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IT LIVES! DEAR GODS IVE WAITED SO LONG!
Well, its looks like Daniel its coping really good with his situation. I will like to see him go back to Blueblood and see how much progress has he have being doing since their bet.
Also I can't stop but fell/desire Daniel get like more power or more agility, you know in case he find the kind of mare that 'only mate with the strong ones' kind. So when he beat her he earn her respect and her adoration. Also for some reason I still wish Luna will stop calling him a peasant
Daniel become a daddy, Shining's secret was exposed, and Daniel had to please 10 enamoured sorceress. You really made a great return with this chapter.
My gosh, BEAUTIFUL!
I enjoyed every second of reading this, more, I want MORE!
The plot thickens, the characters become more developed and we see little details that make the story all better, hehe, splendid!
Tell me when will you publish the next chapter!
-Zeph
The picture was a surprising find, hope to see more of those to go with this naughty adventure.
I loved it all it was so awesome I can't wait to see what happens next.this chapter blow my mind .I hope we can find out not only what the new baby changelings look like but what gender they are to
I can't wait for the next chapters and for the sorceresses to appear again! Chrysalis has her eyes on Daniel now, so he better take care.
I did not get informed of this chapter or the previous one.
I just absolutely love Jynx!
Hope she gets lots more screen time. I just wanna cuddle that lil cutie.
I must admit, Jynx dose look cute.
what happen next chapter?
Jynx maybe is a changling, but damn it she is so damn cute.
"Well your high-and-mightiness, given how you're an absolute bitch every time we meet, yes."
and her sister is a he?
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Personally I think Jynx's hips are too wide and her breasts way too big for my liking, but to each their own.
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The "he" refers to Daniel...and I think it is a typo of "thee" anyway...might not but still, it's refering to Daniel...
First it's sorceress not sorcerer and second why are so many pictures missing?
The picture doesn't work sadly
Picture no work
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I know right
Now this is getting even more interesting and exciting, I bet sooner or later the story will have action! I love action! Anyways you did pretty well with the clop scenes, though it's a shame Nightmare didn't let Daniel have some fun with the sorceresses, but I'm sure it won't be the last time we'll see them, right?
Also I really love the foreshadowing details that makes the readers come up their own theories, but man I am so intrigued to find out why so many secrets!