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That was surprisingly very good!
IDK why there's so many dislikes
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Not to sound high headed, but I'm not either
You're doing fine. And this is based off of that CSIMadmax comic, right? This is the best possible outcome of that story.
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Thanks! And the +10,000 goes to you
I'm an official story judger and I say: Dis be gud. Sequel.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it =) Really, if the story is so well received, I might just have to write some more pone. It was pretty fun, really.
I haven't actually read the story yet, but I do want to point out two things. One, you were supposed to provide a description up at the top of the story. Instead, you just have the sort of author's note up there. Don't get me wrong, you can have one there, but more importantly, you should have also put up a description. Two, the short description I noticed on the front page says that Soarin took notice of her "inept flying abilities." Go look up the definition for inept and tell me if that's the word you wanted to use to describe her flying abilities.
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You are very correct on me using the wrong word in the short description. I did fix that. Also, I don't know what else I could say in the long description that wasn't already mentioned in the short that needs to be posted. I mean, if you feel that I should add more I could, I suppose. But otherwise, I prefer to just leave author's notes and let people just read the story.
Oh my god. Why. Ok, so I was browsing through all of the RD stories and I came across this one. I was like, "Oh it's a Soarindash story, why the heck not." So I clicked on it, failing to realize that it said "Mature-Sex." So I started reading it, and then it got to the point where I was sitting there with a hammer, gun, knife, blowtorch, and a lightsaber about to destroy my laptop. XD
But great story though, keep up the good work!
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story =P I'll do my best to keep up writing for people!
Where to start...
So much win here. Especially with that Doctor Who reference. Funny thing is this is the second story within the hour I've read with a reference. Not to mention the fact I just finished a bit of a marathon with past series (seasons?)...
At reading this I imagined their eyes going pinhead sized before looking out the window at the intruder.
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Indeed. Sort of a, "Awwwwww man..." moment xD I'm glad you liked the story so much, then =) Happy readers are the fueling force behind my writing
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YEA!!!!! I LOVE ME A GOOD SOARINDASH FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
....sequal?
Worse titles incoming!
"Attack of the Rainbosaur"
"Winging it"
"Untitled RD/Soarin' ship"
"How I Met Your Mother"
I'll be thinking of more all night now, stupid brain picking on me
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Well, I didn't really leave any room for a "sequel," but I don't know, we'll see what I can think of.
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Heh, thanks for the vote of confidence, at least =P Naming things is just my worst skill. I'm soooo bad with names
I didn't see the "Mature-Sex." thing and it's started to get weird and I felt like throwing my monitor out the window but something kept me reading, AND I KNOW FOR A FACT IT WASN'T BECAUSE TWO PONIES WERE HAVING SEX! But it was something in the text that kept me going.
I read the entire thing and now there it a disgusting image in my head and for that, buck you.
Good work though, really.
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Putting those images in your head is my job, as is alluring you into my stories. Anyways, thanks a lot! I'm glad you liked it, at least =)
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The main reason I liked your story so much was because everything pieced together to smoothly. Unlike some fan-fictions. For example: Two ponies walking down a street in Ponyville, then three sentences later... They're fighting a bunch of ninjas. You know what I mean? If only you didn't write stuff like this, I would read your stuff more often. But who am I to tell you what to write? You do what you like to do. I might not be able to think of Rainbow Dash that same for a bit, but I can honestly say, I enjoyed this one.
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And really, I write some non-sex sometimes, but I felt that it'd be a good start to the site. I hate to sound like I'm writing just for views, which I'm really not, I still want to sort of put myself out there and get myself noticed by the community, and establish myself as an author they want to come back and read stuff from. And, truthfully, the best way to get yourself noticed, is to write porn. And also truthfully, writing porn is probably what I write best. I wish that weren't true, but after so many years of it, I guess it's just been sort of implemented into me. It's really something I feel I need to work on, personally, even if it does require me to write some sub-par stories at first to get the hang of it.
Wow... I think I sort of just realized that in my head. I'd actually like to thank you for calling that out... I need to reflect lol.
pegabox... all the mares love it when a colts gotta a pegabox
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Lol, man I don't even xD I sat a good five or so minutes, trying to think of a cool name for a pony game-console. That cool name never came x.x
1930195 haha better then anything i would've have thought up :) but this is cracking me up, whether or not you intended this to be a comedy or not i just find a many of these situation cute and funny
this tis a very enjoyable story
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I was considering adding comedy to it, but I didn't want to really give the impression that everything was supposed to be funny, I dunno. The little bit of humor is just my own writing style, I think. Anyways, thanks for the comment! I do appreciate it =)
i liked had great detail and it was not rushed, great clop
That got me right in the feels man
Really good story man
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Glad I could be of help in any way man. You might just me my new Favorite writer now.
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In my mind, that's about the best compliment you can give to me ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it so much as to get a good clop out of it.
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Thank you! Again, this also is a great compliment. Being able to properly relay the correct emotions into a reader should always be the ultimate goal of the writer! I'm glad to hear I accomplished this for you
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Nah, I don't think I deserve that kind of compliment, though I REALLY do appreciate it a whooole bunch! I thank you very much for your praise and the bit of criticism.
hmmmmm
ah like it!!!
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Ah'm glad that yer took the tahm ta' read'n comment there =)
Wonderful! Absolutely gorgeous! I believe I shall be reading this many times on future occasions!
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Hey, thank you so much for the compliment! I really do appreciate it! When readers come back for more, that really makes me feel like I accomplished something great
And thank you for the favorite, as well =)
It was an awesome read and all thoe there was a few miss spellings and I think only one missing word you did really well on this story and I hope to read more from you in a later time.
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Hey, thanks! I was hoping I had none. I'm extremely lazy when it comes to editing. As in, I almost don't edit, lol. But thanks for letting me know! I'll try my best to be more weary about that in the future.
I'm not much of a commenter, so I'll just let you know that I enjoyed reading this story. Pacing and descriptions were good and it was pretty cute. Maybe a little too cute for Rainbow's character.
You have my blessings to continue.
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Yeah, I was kind of worried about that. But then again, I didn't want her to be like, a sex fiend. I was trying to find a good middle between witty and cute, and I think I erred to far to the cute side. But I'm glad that you read and enjoyed it. Thanks!
Cutesy and sweet!
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Thanks for the comment, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
Just so you know inept means bad... Adept means good
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Did I make that mistake in the story as well? Gah! Thanks for pointing that out.
Well, that was some pretty shmexy stuff right there. A fun little read. I am looking forward to reading more from you in the future. Keep up the great writing!!
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I'm really slow to write, but as long as people enjoy my stories, I will write more!
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
One more green thumb for you.
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Thank you very much! I'm very glad you liked it
not to put you down or anything but this felt a little... generic.
some of the plot and dialogue was a bit bland..
- 10/10 ign "okay I guess"
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And it is a bit generic. Honestly, I just wanted to get out a pony story, and I liked the idea behind the comic I based this off of.
As for the dialogue, that is totally my fault. It's something I'll just have to work on in the future. Thanks for the feedback
Good very good
almost got caught by parental unit while reading
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That probably wouldn't be for the best! I'm glad you liked it, though.
isn't that how rape comes to be via drunks, late nights and time
My friend Miley would LUV this
I like your colonge.