4729931 Thank you, I'm glad it seems to be improving. I'm a year out of practice, so we'll see just how well this new one turns out 4796327 you know it! 47990824799819 I'm glad to hear it's got you interested 4827328 Maybe, maybe not. There was that odd dream though; maybe they're not alone 4831437 I really wish I could understand where all these mistakes are. Hopefully earlier on 4835204 I do hope I fixed that... Oh good, I remembered to 4874756 I was hoping it would have that effect; clop without clop 4883181 Which one? 49002794904356 Well, considering I seemed to have survived the attacks, let's say right now? 491432650048095172730525161453196705351125 Sorry friends, seems I let that happen eh? A whole year, it still amazes me how fast time flies 4965041 Oh it's so good, I loved it, although as you can see, I might not have been a big fan of that twist near the end 5005275 Oh you, I'll have to go and read over that; it's been so long since I thought about this story 5044034 Cliffhanger? I don't know what you mean 5466103 I've never heard it yet; might have to look into it now 5466739 I think you might wanna make that comment work properly :p 5571345 No no, good sir, we are in a world of magic now! There is no "science" here! 5720082 Funny, I just started re-reading that series. Again. For the 7th time. 572040957548055768084581695658597545964214 : D I did! 5728536 Well, maybe not godworthy; But I'm not one to be humble! God it is!
Obviously the question of celestia being alive is still there.
The theory i have is that celestia is, in fact, dead, but vinyl Had that dream because she still has the hope of her being alive and coming to save them, though she 'knows' the truth.
if princess celestia were still alive, I would imagine she would have been able to do something by now in order to fight back. I'm sure there's a good possibility you will suprise us all with some good facts on her being alive, but with what I've read, I can't point to anything that would suggest the opposite.
Well. . . I haven't seen this in my notifications for a while. It's good to have you back. This was one of the first OctaScratch stories I've read on FImfic and I'm glad to see that it's not dead.
HOLY CRAP Octavia's mom is a BITCH! Damn, I can't imagine having to live with someone like that and not go bat-shit crazy.
I'm so glad this updated i was just telling a friend about it and how good. it was and how i was sad it was dead. but behold life has been brought back into it. Or is it undead?
i am................. well i don't know what to say about this fic. it is well whiten, has in depth characters, an interesting world and plot forcis and an some what expand world history that keeps giving more as you get in to the think of this fic.
now i am not ashamed to admit this but when i first sore this fic i thorte "this will be just a another twilight ripoff fanfic" then i looked at the plot suspicious and decided to reed the prologue then i decided to reed the rest and now after i have cout up i am happy to say that i was totle fucking woring i that i like no love this fic.
you Sr or madam (what ever your gender is) have ernde a pat on the head and a gloud star
Edit: i spent my hole Saturday in grost in this fic. now that is what i call a Saturday well spent.
60332806033283 Yeah, sorry about that I've been having a rough time recently 6033312 Hope it lives up to your standards : 3 6033361 Psh; I wasn't dead, just invisible 6033496 About that, I'll be making a blog post to inform people about what's going on with me 6033549 Woah; who said it would end? What if it goes on and on and on forevermore? J/k, I don't think that'll happen; I honestly have no clue how I Want it to end at all 6033625 Celestia is interesting; I won't really say much cause I'm honestly not sure myself. But I'm hoping to use her in the future 6033653 Take your time, I'm not in any rush 6033667 Oh well gosh, I don't know if I can manage that, but I certainly liked it. It's very inspired from another story 6033938 No tricks, only words 6034084 Why thank you, I like it too 6034090 Vamponies arn't alive, silly~. Or maybe they are... 6034103 I'ma take that as a compliment 6034242 I hope it lasts this time around 6034314 Yay Comment! :P 6034315 I can't party to hard; body's not up to scratch 6034491 Very agreed, I am not known for my speed or consistency 6034756 It will take more then a brick wall to stop this train 6035212 Fixed, thank you! 60354616038045 Oh she's a bat outta hell, but then, who wouldn't be if their son died? 6036437 I felt there was a fair amount of that in this chapter 6039822 Undead... I like the sound of that 6042473 Now now, settle down; reading is meant to be done in a calm, quiet environment 6044119 Oh but I like wolfies, they're soft and fun to pet! 6047950 That's not quite un-true; they do show supreme bursts of physical prowess. But not just when they're angry 6043245 Why thank you! I did try to make this story as unique as possible, despite it's inspiration. Still, I really like how it's developed so far. I'm glad you like it
6051287 But still, what she's doing, and from what we know from it taking A LOT to bring out physical signs of emotions in vamponies, it's not just obsessive it's down right psychotic.
.... When i saw a update on This story. In my feed. I started smiling. ITS FINALY BACK HOLY BUCK ITS BEEN A LONG TIME! Where were you marv? Its been so long!
So happy this you are well and writing once again!
Checked back on the story as usual every few weeks or so since the last chapter and couldn't believe it seeing a new chapter uploaded. I hope you can get back into making these because your story is great.
6051298 I suppose you got me there; they're not a very emotional race, so she certainly must be pretty bad to drag out such hatred. Maybe she has a reason? (*spoiler* she doesn't kill Dumbledore) 6051308 Funny thing actually; I've already started the next one, much to my own surprise. 6051764 I don't get it 6065446 Now now, let's not be too hasty; what if they trace the killing back to us in the universe, and then cross between the worlds to come and get us? ... DEATH TO THE BETRAYER! 6067830 I will have ALL the first comments! Until I eventually give in :c 6068307 Me, predictable? I reject your predictability! 6068335 Well that's your fault ain't it, for reading too fast? tut tut :p 6069131 Don't worry friends; I'm working on it 6070981 I have been doing the school thing, and I also acquired a semblance of a social life. Which sucks cause I can't play as many video games any more :c 6071917 "Your behavior is slightly shy of excellent" 6072491 Concured 6072507 I try my best! 6098611 I shall, indeed, put in the effort with which I develope additional reading materials
6098755 She may very well have a reason, and it may be a noble one. I'm not going to say anything concrete yet since this is the only chapter that we've seen her in. Though I am looking forward to more chapters and seeing how Vinyl is doing.
6071917 my hope is that later on down the road that is this story Something happens that vinyl cant recover from and octavia has to make a very hard choice
“The smell is a broken vial of wood polish and finish, if you must know. The fumes are toxic if inhaled in too large a frequency, for a long period of time, so I took bleach to the mess and scrubbed it out, to ensure I would be safe to practice.”
“I thought you said you were the one who broke it.” My mother interrupted.
I defy ANY of you to point out where she says she was the one who broke it or even implies it.
who had gone from a lowly duchess to the sole heir of her family
I'm kinda getting the feeling that this is going to be similar to the movie Warm Bodies, namely in the bit where they end up finding out that all you need to cure a zombie is to have them feel emotions again. But because this is my little pony and friendship is magic, it's gunna be friendship instead of love. I actually laughed thinking about Twilight being cured and realizing she killed Celestia "because of reasons"
You are live !!!!!! yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes
I thought death has taken your soul
4729931 Thank you, I'm glad it seems to be improving. I'm a year out of practice, so we'll see just how well this new one turns out
4796327 you know it!
4799082 4799819 I'm glad to hear it's got you interested
4827328 Maybe, maybe not. There was that odd dream though; maybe they're not alone
4831437 I really wish I could understand where all these mistakes are. Hopefully earlier on
4835204 I do hope I fixed that... Oh good, I remembered to
4874756 I was hoping it would have that effect; clop without clop
4883181 Which one?
4900279 4904356 Well, considering I seemed to have survived the attacks, let's say right now?
4914326 5004809 5172730 5251614 5319670 5351125 Sorry friends, seems I let that happen eh? A whole year, it still amazes me how fast time flies
4965041 Oh it's so good, I loved it, although as you can see, I might not have been a big fan of that twist near the end
5005275 Oh you, I'll have to go and read over that; it's been so long since I thought about this story
5044034 Cliffhanger? I don't know what you mean
5466103 I've never heard it yet; might have to look into it now
5466739 I think you might wanna make that comment work properly :p
5571345 No no, good sir, we are in a world of magic now! There is no "science" here!
5720082 Funny, I just started re-reading that series. Again. For the 7th time.
5720409 5754805 5768084 5816956 5859754 5964214 : D I did!
5728536 Well, maybe not godworthy; But I'm not one to be humble! God it is!
YAY A NEW CHAPTER
What a pleasant surprise!
Welcome back to the land of the living!
Wonderful to see this updated, and I do hope we see more updates in the near future.
Yay! I was beginning to think I'd never see how this story ends.
Great chapter, hope to see more.
6033300
Obviously the question of celestia being alive is still there.
The theory i have is that celestia is, in fact, dead, but vinyl Had that dream because she still has the hope of her being alive and coming to save them, though she 'knows' the truth.
if princess celestia were still alive, I would imagine she would have been able to do something by now in order to fight back. I'm sure there's a good possibility you will suprise us all with some good facts on her being alive, but with what I've read, I can't point to anything that would suggest the opposite.
6033300
Editing, huh? Gimme a few days to read the story (I've a lot on my plate), and I'll get back to you.
~TOOWC
I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me, but it's true, you have finally updated this story. Oh happy days.
Omg I've waited for this to update for so long. Never actually got to say to you how good this story is
It lives once again!!!
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Good to have you back
Yay chapter!
You're alive?!
...
...
Celebrate to night, Come on!
So glad to see this still going! Woo!
corpse
Yay! It, like Vinyl, lives! Tavi's mum really is horrible.
Great chapter, love the character development.
Well. . . I haven't seen this in my notifications for a while. It's good to have you back. This was one of the first OctaScratch stories I've read on FImfic and I'm glad to see that it's not dead.
HOLY CRAP Octavia's mom is a BITCH! Damn, I can't imagine having to live with someone like that and not go bat-shit crazy.
I'm so glad this updated i was just telling a friend about it and how good. it was and how i was sad it was dead. but behold life has been brought back into it. Or is it undead?
it updated.....
RAVE MOTHERFUCKERS!!!
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...i’m so sorry...
i am................. well i don't know what to say about this fic. it is well whiten, has in depth characters, an interesting world and plot forcis and an some what expand world history that keeps giving more as you get in to the think of this fic.
now i am not ashamed to admit this but when i first sore this fic i thorte "this will be just a another twilight ripoff fanfic" then i looked at the plot suspicious and decided to reed the prologue then i decided to reed the rest and now after i have cout up i am happy to say that i was totle fucking woring i that i like no love this fic.
you Sr or madam (what ever your gender is) have ernde a pat on the head and a gloud star
Edit: i spent my hole Saturday in grost in this fic. now that is what i call a Saturday well spent.
Your alive or are you vampony now? Oh god if you are stay away from me wolves don't taste that great. Trust me.
What if the vamponies are like Vulcans and if they let their anger take control, they get really strong.
6033280 6033283 Yeah, sorry about that I've been having a rough time recently
6033312 Hope it lives up to your standards : 3
6033361 Psh; I wasn't dead, just invisible
6033496 About that, I'll be making a blog post to inform people about what's going on with me
6033549 Woah; who said it would end? What if it goes on and on and on forevermore?
J/k, I don't think that'll happen; I honestly have no clue how I Want it to end at all
6033625 Celestia is interesting; I won't really say much cause I'm honestly not sure myself. But I'm hoping to use her in the future
6033653 Take your time, I'm not in any rush
6033667 Oh well gosh, I don't know if I can manage that, but I certainly liked it. It's very inspired from another story
6033938 No tricks, only words
6034084 Why thank you, I like it too
6034090 Vamponies arn't alive, silly~. Or maybe they are...
6034103 I'ma take that as a compliment
6034242 I hope it lasts this time around
6034314 Yay Comment! :P
6034315 I can't party to hard; body's not up to scratch
6034491 Very agreed, I am not known for my speed or consistency
6034756 It will take more then a brick wall to stop this train
6035212 Fixed, thank you!
6035461 6038045 Oh she's a bat outta hell, but then, who wouldn't be if their son died?
6036437 I felt there was a fair amount of that in this chapter
6039822 Undead... I like the sound of that
6042473 Now now, settle down; reading is meant to be done in a calm, quiet environment
6044119 Oh but I like wolfies, they're soft and fun to pet!
6047950 That's not quite un-true; they do show supreme bursts of physical prowess. But not just when they're angry
6043245 Why thank you! I did try to make this story as unique as possible, despite it's inspiration. Still, I really like how it's developed so far. I'm glad you like it
6051287 But still, what she's doing, and from what we know from it taking A LOT to bring out physical signs of emotions in vamponies, it's not just obsessive it's down right psychotic.
6051287 it did and i hope that we get more chapters sooner rather than later
6051287
Then it would be a, *puts on shades* Never Ending Story.
...
I had to.
All in favor of killing this bitch and just letting Octavia be Octavia say aye!
All opposed?
No one?
Good
WOOHOO, YOU ROCK. This is going places i did not expect and i love it, please keep going!
NO!!! I CAUGHT UP!!!! I LOVE IT!!! I WANT MORE!!!! YES YES YES YES YES!!!!! PLEASE MORE!!!!
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I MUST HAVE MOAR!!!!
.... When i saw a update on This story.
In my feed. I started smiling. ITS FINALY BACK HOLY BUCK ITS BEEN A LONG TIME!
Where were you marv? Its been so long!
So happy this you are well and writing once again!
6071917
I, as well. Quite realistic.…
Checked back on the story as usual every few weeks or so since the last chapter and couldn't believe it seeing a new chapter uploaded. I hope you can get back into making these because your story is great.
6051298 I suppose you got me there; they're not a very emotional race, so she certainly must be pretty bad to drag out such hatred. Maybe she has a reason? (*spoiler* she doesn't kill Dumbledore)
6051308 Funny thing actually; I've already started the next one, much to my own surprise.
6051764 I don't get it
6065446 Now now, let's not be too hasty; what if they trace the killing back to us in the universe, and then cross between the worlds to come and get us?
... DEATH TO THE BETRAYER!
6067830 I will have ALL the first comments! Until I eventually give in :c
6068307 Me, predictable? I reject your predictability!
6068335 Well that's your fault ain't it, for reading too fast? tut tut :p
6069131 Don't worry friends; I'm working on it
6070981 I have been doing the school thing, and I also acquired a semblance of a social life. Which sucks cause I can't play as many video games any more :c
6071917 "Your behavior is slightly shy of excellent"
6072491 Concured
6072507 I try my best!
6098611 I shall, indeed, put in the effort with which I develope additional reading materials
6098755 She may very well have a reason, and it may be a noble one. I'm not going to say anything concrete yet since this is the only chapter that we've seen her in. Though I am looking forward to more chapters and seeing how Vinyl is doing.
6098755 then I'll be ready for them
6098755
If it goes on forever then it would never end. There's an old movie named 'The never ending story'. That's all there was to it.
6098755
But... but!!!!! I couldn't put it down!!!!!!! I couldn't put the story down!!! I needed to read more!!! I NEED TO READ MORE!!!!!
6071917 my hope is that later on down the road that is this story Something happens that vinyl cant recover from and octavia has to make a very hard choice
The chapter is finally here! Praise Celestia!!!
I defy ANY of you to point out where she says she was the one who broke it or even implies it.
A lowly duchess huh?
Yeah, I don't think there's very many places up from that she could go.
I'm kinda getting the feeling that this is going to be similar to the movie Warm Bodies, namely in the bit where they end up finding out that all you need to cure a zombie is to have them feel emotions again. But because this is my little pony and friendship is magic, it's gunna be friendship instead of love. I actually laughed thinking about Twilight being cured and realizing she killed Celestia "because of reasons"