After their permanet settling on Korhal, Karn and Rain Sight are recruited into the DI. Unlike her father, the little filly has next to no experiance in that field of work. So, she undergoes a tough 10 year training, which along with the problems her family name brings her with the other cadets results in a not so perfect childhood. How does she make it through, and at what cost?
Sequal to The tale of an Exile. Side story to The Koprulu Sector. Permission granted by Unholyheaven.
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for some reason, Moonraker sounds like Cave Johnson from Portal to me.
3099859 Really?
Huh...I was trying to use Deadpool as a template for him.
This actually makes a lot of sense!
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Glad you approve.
Moonraker sounds like a guy you would love to hate and kill but still want to join him for a drink at the bar. I like how you made subtle reference to Born of Sin, though it makes me wonder if other scientists use this method of conditioning in the Dominion.
Again,Moonraker is an asshole but an asshole that grows on you...however odd that sounded. I wonder how many more cadets will bite the dust by the end...
3168419 Yeah, this is where my problem lied. I killed cadets off too much. Also, where did I refernace Born of Sin?
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3168429 Well when Moonraker mentioned scientists using music to brainwash others. I thought of Stedson and his conditioning of the Iron Feathers...though technically speaking,that part was in The Koprulu Sector. So yeah
3168501 Actually he was just reffering to the multiple movies where he had seen that happen. In any way, victory for me making an unintentional referance!
I have now read both of your stories and I think you did a good job on them
Also ejoy your coverart.
3252393 Epic cover art for epic stories. Thank you for your service and glad you enjoyed sir.
Moonraker is still a bastard but I'd still join him for a drink...after slipping something into his glass of course.
3260322 I like the way you think sir.
3260881 I like how I think too though not all the time or I'd go nuts like Twi did with Smarty Pants
What's the last song? The link to it is dead. Also, so it seems that Terran music survived as well, and Rain Sight likes rock and metal. Nice!
Great story, enjoyed every minute of it!