After endless years of banishment, Sweet Sauce returns to Equestria a new stallion, determined to make things right. Unfortunately for him, he's also a much smaller stallion than the one who was banished in Equestria's ancient history.
2083787 I'll get to which elements they are in the next chapter, I think. Their cutie marks are: Dinky-what it shows on the cover pic Sweetie Belle- a whole note shaped like a heart AppleBloom-a hammer with an apple blossom on it Scootaloo-a wheel with a streak of lightning coming from it Pipsqueak- a key Babs Seed-three seeds At least, that's what I think they'll be in my story.
FluttershyButterfly you acculy did good (pardon mah Gramah) on the accents and I just realized that all the comments here are by derpy caracters I whant to change mine to the Derpinator if I can with a pic of derpy with an american flag behind her.
There are some plotholes in this story, but nobody expects a comedy fic to be completely logical. Making an entire new scenario, using background characters that we know virtually nothing of and making them the most important ponies in Equestria? Ambition suits you well. And you handle it well. TBH I have absolutely no idea where you could possibly continue with this fic. It seems so complete to me right now. Well, I'll just have to wait and see, won't I? Also
Just then, though,
Only the latter comma should be there. That was the only mistake I found.
2088489 Thanks! To be honest I'm not quite sure where to go with this fic either, but I'm thinking of doing it sort of like the MLP episodes? Dinky has a new adventure, learns a lesson, tells the story to the Princess.
So I'm just guessing but Dinky is The Element of Magic, Apple Bloom is Honesty, Scotaloo is Loyalty, Sweetie Belle is Generosity, Babs is Kindness and Pip is Laughter.
You probably said all that in the story but I haven't read it yet so that ^ seems right to me.
EDIT: Wow. I have never been this wrong in my life. Oh well!
New Mane 6? Yes! But what are their elements and cutie marks? (All of them)
Oh! I don't think I've seen a story with Dinky as main character and an element of harmony, I shall read this now.
Edit: I like their plan involving ninjas! And yes I did read all of it that quickly.
2083787 I'll get to which elements they are in the next chapter, I think. Their cutie marks are:
Dinky-what it shows on the cover pic
Sweetie Belle- a whole note shaped like a heart
AppleBloom-a hammer with an apple blossom on it
Scootaloo-a wheel with a streak of lightning coming from it
Pipsqueak- a key
Babs Seed-three seeds
At least, that's what I think they'll be in my story.
FluttershyButterfly you acculy did good (pardon mah Gramah) on the accents and I just realized that all the comments here are by derpy caracters I whant to change mine to the Derpinator if I can with a pic of derpy with an american flag behind her.
YAY! A Babs story that isnt horribly depressing!!!
Have a mustasche
i must be patient
as patient as a derp in the shadows
Nice, but two things. What is Babs' element, and are you sure Scoots isnt the element of honesty?
Great story though, keep it up!
love it GO DINKY GO! GO DINKY GO! GO DINKY GO! GO DINKY GO! GO DINKY GO! I am chanting for dinky because she is the new me.
'Nuff said.
2084309 Oh, oops! Sorry, I fixed it.
Dats Sparkler, not Dinky...
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Babs is the Element of Boston Accent and scouting. Nuff said.
2086010 Nope, it's Dinky all grown up. Sparkler looks much different, actually.
There are some plotholes in this story, but nobody expects a comedy fic to be completely logical.
Making an entire new scenario, using background characters that we know virtually nothing of and making them the most important ponies in Equestria? Ambition suits you well. And you handle it well.
TBH I have absolutely no idea where you could possibly continue with this fic. It seems so complete to me right now. Well, I'll just have to wait and see, won't I?
Also
Only the latter comma should be there. That was the only mistake I found.
2088489 Thanks! To be honest I'm not quite sure where to go with this fic either, but I'm thinking of doing it sort of like the MLP episodes? Dinky has a new adventure, learns a lesson, tells the story to the Princess.
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I was referring to the cutie mark.
2089607 Oh, okay! (In my headcanon Dinky's cutie mark is actually a muffin, but I'm too lazy to draw a cover pic with that as her cutie mark.)
AND THEN THE WORLD BLEW UP
Cute story!
So I'm just guessing but Dinky is The Element of Magic, Apple Bloom is Honesty, Scotaloo is Loyalty, Sweetie Belle is Generosity, Babs is Kindness and Pip is Laughter.
You probably said all that in the story but I haven't read it yet so that ^ seems right to me.
EDIT: Wow. I have never been this wrong in my life. Oh well!