Battle for Equestria

by Mossshadow Dash

Chapter 2

Mossshadow Dash flew home still dripping blood from his mouth. He tried not to think about the near death experience that just happened to him. He arrived at a smallish cottage not far away from the library and opened the door. He turned on the light and went to the bathroom to rid his mouth of blood. Then he grabbed a near by tishue and held it near his mouth. It wasn't a large cut but it wasn't small either. Then he went to his room and slept away all the trouble.

At 11:30pm a small crack woke him up. He couldn't see so he rubbed his eyes with his fore hooves. There was a light shinning through under the door. He got out of bed and went out to see what it was. There was a large red glow coming from the kitchen. He walked slowly toward the kitchen and when he got into the kitchen he saw a beautiful, firey bird. Now at first he was worried because it might burn his house down, but nothing was catching fire. The bird seemed to be carrying something. A letter. The bird handed him the letter, but he didn't take it. He thought that the bird was stupid and got the wrong adress. But the bird insisted he have the letter. So Mossshadow took the letter out of the birds talons and opened it.

'Dear Mossshadow Dash
You might not know me but I sure know a lot 'bout you...'
Mossshadow didn't want to read anymore, it seemed like a stalker letter but something told him to read on.
'...i'm not sure when you'll be getting this letter, but when you do it start something great. Your ancestor was a close friend of mine...'
As soon it said his ancestor his childhood sprung back into place and took a hold of him.
'... she was a magnificent pony...'
'Wait there is no recorded infomation that prooves that my ancestor is a female or no pony nows that. unless...' thought Mossshadow Dash
'...whenever you get this letter go to the library others will be waiting...'
'others? you mean there are other ponies related the the legendary 6?' thought Mossshadow Dash
'...then my pheonix will show up again to hand you all another letter. Yours truly. Princess celestia'
Mossshadow's skipped a beat. A lot of questions popped up into his head all at once.
'Isn't this pony dead? When did she write this? was it before she was murdered? Did she get murdered? Did no pony find any trace of her? Is she dead?'
He yawned and looked for the pheonix but it was gone there was just a candle on the table and he wasn't holding anything. He looked at the time.
'11:35 Did I imagine all that just to keep me distracted from the near death experience and cheer me up?' Mossshadow thought. 'well I guess it worked then'
So he went back into his bedroom and went back to sleep.

Then next morning he woke feeling a little happier than normal. He went into the kitchen and cooked up some eggs for himself. He also put the kettle on to make himself some coffee then he realised something. He wasn't hungry nor tired. He wanted to go to the library, he wanted to find out stuff about last night's dream.If it was a dream. So he ate what he could and bolted out the door toward the library.

Author's Note:

This ones a short chapter but theres still important stuff in it. For chapter 3/4 I need some ocs to continue (No alicorns please) If you put your oc down and i don't pick it, Don't worry it might come up in further chapters. Thank you for your cooperation.

Comments

[Grand Inquisitor]

I skimmed one paragraph and I was disappointed. The description initially hooked me, but I was severely disheartened by the results. Please, expand on detail gratuitously. I would recommend omitting the very beginning and just starting with the introduction of your character.

[Impress Me]

Skyrim....Kinda sucks.

[Mossshadow Dash]

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Ok i will try to make the story a little better when I edit. This story isn't finished yet. Thank you for making a surggestion

[Mossshadow Dash]

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Ok. If you don't like skyrim thats fine by me. If you have a suggestion on the pub's name I will be happy to change it. You see i'm bad at naming stuff. It's just hard for me.

[Grand Inquisitor]

2098651 Thank you kindly. I think this could be a great story, it just needs a strong execution.

[Shadowblarg]

I have one suggestion and that is the letter from celestia you could of put it in italics and separate from the main text also (I know it I did say one suggestion) you could of done the thoughts of the main character differently from the speaking E.g instead of single quotation marks do double. other than it was quite good i was going to say to give more description to places and characters (hint, hint) but I did say i had only one suggestion so i didn't.

[Shadowblarg]

>>Mossshadow Dash

suggestion you mean.

[Mossshadow Dash]

2115945 Why thank you. I might consider putting the letter in italics. WORK ON YOU PUNCTUATION!!!!! I can't understand with your current level of puntuation.

[Shadowblarg]

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fixed