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King Of Thieves


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Great cites destroyed, ponies fleeing in panic, the countryside in ruins. A burst of flame from Mars heads towards the earth, and a strange ship, unlike anything ever seen here, lands. Soon it devours everything in it's path, ponies, and buildings alike. It's unstoppable.

Ponykind is in the greatest danger in all it's history. Can anypony-or anything-save their world?

(This fiction uses faithful adaptions of H.G Wells's War of the Worlds in third person)

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 5 )

If you don't like it, give me reasons! What can I fix? Did i post it too early? Give reasons please! However no hate please! Just give me the Pros and the Cons.

2051629 Thank you for the comment. I fixed it as you said. At least I hope I did. Anyway I'm taking a break even though I only done two chapters, it's just that schools really giving me a headache. So I might do two or three more chapters during February break.

Comment posted by King Of Thieves deleted Feb 6th, 2013

This is a very good adaptation/crossover you doing here. I say that as a fan of H.G. Wells' novel.

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