1990855 Gives off a very odd feel though, if Vinyl Scratch can disguise herself despite being a famous DJ then why can't Twilight Sparkle, who is generally more quite, is it because Luna converted her? Or perhaps because she couldn't leave her friends.
I like it. For some reason, I keep thinking of Daybreakers while reading this. The description made me think of it. It's a good movie. I like this story and can't wait to see where this goes. Hope updates come soon.
P.S. I think Moonlight Sonata was a better OcatScratch, but we're all entitled to our opinions.
1991269 Only the world is similar; this won't be a hunt for the last pony, oh no... This will much more *licks lips* interesting 1991258 Of course my fine filly friend. Care to read a terribly made HiE fic while you wait? (if so, check mah profile)
1991662 It's going to be dark in an interesting way. I've never done dark before, so let's just hope I have the right idea. And juicy, well... *licks lips again* you could say that.
2017338 Of course you are dear. *Pats her head lightly* why don't you run along and get a snack now? *hands her 5 dollars* There's a good girl. xD, well, thank's for reading it anyway's. New chapter should be out within the week.
I will admit I don't like how you portray Vampires Ponies (I really dislike the term Vamponies) as being practically dead with no blood and so on. It's probably just a matter of conflicting headcanons, as I see them as being alive but with a sort of strange virus/curse that allows them to transform and changes their body in some way.
I'm hesitant when it comes to reading more of this story... I mean, the style and writing are pretty cool, the plot seems to be interesting so far, and it's Octascratch. But I really don't like this particular AU. I really don't like the idea of an evil Luna and the killing off of Celestia. Although I guess Luna won't have much influence in this story further, I guess I can give it a try, especially since I'm gonna have lots of time today.
This Doesn't ave much to do with the main story But it has been nagging me for a while During the Siege of Canterlot, WHY DID CELESTIA EVEN LOWER THE SUN! She could have complete tactical control of when the enemy would attack and could just keep the sun up for a month and Starve the Vampires to death, or at least to a surrender. It makes no tactical sense not to use her power over the sun against an enemy weak to the sun.
well, i think that this is well thought out. it sorta matches the mlp world, how she's always wearing her shades (which is probably where you got that). i didn't get the "boned up" part right away, but i believe it's something akin to "screwed up". correct me if i'm wrong.
i like it, and i'll continue to read it. hope the rest is just as good, if not better!
4513336 there are a few things that could explain this.
one: she doesn't have that kind of control over the sun. some believe that she can only nudge it if it's a few minutes off. (much like a mechanical pocket watch) or maybe the sun would drain her power until she wasn't able to lower the sun, maybe that's how it works. (not really sure exactly how the "she raises and lowers the sun" thing works)
two: the crops would die and other things like this. ponies wouldn't know exactly when to sleep, seeing as Equestria doesn't really have clocks (except for a choice few, but that's another argument entirely).
three: her sister wouldn't let her, seeing as she's one of the enemy. chances are Luna would bring up one of the aformentioned points and use it to dissuade Celestia from keeping the sun up too long.
not to mention this would leave the other half of the world in perpetual night. and it might just be against her morals, seeing as her sister was once corrupted, wanting to keep a "Night Eternal".
So, you like? Tell me what you think~
Mavinator5
I think it's incomplete, but I'm not sure...
*checks again*
Eeyup, it's incomplete!
1990649 Please refer yourself to the cover art to see what action I am currently performing.
thumbs down for Luna
1990625 I can see a good plot ahead with many chances of an amazing story, good job
1990793 I can understand why you'd do that, sorry, but this is an AU.
1990847 I do my best!
1990855 Gives off a very odd feel though, if Vinyl Scratch can disguise herself despite being a famous DJ then why can't Twilight Sparkle, who is generally more quite, is it because Luna converted her? Or perhaps because she couldn't leave her friends.
1990861 Ah, so you mean how did she escape conversion where as Twilight didn't? That explanation will come in time~
1990877 Curses, but whatever, I shall wait to see
1990882 That avatar, love that show.
1990906 Code Geass for the win!
I like it. For some reason, I keep thinking of Daybreakers while reading this. The description made me think of it. It's a good movie. I like this story and can't wait to see where this goes. Hope updates come soon.
P.S. I think Moonlight Sonata was a better OcatScratch, but we're all entitled to our opinions.
1990969 Mmm, good choice of fic. But I'll stand by my choice!
Hope I can keep up the quality, what with all these ponies coming to see~
1990657 Checking your pulse with your head?
I'm intrigued...I like where this is going and the premise is beyond interesting...
...go on
(Also glad to know its Vampony traits I haven't heard of in a long while. And I did catch a few "The Hunt" references as well)
1991026 ... you silly filly, I'm checking to make sure my brain's still in place after I laughed so hard at your comment~
1991031 I'm not the only one who read it! And thank you!
1991048 ...are you coming on to me?
1991053 How in the world did you rationalise that?
1991092 ~
1991096 §
1991100 ¿ɐʞɔnɟɐɥʇoɯ 'ʍou ǝʞıן noʎ ʍoɥ
1991104 Well, I'm bested...
▒▓░
1991113i1270.photobucket.com/albums/jj616/BronyGC/Ijizzed_zps5a2b8e74.jpg
1991133 Rainbow Dash can jizz on me whenever she wants~
1991155 Dude,... it's pronounced 'Rainbow jizz'
1991165 If you say so~
1991182 Ok, now if you'll excuse me, I am going to write some original shit.
1991186 Origial eh? We'll have to see about that wont we?
1991195 The only thing I think is unoriginal is how the guy gets to Equestria, the rest is SPOILERS
more please.
No problem :)
But I would admit The Hunt was a bit meh...
Replace the concept with the best pony though and I am interested.
1991269 Only the world is similar; this won't be a hunt for the last pony, oh no... This will much more *licks lips* interesting
1991258 Of course my fine filly friend. Care to read a terribly made HiE fic while you wait? (if so, check mah profile)
Hmm...the lip licking makes it seem...juicy....
If its dark I'm all for it too. Can't understand why I tend to write them and read them
1991662 It's going to be dark in an interesting way. I've never done dark before, so let's just hope I have the right idea. And juicy, well...
*licks lips again* you could say that.
The book your talking about was it made into a movie call daybreakers because the plot sounds almost the same so is this one
1992125 I do not know, but I doubt it. I think it's pretty recent...
1990625 very interesting concept....definatly wanting more.
It seemed like a nice beginning, though I'd like to point out a few things.
You switch from vampony to vampire a couple times.
Not that big of a deal, but consistency is nice.
Forgot the 'd', makes 'settle' into 'settled', which is the proper tense in this case.
Other than that, it was pretty good, looking forward to the next one.
1999971 Thanks, I tend to miss things like this from time to time; if you spot anything else, lemme know!
2000177
*Salutes*
'Twas all very minor so far.
1991301
I'm male, I just like Vinyl as an avatar
2017338 Of course you are dear. *Pats her head lightly* why don't you run along and get a snack now? *hands her 5 dollars* There's a good girl.
xD, well, thank's for reading it anyway's. New chapter should be out within the week.
O shit, You weren't kidding when u marked it as dark o.O
Awesome first chapter!
Found a typo that you might wanna fix
It's... Hmm...
I will admit I don't like how you portray Vampires Ponies (I really dislike the term Vamponies) as being practically dead with no blood and so on. It's probably just a matter of conflicting headcanons, as I see them as being alive but with a sort of strange virus/curse that allows them to transform and changes their body in some way.
I'm hesitant when it comes to reading more of this story... I mean, the style and writing are pretty cool, the plot seems to be interesting so far, and it's Octascratch. But I really don't like this particular AU. I really don't like the idea of an evil Luna and the killing off of Celestia. Although I guess Luna won't have much influence in this story further, I guess I can give it a try, especially since I'm gonna have lots of time today.
This Doesn't ave much to do with the main story But it has been nagging me for a while
During the Siege of Canterlot, WHY DID CELESTIA EVEN LOWER THE SUN!
She could have complete tactical control of when the enemy would attack and could just keep the sun up for a month and Starve the Vampires to death, or at least to a surrender.
It makes no tactical sense not to use her power over the sun against an enemy weak to the sun.
well, i think that this is well thought out. it sorta matches the mlp world, how she's always wearing her shades (which is probably where you got that). i didn't get the "boned up" part right away, but i believe it's something akin to "screwed up". correct me if i'm wrong.
i like it, and i'll continue to read it. hope the rest is just as good, if not better!
4513336
there are a few things that could explain this.
one: she doesn't have that kind of control over the sun. some believe that she can only nudge it if it's a few minutes off. (much like a mechanical pocket watch) or maybe the sun would drain her power until she wasn't able to lower the sun, maybe that's how it works. (not really sure exactly how the "she raises and lowers the sun" thing works)
two: the crops would die and other things like this. ponies wouldn't know exactly when to sleep, seeing as Equestria doesn't really have clocks (except for a choice few, but that's another argument entirely).
three: her sister wouldn't let her, seeing as she's one of the enemy. chances are Luna would bring up one of the aformentioned points and use it to dissuade Celestia from keeping the sun up too long.
not to mention this would leave the other half of the world in perpetual night. and it might just be against her morals, seeing as her sister was once corrupted, wanting to keep a "Night Eternal".
just a few points.