After the heartbreaking removal of Rory and Amy from his life, the Doctor decides to go into exile. But, as always, the Universe has other plans for him. During his voyage to his vacation spot, something goes wrong, landing him on the lowly planet of Equestria. The natives are peaceful enough; perhaps he can relax here instead?
Nope.
[Author's Note: I twist the ending of 'The Angels take Manhattan' a bit. I changed it to suit my head-canon, so somewhat of an alternate universe fic. Not enough to be labeled as such, however. Comments and criticism are appreciated.]
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This is written quite niecely. I'll give you my like for that. You get choppy sometimes though, but it's nothing unbearable.
also
The word 'head' is totally redundnat.
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Thanks, it's been fixed.
I really like it but I can see it heading in the right direction and if you need a pre reader I would bee happy to help
But I do in joy this story a lot
I like it
. Unfortunately, I don't know a lot about Doctor Who, so I can't really give you any criticism on the matter
. However, with that being said, I almost felt as if I was actually there. Nicely done. Can't wait to read more!
the doctor, slendarman, and ponies. Wow this will be good
I am just wondering, Will there be more or have you given up on this story?
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There will definitely be more, don't worry.
I've just been 'out of it' in terms of creativity. I'm starting to get back into it though.
Thanks for the comment!
-IP