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The story of Queen Chrysalis

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A story of how one pony, overcome with hate, became the monster that is now known as Chrysalis.

Chapters (3)

Prologue · 30th Jan 2013 · 289 words
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Starry Cloud · 30th Jan 2013 · 638 words
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Chrysalis's defeat · 30th Jan 2013 · 317 words
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Perteks

Perteks #1 · Jan 30th, 2013 · · · Chrysalis's defeat ·

Erm that not even long enough for decent one shot.

JustSomeBody

JustSomeBody #2 · Jan 30th, 2013 · 1 · · Chrysalis's defeat ·

It's a nice little background story. The basic idea is very innovative, something I haven't seen done before.
A bit of an advice; it is a lot harder to make fanon than follow canon. Everything in this fic goes against canon. You are definitely a talented writer, a beginner, yes, but still, you have great potential. Its good to challenge yourself, but creating an entire background story and breaking this many canon characterizations? One step at a time, my friend.
But do keep writing. I'm intrigued what you come up with next.

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