3055754 So close, yet so far :3 3055834 Thank you, I do my best 3055871 *salute* Yes sir! 3055885 Neither can I; the next one is gonna be awesome~ I hope... 3055987 I shall! And thank you 3056009 Yes? 3056148 Oh you, I hope you're not thinking what I think you're thinking
No Vinyl, she's going to chain you up there until you're no longer impaired. Quick question, with all the bleach that got into the wound, shouldn't it have been sterile?
3056827 Of course I like you; and you're welcome 3057464 It's already half done 3058644 Did you like it? :3 3058828 Cause I like making people suffer 3060284 Seeing as it's a FP PoV, I think you're not the only one 3060478 She's just that unlucky, ain't she? but a break could be coming soon, maybe~ 3062872 I shall! And you got it 3062877 Not necessarily. It all depends on how it entered, when the infection began, and the magic of plot requirements. 3062967 Tee hee, I try my best :3 Wait, what do you mean "not another one"? 3065795 Who knows? Maybe a future chapter will reveal this~ 3066179 Questions? Feel free to ask them, if you want. 3076362 I'm trying! I promise! Stupid first year of university... 3077585 That could be taken in a number of ways... Care to enlighten me a bit?
3083978 Not quite sure what you mean either, but my "I shall" was for write faster, my "and you got it" was for the pet play, and the next chapter is half written already.
3086215 Much, T.Y. for the edit. and what I meant by bloody was... well gory and by messy i meant hook up for a semi-happy clop ending 3056148 said it best.
Very interesting read. I gotta say that I was doubting the quality of this when I saw it on a browse through the archives, but it has really captured my attention.
I need this updated like, on Monday so i have something good to come home to. It's good, all and all. keep at the good pace and i might just give you a free lapdance... Forward unto the Dawn, Gareth T. Broken.
I don't mean to be pushy but wheres the up date? again I don't mean to be pushy, its just none of the 20+ story's I'm watching have been up dated in the past 15 days or so.
3158168 Mav is probably dealing with some other stuff right now IRL. Let's give him some time, he might make this next update even better the longer we wait. That or maybe he's making a bunch of chapters and mass releasing them at once.
3130310 Go out and find some newer fics. That's what I usually do. If you want, you can look at my favorites list for some fairly decent/very good material to hold you over until the next update for this one. I think there's even a spider-pony in there somewhere.
This is a lot more interesting than I first thought it would be. I really like the dynamic the two are having right now. Actually I liked how they interact with each other from the very start. It makes for a interesting read. I do hope you update soon I can't stand this cliffhanger! *Favorite!*
So I've decided that periodically I shall be posting on this story for conspiracies about you being dead because I have nothing better to do with my life.
Well without further delay, allow me to get started.
Omigosh he's dead and this story will never update. Oh the most tragic of days!
To all of you, I must appologise for the giant down-time between chapters. I swear, I didn't mean to put it off this long, but school's not been easy. I don't know what pace I'll be able to manage, so I won't promise anything. That being said, I AM working on it again now that I finished that one-shot, so hopefully it'll be done soon-ish. Just so you all know, I got it about half-finished so far.
3087808 Thank you :3 3090506 Sorry, looks like I killed my pace 31303103158168 I'm sorry about all the procrastination; the trip from highschool to university is not without it's bumps 3159254 Yeah, I really wish it were something like that. Call it more of a big break to help me sort things out a bit. 3275915 Again, sorry for the huge wait 3306016 Oh you; being eaten is so enjoyable And sorry to you as well. For the wait that is 33071003341815 Sowwy! 3390969 xD, let's not be crazy now 3422134 Sorry for the wait 3422938 I will! I promise 3432677 Gosh darn it, so adorable...
3446372 Hey no rush, I am happy to hear the story is not dead. I happily await what ever path you take it. I do not know why but despite tavi being a sex feind she also seems a lil insane, then again scratchie don't seem that stable herself
Hey hey don't worry about it. I completely understand already being in college myself, with a difficult Course to boot. I just barely manage to update my own story on FanFiction.net every month or two, I'm still glad that there are still people happily following my story, as I'm sure there are still people following this (Like me!).
A bit of advice, every night after classes open your laptop/computer and try to write, even just a little bit, a couple of sentences even if you're tired. It helps with finding that invisible writing-bug and if it's there you'll find the energy to write more, but if it's not then you'll at least have gotten something done, even if it's just a little bit. It helps a lot, and is a good stress reliever once you get into the zone, trust me.
3446372 Hey take your time and remember it's quality over quantity. We'll still be here when you update next and no one is going to give up on a story this good for just a little bit of a longer wait. Glad you tagged me in your last message, because today is when I would've posted my next comment about you being dead. Anyways keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter whenever it may be.
Request for comments denied.
Wait, damn it.
Anyway, another day, another good chapter.
Still hooked on this story, which is turning out to be a work of art in and of itself. Keep it up.
If you insist: Write faster!
loving this fic. cant wait to see how the next chapter plays on this one.
keep 'em coming, i really like this story :)
Yes.
She's gonna eat you alright.
3055754 So close, yet so far :3
3055834 Thank you, I do my best
3055871 *salute* Yes sir!
3055885 Neither can I; the next one is gonna be awesome~
I hope...
3055987 I shall! And thank you
3056009 Yes?
3056148 Oh you, I hope you're not thinking what I think you're thinking
3056169
I have no idea what you're talking about.
YAY, I knew you liked me. HURRAY FOR A NEW CHAPTER!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
THANK YOU FOR THE NEW CHAPTER!
Sad thing is, i have to wait until tomorrow to read it
EDIT: I CAN READ IT NOW! :DDDDDDD
damn it ! why do you end here ?!!!!!!! more please ! such a cool story :)
3056169 Yes. I like dis new chapter.
Is it weird to wish to be in vinyl's place or at least in this story.
Jesus, Vinyl just can't catch a break.....
Poor Pony.
Here's your comment, now... WRITE FASTER I TELLS YOU.
If this is how it ends you better make it a bloody one, if not well... make it messy.
3060284
No I want to be in her place too, its called pet play.
No Vinyl, she's going to chain you up there until you're no longer impaired.
Quick question, with all the bleach that got into the wound, shouldn't it have been sterile?
When I found this. At first I was like "Not another one"
Then I was all like "I CANT STOP!" you've got a good imagination I'll give you that.
Only one problem... I read it all in one night and I have to WAIT! Why did I have to read it all in one night!
Anyways I look forward to the next one... when it comes.
so now Octavia knows and she is hurt but is this because this is more work for her or because Vinyl didn't trust her to tell her something was wrong
I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Got so many questions and.. gargh the anticipation is killing me
But I sure hope nothing is gonna happen to poor Vinyl... Octi you are different..
MOOOOOAAAAARRRRRRR!!!!!! .....please?.
Some pretty interesting stuff...
3056827 Of course I like you; and you're welcome
3057464 It's already half done
3058644 Did you like it? :3
3058828 Cause I like making people suffer
3060284 Seeing as it's a FP PoV, I think you're not the only one
3060478 She's just that unlucky, ain't she? but a break could be coming soon, maybe~
3062872 I shall! And you got it
3062877 Not necessarily. It all depends on how it entered, when the infection began, and the magic of plot requirements.
3062967 Tee hee, I try my best :3
Wait, what do you mean "not another one"?
3065795 Who knows? Maybe a future chapter will reveal this~
3066179 Questions? Feel free to ask them, if you want.
3076362 I'm trying! I promise! Stupid first year of university...
3077585 That could be taken in a number of ways... Care to enlighten me a bit?
3077631
Got questions what will happen next xD Can't ask that
3077631 your an evil genius .-.
3077631 I'm not sure you got my meaning but ok.
and what do you mean its half done, like really?
3083978 Not quite sure what you mean either, but my "I shall" was for write faster, my "and you got it" was for the pet play, and the next chapter is half written already.
3084238 I'm having a little trouble reading your last comment, are you on your phone with auto-correct?
3084722 Better?
3086215 Much, T.Y. for the edit. and what I meant by bloody was... well gory and by messy i meant hook up for a
semi-happy clop ending 3056148 said it best.
Very interesting read. I gotta say that I was doubting the quality of this when I saw it on a browse through the archives, but it has really captured my attention.
I need this updated like, on Monday so i have something good to come home to. It's good, all and all. keep at the good pace and i might just give you a free lapdance... Forward unto the Dawn, Gareth T. Broken.
I don't mean to be pushy but wheres the up date? again I don't mean to be pushy,
its just none of the 20+ story's I'm watching have been up dated in the past 15 days or so.
when do you think the next chapter will come out?
3158168
Mav is probably dealing with some other stuff right now IRL. Let's give him some time, he might make this next update even better the longer we wait. That or maybe he's making a bunch of chapters and mass releasing them at once.
3130310
Go out and find some newer fics. That's what I usually do. If you want, you can look at my favorites list for some fairly decent/very good material to hold you over until the next update for this one. I think there's even a spider-pony in there somewhere.
3159254
Spider-pony? I HATE! spiders, I'll go find it thanks.
This is a lot more interesting than I first thought it would be. I really like the dynamic the two are having right now. Actually I liked how they interact with each other from the very start. It makes for a interesting read. I do hope you update soon I can't stand this cliffhanger!
*Favorite!*
This story is awesome and everything is going well. I hope there isn't a bad ending like Vinyl getting eaten. That would make me rage.
THERE NOW WRITE FASTER!... Please?
update please...I am begging you
MOAR...NOW!!!!!!
...please?
So I've decided that periodically I shall be posting on this story for conspiracies about you being dead because I have nothing better to do with my life.
Well without further delay, allow me to get started.
Omigosh he's dead and this story will never update. Oh the most tragic of days!
This fic is amazing! I has to know what happens next!
Please write more of this amazing story.
To all of you, I must appologise for the giant down-time between chapters. I swear, I didn't mean to put it off this long, but school's not been easy. I don't know what pace I'll be able to manage, so I won't promise anything. That being said, I AM working on it again now that I finished that one-shot, so hopefully it'll be done soon-ish.
Just so you all know, I got it about half-finished so far.
3087808 Thank you :3
3090506 Sorry, looks like I killed my pace
3130310 3158168 I'm sorry about all the procrastination; the trip from highschool to university is not without it's bumps
3159254 Yeah, I really wish it were something like that. Call it more of a big break to help me sort things out a bit.
3275915 Again, sorry for the huge wait
3306016 Oh you; being eaten is so enjoyable
And sorry to you as well. For the wait that is
3307100 3341815 Sowwy!
3390969 xD, let's not be crazy now
3422134 Sorry for the wait
3422938 I will! I promise
3432677 Gosh darn it, so adorable...
3446372
Hey no rush, I am happy to hear the story is not dead. I happily await what ever path you take it.
I do not know why but despite tavi being a sex feind she also seems a lil insane, then again scratchie don't seem that stable herself
3446372
Agreed, reading what Apuppy120 wrote makes me want to snuggle with the filly Twi.
3446372
Hey hey don't worry about it. I completely understand already being in college myself, with a difficult Course to boot. I just barely manage to update my own story on FanFiction.net every month or two, I'm still glad that there are still people happily following my story, as I'm sure there are still people following this (Like me!).
A bit of advice, every night after classes open your laptop/computer and try to write, even just a little bit, a couple of sentences even if you're tired. It helps with finding that invisible writing-bug and if it's there you'll find the energy to write more, but if it's not then you'll at least have gotten something done, even if it's just a little bit. It helps a lot, and is a good stress reliever once you get into the zone, trust me.
Also, can't wait for the next chapter!!
3446372
Hey take your time and remember it's quality over quantity. We'll still be here when you update next and no one is going to give up on a story this good for just a little bit of a longer wait.
Glad you tagged me in your last message, because today is when I would've posted my next comment about you being dead.
Anyways keep up the great work and I look forward to the next chapter whenever it may be.
3446372
Hey man, school's kind of important. No rush is really needed.