‘Game over, I’m dead by next weekend? No! There has to be a cure.’
One question I have continuously waited for; when is Vinyl going to ask Octavia what she remembers, and thinks, of her old life. If she actually remembers it, then there's a chance that Vinyl might willingly become a vampire. And that is, honestly, something I want to see happen. So many Vampire Stories go with the *X becomes bitten* "Am I vampire now?" "No, a simply bite won't turn you."
I really hope that Vinyl will willingly turn... It would be a nice change of pace. It could, possibly, involve her trying to cling to her Ponydom?
4693736 You know honestly I was thinking the complete opposite. Instead of Vinyl wanting to become a vampony to be with Octavia, I wonder what it would be like if Tavi became a pony again so she could be with Vinyl. It's something I rarely see.
Well now...either she had a honest to goodness conversation with the solar diarch, or she was briefly nuts...future chapters might shed some light on all of this I hope. Though it is still somewhat sad that as a species ponies are done for regardless of that answer.
Luna better have some sort of explanation of her own.
4693399 I wish I had a witty image to respond with. Instead, I hope you won't mind a dead princess 4693412 Oh yay! I love re-reading too 4693632 Wait for it, it'll come later. 4693761 Oh? I'm glad you like my work! but to be fair, Octaiva is a sexual fiend in the universe, so it's hardly fair 4693796 Is it? I can't remember well; I really should re-read my own stuff. 4693897 I'm sure it'll clear later :3 4694205 Wat? 4694460 WELL, she sure as hell wouldn't shout "Not another Vampony" 4694556 Oh she's totally all over that troubled treble~ 4694858 I know right? I love that feeling too. 4694918 Hmmm, I don't rightly know :D Even though I do 4693736 Oh, you're waiting for that eh? Well, you're in luck; it's so coming, and I've been planning this out since the start. 4693786 Oh boy... I think I might as well. Probably. If only because cartoon ponies vs real humans. 4693806 Yes, he does want this, and he makes a fair point; I haven't seen it either, that I can remember.
4696159 Sorry about that :c I'm a bad author, keeping my readers waiting like that. 4696522 Ohhh, got it. That would be quite the amazing plot twist wouldn't it? I Wish I'd thought of that... 4696775 I am; I've been thinking about it ever since someone mentioned how weird it would be for all the Vamponies to suddenly turn evil and attack their friends and family. I always knew what it was inside, I just didn't write it in.
4697420 Oh yeah, for sure. In fact, I plan to have a big part of the next chapter or the one after dedicated to explaining more about Octavia and Vamponies. Might even like, take questions from the audience and answer them in the chapter.
4697417 I could probably throw more theories your way. Besides, nobody says mother has to be biological for vampires, I'm sure that with the glorious vampire revolution there were many adoptions by vamponies who killed a parent only to find a child... then guiltily converted and adopted said child.
4699635 Hmmm, you might be on to something with that theory Just maybe. I'm sure you'll enjoy the next chapter or two. 4698782 Well, I'ma assume we be meeting Octavia's dreaded mother figure. 4698083 Never die! And thank you; I'm so eager for the next one.
Yay thx for updatimg! Im looking forward for the vinyl vs octy's mother conflict. And i hope vinyl gets to express her "bi courios" feelings for octavia sometime ^^ Keep up the good work, its amazing :)
4702254 i think it is very hard to write for... the dreariest of characters such as octavia's mother. euguehugeh. such as how they behave or what they say. bleh. good luck
4693736 Btw, what I meant was that we'll be talking to Octavia about her old life. Not necessarily that Vinyl will change. I just realised the possible confusion I may have caused. My bad
4721187 The "trope" (or very common occurrence) with TaviScratch fics (vampire ones) is that it's only ever one of them that's a vampire, and the other one always gets bitten by never Turns because something more is needed for that to happen.
Still just as awesome as the rest of the story, glad to see your still writing it. Only a few spelling errors as well, all of which are minor at worse, so thank you, and hope to see more in the future.
With an agony inducing crawl, I pulled myself forward, towards the biggest, toughest, most powerful obstacle that I had ever faced down in my life! The https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nXv28fd46wM .
So I'm going to admit I did start reading this for the clop (Equestia After Dark featured it) but I got so roped into the story I just forgot about that. I absolutely love it and hope to see lots of it in the near future. Keep it up!
Geez, alot of us want another chapter for the fact that this story is great! This story does sound familiar to me... does it relate to anything? So I may look it up and get into it????
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Edit: assets0.ordienetworks.com/images/GifGuide/clapping/citizen_cane.gif good chapter
One question I have continuously waited for; when is Vinyl going to ask Octavia what she remembers, and thinks, of her old life. If she actually remembers it, then there's a chance that Vinyl might willingly become a vampire. And that is, honestly, something I want to see happen. So many Vampire Stories go with the *X becomes bitten* "Am I vampire now?" "No, a simply bite won't turn you."
I really hope that Vinyl will willingly turn... It would be a nice change of pace. It could, possibly, involve her trying to cling to her Ponydom?
4693736 You know honestly I was thinking the complete opposite. Instead of Vinyl wanting to become a vampony to be with Octavia, I wonder what it would be like if Tavi became a pony again so she could be with Vinyl. It's something I rarely see.
Hi Luna, I was expecting you to be Rarity.
I can just think of what vinyl would think if she meet a Thestral:
Not another vampony
I am NOT a bucken vampony! man, you do not know your races do you? I am Thestral or as you would call me a Bat pony.
...What?
Nice chapter!
woo its out!!!!
vinyl is falling for octavia... even is shes want to admit it or not.
Woo new chapter!
Well now...either she had a honest to goodness conversation with the solar diarch, or she was briefly nuts...future chapters might shed some light on all of this I hope. Though it is still somewhat sad that as a species ponies are done for regardless of that answer.
Luna better have some sort of explanation of her own.
Why in the world did I just hear that last line in Molly Weasly's voice from Harry Potter?
4695267 Omg yes, I love that idea. That is now Octavia's mom's voice, except harsher, like Delores Umbredge's cold in Molly's voice.
4695303
You're welcome Now we have a definite voice to imagine for Octavia's mom.
4693399 I wish I had a witty image to respond with. Instead, I hope you won't mind a dead princess
4693412 Oh yay! I love re-reading too
4693632 Wait for it, it'll come later.
4693761 Oh? I'm glad you like my work! but to be fair, Octaiva is a sexual fiend in the universe, so it's hardly fair
4693796 Is it? I can't remember well; I really should re-read my own stuff.
4693897 I'm sure it'll clear later :3
4694205 Wat?
4694460 WELL, she sure as hell wouldn't shout "Not another Vampony"
4694556 Oh she's totally all over that troubled treble~
4694858 I know right? I love that feeling too.
4694918 Hmmm, I don't rightly know :D Even though I do
4693736 Oh, you're waiting for that eh? Well, you're in luck; it's so coming, and I've been planning this out since the start.
4693786 Oh boy... I think I might as well. Probably. If only because cartoon ponies vs real humans.
4693806 Yes, he does want this, and he makes a fair point; I haven't seen it either, that I can remember.
4695419 it was more of a mutter but still. nice job with the so far
4695419
And that's when your own avatar picture comes into play......well-played.
Now the waiting game begins anew.
4695419 No? Oh well, I was expecting that to be the Royal Canterlot Voice. Thus making "mom" Luna.
Rarity was who I was guessing the "mom" was, just based on her being so high class and so... well prude'ish for a vampire.
I like having theories about the fics I follow. Harmony Theory doesn't update enough...
4695419
I have a feeling that you are being sarcastic... I hope you are telling The truth
4696159 Sorry about that :c I'm a bad author, keeping my readers waiting like that.
4696522 Ohhh, got it. That would be quite the amazing plot twist wouldn't it? I Wish I'd thought of that...
4696775 I am; I've been thinking about it ever since someone mentioned how weird it would be for all the Vamponies to suddenly turn evil and attack their friends and family. I always knew what it was inside, I just didn't write it in.
4697417
But I assume we're going to see more of it?
4697420 Oh yeah, for sure. In fact, I plan to have a big part of the next chapter or the one after dedicated to explaining more about Octavia and Vamponies. Might even like, take questions from the audience and answer them in the chapter.
It's good to know that this story is not yet dead.
*After reading*
Good chapter, and nice lead up for the next one. Now we know the next chapter will be exciting.
Oh noes! What's gonna happen?
4695419 *fangirling*! ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!
4697417 I could probably throw more theories your way. Besides, nobody says mother has to be biological for vampires, I'm sure that with the glorious vampire revolution there were many adoptions by vamponies who killed a parent only to find a child... then guiltily converted and adopted said child.
4699635 Hmmm, you might be on to something with that theory Just maybe. I'm sure you'll enjoy the next chapter or two.
4698782 Well, I'ma assume we be meeting Octavia's dreaded mother figure.
4698083 Never die! And thank you; I'm so eager for the next one.
You are a very skilled writer, you are in my top 2 on the cite
4701114 I enjoy all the chapters, why would the next couple be any different?
4673292
Not really that I don't like it, it's just sorta strange.
but woo! update!
two days late because fimfic didn't notify me that this updated
Yay thx for updatimg!
Im looking forward for the vinyl vs octy's mother conflict.
And i hope vinyl gets to express her "bi courios" feelings for octavia sometime ^^
Keep up the good work, its amazing :)
4702254
i think it is very hard to write for... the dreariest of characters such as octavia's mother. euguehugeh. such as how they behave or what they say. bleh. good luck
4705223 I write all kinds of crap, I even posted some of it. What he writes isn't crap, it'll be great as long as we believe in him.
4705236
wana read true crap... read my story. i swear to god i have no idea how people LIKE IT. ITS HORRIBLE!!!
4705340 Dude my one fic got a nod from Twilight's library... nobody even told me, I just noticed recently
*applauds* I hate vampire stories yet you managed to make me read one, now im updated...loving it so far
... kinda hoping that bit with Celestia wasn't just her fever dream.
4693736 Btw, what I meant was that we'll be talking to Octavia about her old life. Not necessarily that Vinyl will change. I just realised the possible confusion I may have caused. My bad
4715086
Yeah, I thought it was that... I just hope you actually do turn her at some point. At least consider breaking that bloody trope xD
4715103 Bloody trope? What do you mean bloody trope?
4721187
The "trope" (or very common occurrence) with TaviScratch fics (vampire ones) is that it's only ever one of them that's a vampire, and the other one always gets bitten by never Turns because something more is needed for that to happen.
Still just as awesome as the rest of the story, glad to see your still writing it. Only a few spelling errors as well, all of which are minor at worse, so thank you, and hope to see more in the future.
Another incomplete story i have to keep my eye on...
Pretty good. I like it. Biggest issue is the spelling...
that is not how you youtube
So I'm going to admit I did start reading this for the clop (Equestia After Dark featured it) but I got so roped into the story I just forgot about that. I absolutely love it and hope to see lots of it in the near future. Keep it up!
Ohhhh...this got good im really looking forward to the next update. But one thing
Is the princess alive?
now to wait for the next chapter, any idea when that might be? "pulls out knife"
Please don't let this go on hiatus again; it's an amazing story and I can't wait to read more.
Reading this made me go check out The Hunt series. which I am now in love with
Geez, alot of us want another chapter for the fact that this story is great! This story does sound familiar to me... does it relate to anything? So I may look it up and get into it????
Eagerly awaiting this next chapter...love this story and I hope my theories are correct here...but only time will tell....keep up the work Mavi
This cliffhanger is killing me... wtb update!