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Jez Ay


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Pinkie is in for a "Surprise" when the new pegasus in town appears to be stealing her friends. Will she be able to pull her old friends back and earn a new one, or will the solitude and crazy weather drain her of her sanity and color.

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This seems awfully familiar....

good job, just how Pinkie's decent into madness would really happen. I approve :pinkiecrazy::twilightsmile:

new pegasi

It's pegasus, because I'm quite sure you aren't referring to more than one.

I agree La Barata. I could have sworn that Pinkie confronted and yelled at Surprise. Then the rest of the Mane 6 get mad at Pinkie because Surprise was actually trying to impress Pinkie the whole time.

2043381 You're exactly right. I'm looking on EqD for it now...

Surprise tilted her head /''Pinkie Pie was awesome

scumbag forward slash

She shuttered at the thought.

should be shuddered

apart from that, didn't see anything else worth mentioning

liked it, was an enjoyable read, you nailed pinkies madness pretty well

good job:twilightsmile:

That's night right, Surprise is her newest friend, and everypony needs to be liked.
Not

ok I think it is a rule DONT throw Pinkie a Surprise Party :pinkiegasp::rainbowlaugh::twilightsmile:

Wow, thank you guys for reading and commenting, and super thanks to y'all who favorited it. If you see any other spelling/ errors or the like please let me know. cant thank y'all enough!:pinkiehappy:

2043381 I found it, the title's even basically identical.

Saddlesoap wrote it a year or so back

2044278 Thanks for the heads up and link to Surprise, Surprise. I addressed the similarities in a blog here http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/120424/surprise-surprise

Long and short of it is coincidence, but its a great story ya'll should take the time to read it. Also thanks again for the watches, favorites and comments. You guys rock

I like it but it was really sad:pinkiesad2::pinkiegasp:

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