A short story about a filly Ditzy Doo finally making a friend. Written before The Last Roundup came along and messed with my interpretation of the character (not that I'm angry)
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Well done! Not too different from her in the Roundup, as she could have changed over the years.
DDDDDDAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!
I like it, and I know the feel... the last round up kinda hurt my fanfic featuring Ditzy as well.
DAAAWWWWWW
*sniff*
so cute
Great story. I read it last night before going to bed and it's been on my mind all day. Thanks for uploading it
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Thanks. I admit, Roundup made me a bit hesitant about writing a follow-up to this. But I pretty much gave Ditzy a similar backstory to Fluttershy, and she turned out fine, so we'll see
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Curse Hasbro for making their canon conflict with our fanon *angry fist shake*
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That's the exact reaction I was going for
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Thanks for reading it
Great story, but one problem: breathing in through his nose and out her mouth
It should be through her nose
But other then that, I enjoyed it a lot.
And to quote Fluttershy: "yay"
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DOH! It's always the little things I don't catch when proofreading. I am not a clever man
But glad you enjoyed
208065 Yep, I know how it goes, I have made small mistakes like that as well. Sometimes it just takes a second or third pair of eyes to help see them.