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Due to a flight hazzard, Twilight finds herself lost in the forest, opposite of the Everfree. She is rescued by an unnatural being. After some convincing, she introduces him to her firends and the princesses. What follows is a track of weird events, developing to a catastrophe on a large scale.

Just a weird thing that has been scratching my brain for the past few weeks.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

:derpyderp2: Will read.
Edit: OMC TIME TRAVELING DOCTOR REFERENCE!!!!!!!
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Edit2: You, sir, have just won my upvote and fav.

That OC smell little shitty but overall its not bad written. I'm gonna give chance to this

2019768 Why thank you good sir.
2019774 What does thou mean by smell shitty? I would like to see what you think so i can better things or else. So would you be kind enough to

2024204
I can say that it can be only worse if you will make him alicorn, and his Mary-suesness.

2025718 Nope, no alicorn. Just half dragon-half pony. Nothing more, nothing less. :pinkiesmile:

2152055 Um...okay. One question though. What's Mary Sue?

2155799
Mary Sue is character with no downsides.

2155852 Oh. Huh, thank you good sir, i will have to give this matter a proper thought over.

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