been making your fingers ache, requesting more chapters, luv your story, cant wait to see the christmas special, just kno its goin to be AWESOME!!!! (sandwich note from one of the chapters)
77011 no no you do not request you demand
77015 would you want to make him write chapters in a fuckin hospital? give the mofo some SPACE that is if you want to
77015 okaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy.......
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76932 Kan the peopl at the hospitl cure u??? I will be so FUCKING mad if they ccant
77070 yea isnt first-world meds good
76932 Dude i think there should be something weird in the next chapter. I'm not talking about standard weird
I'M TALKING ABOUT MARY SUE WEIRD!
DUN
DUN
DUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNN
76932 If you don't know what that is look it up on fimfiction just type "Mary Sue" in the search box on the site
hoorayy! good chapter! why the heck is the captain hookin up with lance's mom? thats just nasty. but either way, i cant wait for more, and im really glad u post every day cuz that means i always have something to read. on this site at least. when im done here, i try to finish fallout: equestria (its been weeks..) but i like new things. i gotta check out your christmas special, dude!! hopefully it's up by now..
Doth mine eyes decieve me? Is Dana begining to develop a crush on Captain Barehoof?
Another good chapter by the way, and I hope that you feel and get better soon.
A really nice chapter you have there...
I hope you like Creepers...
*Sssssssssssssss- BOOM*
And yes, I read his special, and it was great...
Damn it, kickass! I'm sick now too! Just a flu, but my head is killing me...
The christmas special is now up!
Every one must read it now
77544 You force us?
Read it or he will go cupcakes on you
You gotta fight for your right Lance! Way to stand up for your woman! Nice job making Dana's self centered nature very apparent. It makes for a better read! Great job, and feel better soon.
77231 you did it wrong
77882 I read it b4 it appeared there
dana takes the guard captain on a date after trying to get her son to come with her.Blackmail much?
77939 Then write better story! *hmnf*
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We arn't making you; its just the better option ;)
Nice chapter, but one thing... How is it possible to make a series this epic?
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I just put a lot of hard work into it, I don't know how it turns out so good
78021 Watch it, or you take a pie in the face...
78140 i perfer eye lazorz
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