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First story? I had a feeling that I hadn't seen your name before. Really well done, and not just the clop! To be honest, I expect this to be featured.
You did a good job here.
Also, apparently RD thinks it's adorable trash. And it needs 20% more vomit.
RD is insulting everywhere
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Thanks!
awwesome
Welcome to the Mile High club Dash. Literally...
I thought this was pretty good for a first story!
That was rather nice. BUT, the dialogue mid sex needs some work. The 'just like that' thing specifically needs to go, mainly because it makes it sound like some corny porno. The words 'just like that' and all their variations should be banned from the scripts of all porno's everywhere, and shouldn't ever come anywhere near writing.
FlyboyI laughed so hard at that line, good job!
That was truly amazing, I love Soarin'Dash fics. I'll be watching you closely, my friend.
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Edited dialogue to take that out and cleaned it up a bit. Apparently what something sounds like when you write it isn't always what it sounds like when you read it three days later.
Pretty darn good.
Well, that was a very good piece and even more for so for a first story! A touch repetitive in places, but overall it was strong.
1978472 LOL
Awesome
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For your first story that was magnificent! Love the ship
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So cute
woah nice! especially the moonlight part
Beautiful. This was a wonderful story. I hope you continue writing, because you've definitely got the skills.
Have a like and fave!
Sensual and fun.
Very very nice.