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Heath of Tragedy
It kills me to hear you say you “choose to love me.” I was hoping that would be a given, given our history.
Heath of Tragedy
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This... right here, is a very good story, with a metric fuck-ton of potential. Please don't waste it.
*see's chapter title*
*yells at top of lungs*
"TRANSFORMERS! ROBOTS IN DISGUISE!"
4627544 That's what I aim for.
4627888 You discovered the reference, congratz.
Good story.
Keep going!!
4633430 You're not the boss of me
...but ok, if you insist.
I like this. The name is unique too. Keep up the good work!
4641013 I shall.
This....intrigues me. Carry on.
nice story
Let's see what the second chapter will bring. Then I made my decision.
4650131 Why not now?
4650149 Because I don't want to judge a Story by just one chapter.
4650166 Alrighty then.
Hm... Not really much action happens here and I can't really tell what the actually Story is. This is like a second part of the prolog.
I will give it a thumb up, but it is not enough for a fav so far. Sorry.
4662251 eh, expected. I like building up the story behind the transportations (how they actually got there instead of just a flash of light) before beginning the actual story. I think it adds more depth.
But stick around, around chapter 3 I predict shit getting real.
4662251 Also, there is a reason why I write these parts. You just don't now it yet.
4662267 Alright. We will see how the next Chapter will change my mind.
The Story lost a bit of it's mystery as you explained how and why he was brought to Equestria. It's different from other YHAY stories but it's not automatically a bad thing.
I just have to wait for the next chapter(-s) to give my final judge. But as I said, the different with the explanation of his arriving is not totally a bad thing.
4662385 It's your choice. Go for it, and thanks for the critique.
thank you for the new chapter! also would you like a internet cookie or would you rather have a internet hug?
4880551 MOTHA FUCKING CHOICES!
Hug please.
4880636 good chose. *HUG* again thank you for the chapter.
4880665 Again, I aim to please
I am honored that I have found a story using my IRL name as a human as well. Great story. I'm curious as to who the voice us. I await eagerly.
4881813 Oh, you're real name is Sebastian, and you're following a story of a guy with the same name?
Thanks for the comment though.
PILLZ!
but seriously, what's the deal with the stallion?
4884467 Which one?
Huh? Have people been giving you heat about the similarities to MadMax's?
It's a spinoff, it's supposed to be similar, and I really like it so far.
I'm liking it, don't worry about ripping off too much, it's a spinoff....it happens
Just like Chicago PD is a spinoff of Chicago Fire
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It's more about self-doubt than other people. I feel like I'm copying some characters' personallities. Maybe that's just me.
You are not only one.
5059577 Fun fact: that was a last minute addition. I thought about direting this to a more comedic stance, but then I decided to keep it serious.
5059665 So what..about the train?
5059685 It will come to the station in due time.
5059703 I mean...Location?
5059706 That would be called 'Spoilers'.
5059718 Oh shit, now i have to wait. but thank.
Rage Review
5114782 WE HAVE A FIRST NEGATIVE COMMENT!!
EVERYPONY REJOICE!!
5114956 I wouldn't says its utterly negative, I mean, it rates by, uhm is 2d-kun a guy or girl, I can't ever tell since in real life those honorifics in japan that you add to the end are not actually gender specific. Anyways, 2d-kun rated it as and I quote "?????/unsure"
5146864 I'll still accept it.
Don't blame god, Blame multi-universe.
5176633 Blame der juden
I can edit for ya!
5506233 Cool. Got any experience with editing? Like, any other stories you've edited?
(I'll still accept you, I just like to know backgrounds.)
5507545 Over seventeen stories. Most of them haven't written in a while. But, I am the editor/co-editor of some very-liked stories such as Downed and Daring, and Family. (The one named Family where the kid named Reveire gets caught hiding in Applejack's barn.)
5508176 Awesome, I shall PM you the first chapter right now.
That comment about Platinum makes my inner morganite curious.