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How do you make everything you write so damn hot!!!???
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I dunno, practice? I've been writing for three years...
Is it weird that Molestia actually seems nicer that Celestia?
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It is a bit strange isn't it..., probably because she doesn't want Daniel to hate her, so that she can spend more time with him
Yesa
Did the sisters and their contra parts…starting to have feeling for Daniel? I was starting to thinking, that the embarrass one when they breast feeding Daniel was Celestia. I'm curious about who said that she love Daniel Celestia or Molestia. And what is happening to Daniel? its like he is starting to gain more and more power and stamina
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Well, saying that you're tired and want to go to bed is reasonable, but when you're woken up by some gorgeous babe that wants to have sex with you, it's going to be difficult to resist her. As for the love thing it could well be possible that both of them said it. As tor the suckling, I think Molestia could care less about the embarrassment, for she's too deep in the moment.
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That moment that they feel he is their child, I think the idea of ingest, may be some turn on for one of the 2, like you said, Molestia doesn't care to much about morals, and I think both of them are…well they appreciate Daniel nobility of fight the pain for them to enjoy as well, even if he is driving by desire.
I can't wait to see how they will fight to gain his heart, not just lust but his true heart. Oh and if he impregnate both princess, those that will make him the new king of Equestria?
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New King...oh noooo...that would ruin the story right there. I have different plans for Daniel.
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Interesting, I can't wait to see what mares he will…make friends in the future…perhaps some, love seeking queen will visit him?
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You have no idea how close of a guess that is...
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Uy you got my attention, did the next chapter will come up soon?
lol never thought i would hear the term meatus outside of adultswim shows
HotHoT!!!
How ever, a few things here made my wonder why they (princesses) not using some magic to spice up a few thing during intercourse with Daniel?
cant they transform him or them selfs?
I mean Luna defiantly can turn into something that for sure (and it seems like she would love it, due her more dominant nature).
A specially when D mentioned a vorarephilia I was afraid that she will pick the idea for a rp.
Also, what about main six? Are they going to appear soon?
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They'll come soon.
2497917 It has potential but you must avoid using cock pussy and any abrevation of the word pennis. In order for it to be less akward you have to imply that they are having sex for example
I thrust forward her bated breath tickling my nose as I felt myself near my peak. My member throbbed as her walls tigthened gripping me. This is just a short example but you get the jist it is actualy not bad but Celestia needs to learn that the human ismt a sex slave. Also remeber that humans despite there lust still have pride and will choose self respect over sex most times
Oh yuss, this was satisfying to read!
I wonder, how will this Nightmare Moon thing turn out, and when will be the next chapter written?
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And she will learn later that he's not to be trifled with, but for now she kind of has Daniel in a spot where he can't escape (repopulating Equestria and so on) yeah, he's going to be having sex almost around the clock, and really I want the reader to think Molestia views Daniel as toy. However, it won't be much till much later that the reader pieces it all together and figures out what's really going on in Molestia's and Nightmare Moon's head. Oh about your last comment about Humans begin apex predators....er that really doesn't apply when it's just one lone human, as a society we are, but when alone no. Because I highly doubt one human can take on an alien world with raw force. The usage of my vocabulary, it's well because I'm not the most experienced writer, as you can tell, but that's why I do, to become better. Anyways, thanks for the criticism it helped a little.
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I'll be honest, I've got no idea.
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Awww... but you'll write it this week at least?
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I dunno, there are days where motive is just non-existent to me. Then again the next chapter is a bit of a doozy ;)
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Oh, should I be excited?
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I dunno, but with what will go on I think I will finish it on Sunday.
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*squee*
Well then he's screwed..........
sexiness shitstorm incoming.......
.....(in manly voice) Bring it on
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I think you are the first author I have read from to use Molestia as a distinct character.
i dont like them treating him like an object but now i understand why they do he doesnt defend himself or stand up to them he just keeps going after them and that puts them in control and in a story like this the human should reign supreme and not listen to bossy ass celestia and her contradictions of saying i want you to repopulate our race but with only who i say you can that would probably piss me off more than the rest
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Does this count as a three way? 0_0 that's hawt... Molestia celestia Luna and nightmare all fucking Daniel T once would just be.... Wow. Lol
I keep seeing 'warm folds'. OK, I understand that you're describing a vagina. But come on, get a little more creative rather than just using warm folds
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Well, I've been expecting more clop scenes with Luna, but I'm sure I'll see more of that in the next chapters. Anyways, that was a really hot chapter, really enjoyed the details that I have the nice pictures in my mind, great job.
Man, you really need to spend another few minutes on Wikipedia looking up how lady bits work.
Also, second-person singular isn’t that tough to do right. Just remember I/me = thou/thee, and my/mine = thy/thine. If you can’t figure out what to use, just replace it with first person pronouns and see what sounds right. If you wanna get really fancy you can stick ‘st’ or ‘est’ on the ends of the verbs, but the show didn’t even bother with that.