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Scotch Muffin is fed up with being bossed around by bigger ponies who think they're smarter than her. They aren't smarter, and she's out to prove them wrong. Or maybe prove something to herself, as she sets off into the Everfree Forest. Which is not the most friendly place for a little filly. But even the Everfree Forest has it's good points. Like an odd friend, an even odder way out, and an adventure.

Inspired by The Wizard of Oz and Alice in Wonderland.

((This story has been roughly edited.))
Author Note: Sorry if this doesn't fit to your interpretation of comedy, but, I think it's funny and I try to write it silly. Anyways, this got quite a bit of no love when I put through the first version, so I took it down, and completely re-did it. Changed the entire story, the only thing I kept the same was the main pony, which I liked too much to simply let go of. Hopefully it wasn't her that people disliked. But it doesn't matter, I only started writing it because I needed a break from Pony of the Gears. But, when I saw how much people disliked it, I took it down and decided to actually make it a story.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 30 )

Good story, just need's rewritten so everything is not bunched up :pinkiehappy:

2120361 Bunched up as in how?

I quote a comment from one of my own fanfics.

"new speaker, new paragraph. Always."

2120412 o.o Did I not do that? I thought I did that...

There are no gaps between paragraphs, unless the computer i'm using is going nuts. :twilightsheepish:

2120432 Oh, I don't put gaps between paragraphs... I should probably do that... I tend to just put a tab space at the beginning of a new one to separate them... I shall do that.

2120439 And you keep writing good stories. Don't forget that one! :yay:

2120446 Heheh. Thanks. I didn't think that not doing that would make it difficult to read, but I suppose it makes sense. I'll hafta do lotsa editing now.

Nice blend of story, comedy, and cuteness.
[Insert Chris Hemsworths' "I like it!" macro here]

All you need is a James Franco pony

3722053 Eh? x3 Lol what?

3722201 Hahah. Well, I'm really glad, cus I really enjoy writing it.

3755314 Good. Cus I really enjoy writing him. xD

5275925 I know, right? lol

It might if there was like...I dunno. Any actual progression in the story. lol

5275992 Yes that would help. Ten months is a long time.

5276010 Unfortunately, yeah... Not the longest I've shelved something, but I didn't mean to shelve this, just never got in the mood to write it. Though hopefully it'll be less than 10 months for the next chapter. lol

This is getting good now. Really good.

5336748 Hahah that's good to hear since it's a completely unplanned story. I don't plan ahead on what's eventually going to happen like I normally do. It's kinda nice cus I just write mindlessly and let the story go wherever it goes.

5336778 I notice that it has some Oz along with some Alice in Wonderland mix going on.

5336812 Yeah that was the general inspiration for this version of it. With a little bit of Narnia thrown in there, too. lol

“Sleep Here,” Cookie read aloud, his brow scrunched as he stared at the sign.

The Scrunch strikes again!

5669849 His face goes all scrunchy when he's confused.

Comment posted by Luna Secret Stallion deleted Feb 26th, 2015

5672449 12 weeks that's a new record! No wait...

5673710 12 weeks? 12 weeks what?

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