Place-holder first comment. I'll reply to everyone a little later. I know I usually do it beforehand but I'm not in the right state of mind for it right now. I hope you liked the chapter, please feel free to leave me comments; I do so love comments.
72713067271156 Yes, and right now. Or an hour or so ago. 7271186 Thank you for understanding. You did bring up a good point when you mentioned the anger that sorta came out of nowhere, so I added some clarification in the author's notes of the new chapter. Thank you for that 7272467 I won't :3 7272488 I try to avoid cheesy author co-outs, although this chapter has one right at the start. 7281947 And again now 7296972 It certainly won't 7297222 Here you go~ 7330692 Wait, they're not a couple? Isn't this how couples always act? Hateful and using each other? 7390110 Naw, will a blood drinking scene do? 7390119 :c I did more than one last year too. I did like 3! But I do love you guys; probably why I keep coming back :p 7390179 I know right? That scene has been stuck in my head ever since one of editors suggested a scene where Vinyl asks Octavia if she misses being alive. I'm so glad I finally got to use it.
7390254 fine.... But I will still stand strong when I say that the sex scene should be steamy. And maybe. maybe blood play. But not much. Also maybe after that vinyl gets turned into a vampony
Getting to some darkness about Octy's past. I love it. Octavia has now gone from a somewhat likeable bitch to a much more likeable...well....she's still kind of a bitch but one you could see hanging out with in a bar a few nights a week.
Well now, that's the big question isn't it. Whether or not to accept the change.
I think I'd get tired of it honestly. The hiding, the secrecy... Given Vinyl's present predicament I'd certainly give it serious thought at this stage. I can certainly think of many pros to it.
Plus as good ol' Jack said in Vampire: The Masquerade. "A chance at immortality's not a bad deal."
Personally never cared for immortality myself, but I'm certainly down for having some say in the matter.
Yay update! Seems short this time... Or I'm crazy... Either way, I love it! Also I'm starting to wish Octavia would stop referring to her as food... I understand that she is only joking but she clearly doesn't understand how that makes Vinyl feel. Then again I noticed that she gets all "playful" when she is about to get her "treat"... Hmm thinking about it more makes it not bother me as much now...
Eh who cares? I just can't wait for the next chapter!
Eh glad to see the writing seems to be improving. In the sense that it started out very inconsistently and interactions seemed force, now they are almost natural
You sir kept me up from 1am-5am, British time, managed to finish catching up the three chapters I had to leave last night. I love this fic. I stray away from writing first person as I never feel I'd be able to get it right. But I love reading amazing fics even in first person. I dearly hope this fic continues as I know I'd love to see more. To that end I wish you luck both here and in life. I'll be joining those waiting with baited breath, hopeful for more of your work.
Hey! thought you should know the big news! recently I decided to choose the top 25 stories from my fav list. my list was over 370 stories.....O_O.....damn. well it was a painful experience, being so many awesome stories I've come to love not able to make the top 25. but in the end I was able to pick my top 25. So it brings me great joy to tell you this story made my Top 25! congratulations! ^_^
Quietly slides in from a dust covered broom closet, opened for the first time in ages. Sooooooo, when's we getting a new chapter? I understand you may be busy, and it's been like... What, a year? But this was some based af shit.
I must say, it is a rare ocurance for me to be so terribly interested in a fic to the point to where I almost want to cry now that I've finished reading the latest chapter.
Also, very good job with grammatical consistency. I found like, what? Maybe 4 errors total, and they were so small that the average reader would never have noticed.
I absolutely love how you didn't simply "jump the shark" with Vinyl and Octavia's relationship like most fics do, but instead took the time to (kinda?) subtly ease into their relationship over time, even if it was a rather short period of time going by the time progression in the fic. What I like the most though (other than it being a uniquely awsome spin on Vamponies) is how the characters were mostly consistent with their personalities.
Vinyl suffered a very, very, small shift in her personality, mostly in the form of speech pattern changes. Octavia, however, suffered a rather subtle complete 180 on her dynamics. She has suffered personality changes, slight emotional response changes, speech changes, took on a new ability to form a relationship with Vinyl, and has developed the ability to show compassion twoards her meal. She also managed to regain my respect, because I really wanted to kick her in the face at the very beginning.
Needless to say, judging by this excessively long comment, I'm dying to see what shall happen next.
Place-holder first comment. I'll reply to everyone a little later. I know I usually do it beforehand but I'm not in the right state of mind for it right now. I hope you liked the chapter, please feel free to leave me comments; I do so love comments.
Seems fun. I likey. Now give us the sex..
Two updates in one year?
Latest update right as I buy my expensive af in-flight Internet?
Mav you must love us so!
I litteraly jumped around my room like a monkey when I saw that the story had updated.
I have to admit, Vinyl has some incredible willpower. I would just let myself be converted. It would save up a lot of trouble.
Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait (yes I can) to see more.
7390203 Just had my first ever shouting match with my mother. It wasn't pretty
7271306 7271156 Yes, and right now. Or an hour or so ago.
7271186 Thank you for understanding. You did bring up a good point when you mentioned the anger that sorta came out of nowhere, so I added some clarification in the author's notes of the new chapter. Thank you for that
7272467 I won't :3
7272488 I try to avoid cheesy author co-outs, although this chapter has one right at the start.
7281947 And again now
7296972 It certainly won't
7297222 Here you go~
7330692 Wait, they're not a couple? Isn't this how couples always act? Hateful and using each other?
7390110 Naw, will a blood drinking scene do?
7390119 :c I did more than one last year too. I did like 3! But I do love you guys; probably why I keep coming back :p
7390179 I know right? That scene has been stuck in my head ever since one of editors suggested a scene where Vinyl asks Octavia if she misses being alive. I'm so glad I finally got to use it.
7390254 fine.... But I will still stand strong when I say that the sex scene should be steamy. And maybe. maybe blood play. But not much. Also maybe after that vinyl gets turned into a vampony
7390261 A sad ending indeed if that were to be the case...
7390539 not all stories end happy
7390559 Unfortunately
These chapters always make me cry... Because they end...
Always glad to see this story update.
Woo new chapter!
Well, this was fun, see you next time on... THE UNCONVERTED daddaaaaddadaadadadaaaadadududududududududadaaAAAaaAaAaahhhhhhh~
Great chapter.
Getting to some darkness about Octy's past. I love it. Octavia has now gone from a somewhat likeable bitch to a much more likeable...well....she's still kind of a bitch but one you could see hanging out with in a bar a few nights a week.
Another great chapter Mavi!
I love this story!!!
Well
That escalated quickly
Well now, that's the big question isn't it. Whether or not to accept the change.
I think I'd get tired of it honestly. The hiding, the secrecy...
Given Vinyl's present predicament I'd certainly give it serious thought at this stage. I can certainly think of many pros to it.
Plus as good ol' Jack said in Vampire: The Masquerade. "A chance at immortality's not a bad deal."
Personally never cared for immortality myself, but I'm certainly down for having some say in the matter.
Yay update! Seems short this time... Or I'm crazy... Either way, I love it!
Also I'm starting to wish Octavia would stop referring to her as food... I understand that she is only joking but she clearly doesn't understand how that makes Vinyl feel. Then again I noticed that she gets all "playful" when she is about to get her "treat"... Hmm thinking about it more makes it not bother me as much now...
Eh who cares? I just can't wait for the next chapter!
Eh glad to see the writing seems to be improving. In the sense that it started out very inconsistently and interactions seemed force, now they are almost natural
This is very good! Do you know when you are going to finish it?
7411293
Yeah I did a double take and reread that a dozen times to make sure I wasn't seeing things. I even checked the story's tags...
7272037 lol i wonder how hard it would be for a human aka me to survive the vamponies
not jut me like any of us
So what happened in the end, has vinyl been eaten or converted or something else?
7425675 Pretty much. I hope we get an explanation at some point that actually justifies her total betrayal of everyone who cared about her.
I really hope this story gets finished
i joined this website because i love your story The unconverted one i had to tell you :)
i hope vinyl becomes a vampony at some point :)
When story update?
Interesting...
Sounds like Vinyl might even consider becoming a vampire...
I'm loving this! Please continue soon!
i´m loving this book can´t for next chapter
You sir kept me up from 1am-5am, British time, managed to finish catching up the three chapters I had to leave last night. I love this fic. I stray away from writing first person as I never feel I'd be able to get it right. But I love reading amazing fics even in first person. I dearly hope this fic continues as I know I'd love to see more. To that end I wish you luck both here and in life. I'll be joining those waiting with baited breath, hopeful for more of your work.
I am still hoping for an update soon this fic is what keeps me checking the site each day.
Please don't tell me this is a dead fic. This was my favorite
Continue Please!
This is an incredible fic. I see that there are longer breaks so i know it may come back around, but have a fav for the fun.
Oh I sincerely hope this gets updated soon!
wish I could find the story "The Hunt"
FINISH IT!!!
Will this story being updating anytime soon?
Hey! thought you should know the big news! recently I decided to choose the top 25 stories from my fav list. my list was over 370 stories.....O_O.....damn. well it was a painful experience, being so many awesome stories I've come to love not able to make the top 25. but in the end I was able to pick my top 25. So it brings me great joy to tell you this story made my Top 25! congratulations! ^_^
When next AWESOME update?
What happened to this story?
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What happened to him or her?
8268729
I hope really hard! xd
Quietly slides in from a dust covered broom closet, opened for the first time in ages.
Sooooooo, when's we getting a new chapter? I understand you may be busy, and it's been like... What, a year? But this was some based af shit.
I must say, it is a rare ocurance for me to be so terribly interested in a fic to the point to where I almost want to cry now that I've finished reading the latest chapter.
Also, very good job with grammatical consistency. I found like, what? Maybe 4 errors total, and they were so small that the average reader would never have noticed.
I absolutely love how you didn't simply "jump the shark" with Vinyl and Octavia's relationship like most fics do, but instead took the time to (kinda?) subtly ease into their relationship over time, even if it was a rather short period of time going by the time progression in the fic.
What I like the most though (other than it being a uniquely awsome spin on Vamponies) is how the characters were mostly consistent with their personalities.
Vinyl suffered a very, very, small shift in her personality, mostly in the form of speech pattern changes.
Octavia, however, suffered a rather subtle complete 180 on her dynamics. She has suffered personality changes, slight emotional response changes, speech changes, took on a new ability to form a relationship with Vinyl, and has developed the ability to show compassion twoards her meal. She also managed to regain my respect, because I really wanted to kick her in the face at the very beginning.
Needless to say, judging by this excessively long comment, I'm dying to see what shall happen next.