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Brrrrrr. Thank god that the rape was denied!
4599346 agreed but i wish i had time to get my flaming chainsword
Lovely chapter, but there be errors a foot in this chapter by the dozens.
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Indeed there is.
Nice chapter! Still…I wounder what the deal with Molestia and succubases…
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Nein, it's up now. I was editing it.
I found some things you may want to edit.
Charlotte is going to rape that king isn't she? well I think its a fitting end, although I don't like complete Crimson ending, its just to much to swallow Canterlot is not exactly a normal house you can sneak in, that castle is a fortify fortress that is more than well protected and knows how to detect intruder…for heaven sake dude YOU told us that, and that is why Nightmare NEEDS to stay inside Daniel, at all time or risk being detected, and now you are telling us that a vampony bite 1 guard and she got the free pass to a tower with nobody seeing her?…yeah no, I don't believed it, wouldn't it make sense she just appear when they appear on the forest?
Further more Daniel now can sense her, he would had pick her up real quick, other than that and the force drinking (seriously if he got more strength then by reflex he should had deck Crimson the moment she bite) it was a good chapter, I just hope Crimson will just find her own place leave him alone and focus on her quest to see her aunt, I know the protagonist is Daniel but it will be interest a sub story of the Crimson family.
P.S: Hey wait a minute if Molestia was with the suckubus on Tartanus as well how come Celestia is in Canterlot? She say that she was on a mission too?
Never ever bite a mans dick it is like rule #1 in the how to keep a man book
I find it weird that all these spells, potions, herbs, and just general concoctions Daniel has been exposed to in this world have the effect one would expect on a pony when he is not. They may have a similar physiology, but Daniel is not a pony and is from a world where magic doesn't exist. Shouldn't these things not effect him in the same way that they would the natural denizens of the world who are exposed to the same things?
Awesome chapter as always.
Quick question though, how many chapters do you think will be done by the end of the summer?
Nightmare, Crimson, and Daniel threesome. Never would happen but a man can dream right?
You fiend!
oh god that has to be scary for daniel having to go through all that and make it out alive and in tact he has brass balls to go through that in a matter of days
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Who knows, chapters will be posted when they're ready.
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I never said anything about Canterlot Castle being an impenetrable fortress. Think back to when Nightmare didn't have Daniel, she was a mist slithering around the castle, surely one of guards would have noticed, but no, they are worried more about their cycles than someone unwanted going inside, for one Equestria is at peace so why bother being on high alert...yet. As for Crimson entering the castle, I'm sure she didn't walk on through the front door. Maybe she had the idea of noticing some Lunar guards and thought to herself, "Hey, they have fangs just like me." She could've easily made it up to the tower that way if she borrowed some armor (hint-hint).
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Oh…ok that make sense, so I imagine (hope) Nightmare give her a place to stay or something because the whole sucking blood thing and she with the infernal puppy eyes is starting to tick me off, yeah it was cute at the beginning but now is just annoy, ergo I just want her to be more interest other then the daughter that is jealous, and is obsess with drink blood.
That is why I suggest/ask she don't stay on that closet and actually put her on a place to lived…maybe the abandon castle (hint, hint)
But thanks, that explains a lot yeah,
And what about the whole Celestia in Canterlot? you say she was gone on a expedition, and never told us when she return? Or that you will explain on the next chapter?
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the abandoned castle isn't in Canterlot now is it. As for Celestia/Molestia and the succuponies, that will be explained later in the next chapter.
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Ah ok, and yeah really I hope Crimson had like a conclusion and he goes to see the doctor, I wonder if she will be happy or mad at Daniel for brining her family and discover her little secret
next chapter more more yes
Waaaait a minute! What happened to his armor? Why didn't Luna ask where it went?
Well, this explains the origin of Luna's Night guard. They're Vampire Bat Ponies!
4605235 you'll find out in the next chapter. Excitement in seeing someone you care about overlooks small details.
I sense a Kill Bill reference. Nightmare should be happy she didn't get the Black Mamba.
Dude, you can't just use the sunlight weakness and leave the weakness to silver out.
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Werewolves are weak to silver..., not vamps.
4610098 I'm pretty sure that silver bursts into flame when a vampire touches it.
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You mean that the other way around. The vampire bursts into flames when it touches silver (Dark Shadow's reference). Okay, so I looked it up, vampires do have a weakness to silver...,however it only effects them if comes into contact with their skin. So let's say that rule is true in the story, the vampony still won't be effected. Why, you ask.? Because of one tiny detail; Crimson is a vampony, her body is covered with a thin layer of fur, so the silver doesn't come into contact with her skin. If you're still not convinced, then allow me to explain further of what I read. Vampires, if coming into contact with silver, don't die, they are weakened and paralyzed by it. From what the site said it's like a human being tazed. Actually y'know what, I'm gunna go ahead and let Daniel ask that question in the next chapter, just to see where my mind leads me in explanation.
4611767 I'm just going on memory.
I recalled seeing Vampires + Silver = fire.
But if you're going with the fur protection thing, shouldn't the eyes, ears, mouth and nose be the only things burning when exposed to sun rays?
ps. Burning eyes sounds really painful.
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The amulet protects her everywhere on her body. The sliver however doesn't hurt her because she has fur.
4611857 I know, I was talking about if she did not have the amulet. Then only the exposed parts of her body would burn, and not where there is fur.
4613316 I didn't draw it, my artist did it.
This chapter was awesome I'm so happy they saved her and she is ok.And I still hope he can turn her and molestia good.And that they kicked Blood Bones ass .I'm also happy that Mist with them .I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens to them all next.
4611817 Doesn't the silver need to be inside the body? Like a blade?
4622393 No, just touch. Like a SPOOOOOOOOOON, or other silverware.
Oh I can't wait for all the "I wanna love you too!" moments to come from Crimson. I do believe she is quickly becoming my favorite character.
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Is it because she's a vamp that knows how to kick some ass?
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That and I find it adorable when she got jealous of Nightmare and was mumbling about it outside the door, I think we all know that her tagging along was less about serving Nightmare and more about chasing Daniel. I'm actually kinda rooting for her now, she's just a really cute character in my opinion.
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What if she was cut by a silver blade?
God, just give Crimson some garlic bread and be done with it.
My fav list didn't even tell me this updated
4787930 reference?
4599497 Is that a 40K reference?
4803748 yes
4804258 Cool!!
When was this released, I missed the date!..
Anyway... strange end to a strange plotline, a line I find completely unnecessary.
I wonder, when will be the story continued?
Gah, 12k words is too much to summ up...
-Zeph
will you continue and is cadence confirmed in the harem?
Hey man when is the next chapter? Or have you given up on this fic. it would be sad if you did, I love this fic, its awesome
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As long as it says incomplete that means it's still going.
Good to know