6098800 Welp, hope this helps assuage that thirst 6099138 Oh, okay; I have this tendency to overthink things 6099439 By all means :p 6100645 Lemme ask you a tangential question; what if Vinyl has to make a really hard choice? 6116100 Would you care for another sir?
6127704 In a good or bad way? 6127775 I'm here to please 6127791 Oh good, I'm not losing my touch 6127831 Cause she's asking for it; the universe will punish all who dare evoke it's wrath
First glad you are back and second the new direction you are taking this has the feel the you will be raping this up soon which is good, this story is one that will benefit from not being to long.
Now I have read a lot of story's over the years and can normally put together some kind of predictshon as to were the story in question is going but with this one I am stunk as to were it will go and to what end. I have only got 2 posipall endings and they are vague at beast, one is that things go tits up and vinyl is ripped to shreds in a boldly mess of gore or the other one is that things some how turn out right in the end.
How can you posibly still be asking us if this a good story, its down right sensational!!! 2-3 weeks... Meh, its better but you can do better however if you have a life unlike these vamponys its completly understandable and we can wait for more awsomness.
Greetings, I'm Anemptyshell...(Thus no vamp can suck me dry)
You know this story is quite an interesting find, both for the story and characterization. (Even if I do have one major complaint with the fact that even transformed a character does not lose their sense of self, like if they were a zombie and thus would have the opportunity to chose to fight for those who they care about rather than immediately join the vampony master race. Though I have this complaint in most media that does it, so it's by no stretch your fault at all.) It actually is more interesting because of what I thought of and up while reading it. For the entire time I was reading the first couple of chapters two scenarios burned in the back of my head that had varying degrees of relevance to the actual material. The first was imagining Robocop slaughtering this entire version of Equestria...I blame ERB, for their super fresh rhymes. The second was making a team of all the best vampire hunters from media and wondering how they would cope if forced together against this world. I also remember a Vampire move from a while back that seemed a lot like this, where the whole world became vampires except for a small human resistance. I do wonder if that movie had any impact on this story. The movie was Daybreakers if I remember correctly. Anywho, I am having fun reading this either way, I hope it continues to impress.
p.s. I am also a bit salty you killed Celestia, Best Pony deserved better. lol
Have a nice day (or night I guess...Vamp scum...jk...or not...I'll never tell) and a pleasant tomorrow.
One of the main reasons I like this story is because I have no idea how this is going to play out in the end, but I have a feeling it isn't going to be a happy ending is it?
6135436 My personal headcannon is that the vampires, are more like new beings, with the same memories as the old ones, different driving force and desires, but the memories mean that driving force is going to be very similar, but not quite the same, as the old self. The new being will always have the desire for blood, and to protect their race .. it is up to the memories / brain pattern how that desire shows
This continues a trend: in every VinylTavia I've ever read, Octavia's mom was an absolute bitch. In this story, she's downright evil, even more so than most of the characters.
I see one remedy: Stake the vamp! I'm just itching to see her on the wrong end of holy water and garlic juice cocktails, silver daggers, and sharpened crosses.
Vinyl...you are boned. Maybe in ways more than one but..well...there's a reason I'm digging this grave...either you or her bitchy mom is going in this hole or someone owes me double time for my work. Damn vamps...and with that good day and I make my retreat into the woods. Leave the bits on the headstone I'll pick them up at noon.
P.S. This updated and I got no word of it in my feeds. Damn you iPhone!!!!!!
Jebus there are a lot of comments. This is what I get for only replying either right after yall make them, or right before the release of a new chapter. ...
6128049 It took six whole chapters? Unacceptable; I must do better 6128251 It always is! 6128454 Porn? What is this porn of which you speak? Also, what sorta details? 6128791 Yay! My thanks 6128839 I think I addressed this, possibly. I hope I did in a chapter. It's been a while. There is a reason, I'm sure 6129282 Well, what if things don't end happily but Vinyl isn't torn to shreds, hm? As to length, it may or may not be moving towards the end. 6129447 Cause we talk between ourselves to make sure everything comes out simultaneously of course. 6131697 Having a life sucks man; you have like, social obligations to fill, and they want you to actual work at work. Like, what the hell right? 6132787 This is what I do; wait till there are a bunch of chapters, then read. It's legit. 6135149 Thank you friend. I'm fairly certain I fixed that but I'ma check now. 6135436 Ha ha funny pun; i get it :p Ah, to your first concern, that will totally be addressed about 10 chapters later than it should have been. There's a reason though, kinda. I have not watched such a movie. And who said Celly's dead? Maybe she's just resting, although you miss spelled Scootaloo there. Right before best pony. 6147061 Well, maybe. I think the ending will be... fun to write. Happy, sad, funny, tragic. Could be anything at this point. 6168220 You sir, are very close, but also very wrong (it's odd, I know, but you'll see down the road) 6176381 I love it too! That's why I write it 6179695 Yo, s'about to get crazy though. 6193083 Evil? I say, she's the prime example of a quality politician! Or yes, very evil 6195233 I tried really hard to write something that sounded legit. It was so, so difficult. 6199616 Yo, I promise you one thing though; before the end of this story, someone's gonna need that grave. Won't say who. 6235187 Yes, pain and suffering! Let all the payment be made! 6284594 You made me laugh the first time I read that comment. It was amazing
Cause we talk between ourselves to make sure everything comes out simultaneously of course.
...
If I didn't know some authors actually plan their releases with other authors I'd be less inclined to believe you. Instead I'm fairly sure you don't chat with the all the people that updated during that week so I'll (try) to take that as a joke.
6293840 I WANT VINYL FOR PROTOTYPE, LOOK THE PROTOTYPE 2 STORY SUMMARY, AND TELL ME THE MAIN CHARACTERS NAME, DO IT!!! MAKE HER A VAMP THAT WILL FIGHT HER WAY TO THE TOP OF POWER, FOR VENGEANCE
6098800 Welp, hope this helps assuage that thirst
6099138 Oh, okay; I have this tendency to overthink things
6099439 By all means :p
6100645 Lemme ask you a tangential question; what if Vinyl has to make a really hard choice?
6116100 Would you care for another sir?
I wasnt ready for this. I really wasnt
HA-ZA!!!! Another chapter!!! This is fun!
Well I actually was uncertain what direction it was going, and thats what makes it so good
Oh Vinyl, why? Why did you have to say that?
6127704 In a good or bad way?
6127775 I'm here to please
6127791 Oh good, I'm not losing my touch
6127831 Cause she's asking for it; the universe will punish all who dare evoke it's wrath
6127845 both...just both
Dis gon b gud
This just keep gettin better and better
First glad you are back and second the new direction you are taking this has the feel the you will be raping this up soon which is good, this story is one that will benefit from not being to long.
Now I have read a lot of story's over the years and can normally put together some kind of predictshon as to were the story in question is going but with this one I am stunk as to were it will go and to what end. I have only got 2 posipall endings and they are vague at beast, one is that things go tits up and vinyl is ripped to shreds in a boldly mess of gore or the other one is that things some how turn out right in the end.
All in all good work mate.
Why is everything good updating either now or soon? I mean Harmony Theory updated and now other interesting stuff that rarely updates starts too?
'Taint fair :breaburn:
(one of these days they'll update the ponymotes... One day)
How can you posibly still be asking us if this a good story, its down right sensational!!!
2-3 weeks... Meh, its better but you can do better however if you have a life unlike these vamponys its completly understandable and we can wait for more awsomness.
RIGHT EVERYPONY?!?!
I'm glad I waited this long to read this, I do hope to read more of this soon.
Looks like it's about to hit the fan!
stories
Greetings, I'm Anemptyshell...(Thus no vamp can suck me dry)
You know this story is quite an interesting find, both for the story and characterization. (Even if I do have one major complaint with the fact that even transformed a character does not lose their sense of self, like if they were a zombie and thus would have the opportunity to chose to fight for those who they care about rather than immediately join the vampony master race. Though I have this complaint in most media that does it, so it's by no stretch your fault at all.) It actually is more interesting because of what I thought of and up while reading it. For the entire time I was reading the first couple of chapters two scenarios burned in the back of my head that had varying degrees of relevance to the actual material. The first was imagining Robocop slaughtering this entire version of Equestria...I blame ERB, for their super fresh rhymes. The second was making a team of all the best vampire hunters from media and wondering how they would cope if forced together against this world. I also remember a Vampire move from a while back that seemed a lot like this, where the whole world became vampires except for a small human resistance. I do wonder if that movie had any impact on this story. The movie was Daybreakers if I remember correctly. Anywho, I am having fun reading this either way, I hope it continues to impress.
p.s. I am also a bit salty you killed Celestia, Best Pony deserved better. lol
Have a nice day (or night I guess...Vamp scum...jk...or not...I'll never tell) and a pleasant tomorrow.
One of the main reasons I like this story is because I have no idea how this is going to play out in the end, but I have a feeling it isn't going to be a happy ending is it?
6135436
My personal headcannon is that the vampires, are more like new beings, with the same memories as the old ones, different driving force and desires, but the memories mean that driving force is going to be very similar, but not quite the same, as the old self. The new being will always have the desire for blood, and to protect their race .. it is up to the memories / brain pattern how that desire shows
Luv it
Really good read so far, it's getting very exciting.
Hmm. Interesting...
This continues a trend: in every VinylTavia I've ever read, Octavia's mom was an absolute bitch. In this story, she's downright evil, even more so than most of the characters.
I see one remedy: Stake the vamp! I'm just itching to see her on the wrong end of holy water and garlic juice cocktails, silver daggers, and sharpened crosses.
Vinyl...you are boned. Maybe in ways more than one but..well...there's a reason I'm digging this grave...either you or her bitchy mom is going in this hole or someone owes me double time for my work. Damn vamps...and with that good day and I make my retreat into the woods. Leave the bits on the headstone I'll pick them up at noon.
P.S. This updated and I got no word of it in my feeds. Damn you iPhone!!!!!!
P.P.S. Hi Mavi
She tempted fate, and now its only a matter of time till she pays for it.
6129282 possible, say it with me, pos-si-ble, that is the word you were looking for.
Jebus there are a lot of comments. This is what I get for only replying either right after yall make them, or right before the release of a new chapter.
...
6128049 It took six whole chapters? Unacceptable; I must do better
6128251 It always is!
6128454 Porn? What is this porn of which you speak?
Also, what sorta details?
6128791 Yay! My thanks
6128839 I think I addressed this, possibly. I hope I did in a chapter. It's been a while. There is a reason, I'm sure
6129282 Well, what if things don't end happily but Vinyl isn't torn to shreds, hm?
As to length, it may or may not be moving towards the end.
6129447 Cause we talk between ourselves to make sure everything comes out simultaneously of course.
6131697 Having a life sucks man; you have like, social obligations to fill, and they want you to actual work at work. Like, what the hell right?
6132787 This is what I do; wait till there are a bunch of chapters, then read. It's legit.
6135149 Thank you friend. I'm fairly certain I fixed that but I'ma check now.
6135436 Ha ha funny pun; i get it :p
Ah, to your first concern, that will totally be addressed about 10 chapters later than it should have been. There's a reason though, kinda.
I have not watched such a movie. And who said Celly's dead? Maybe she's just resting, although you miss spelled Scootaloo there. Right before best pony.
6147061 Well, maybe. I think the ending will be... fun to write. Happy, sad, funny, tragic. Could be anything at this point.
6168220 You sir, are very close, but also very wrong (it's odd, I know, but you'll see down the road)
6176381 I love it too! That's why I write it
6179695 Yo, s'about to get crazy though.
6193083 Evil? I say, she's the prime example of a quality politician!
Or yes, very evil
6195233 I tried really hard to write something that sounded legit. It was so, so difficult.
6199616 Yo, I promise you one thing though; before the end of this story, someone's gonna need that grave. Won't say who.
6235187 Yes, pain and suffering! Let all the payment be made!
6284594 You made me laugh the first time I read that comment. It was amazing
6293431
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If I didn't know some authors actually plan their releases with other authors I'd be less inclined to believe you. Instead I'm fairly sure you don't chat with the all the people that updated during that week so I'll (try) to take that as a joke.
6293502 It's totally a joke
6293583 just checking. I didn't get much sleep that week, too many good fics kept updating.
Speaking of good fics updating, do we have an ETA? (Sorry that I'm being that guy)
6293623 How does 7 and a half minutes sound?
Don't ever say those last words!!!!
6293840 I WANT VINYL FOR PROTOTYPE, LOOK THE PROTOTYPE 2 STORY SUMMARY, AND TELL ME THE MAIN CHARACTERS NAME, DO IT!!! MAKE HER A VAMP THAT WILL FIGHT HER WAY TO THE TOP OF POWER, FOR VENGEANCE