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Good chapter.
If Rarity is six feet tall...
Will Celestia be abnormally tall? :O
Hehe, five minutes later and he is done
Looking forward to the next chapter! :D
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would be so if that happened to me. i'd be a horny as hell guy but i'd be pissed with all the cockteases in ponyville. -swaps thinking processes- must be hell for those mares, though. no men and feeling horny until you 'get some'. that would be a bad week, for anybody. it doesnt matter who it is. keep the hellish heaven coming
Holy.... this is the first story I read in months which made me remind the good old times of my first contact with the clopfics..... duuuuude, continue this ASAP! O_O
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No he doesn't have a girlfriend..., but there's something in his wallet that will tell them otherwise
Why is he don't tell them he is a human? What is the problem? Everypony see he is different. Also did Zecora actually was the first one to actually had sex with him?
Well lets hoped that Daniel first alien will put her more easy on putting a Captain Kurt move. And that he receive some respect from the mares that treat him like a piece of meet.
Oh and if Twilight actually did it with him, that doesn't count, that was raped and I pretty sure he is more than mad at her and Pinkie Pie, I really hoped he manage to get back on they.
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I think both times were just blowjobs.
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you are quite right indeed sir!
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Oh I see, so the red line coming from Twilight crotch wasn't her hime? Good to know I wonder who will be the first, and you never answer why is he not tell him them he is a human? Or are you planning something?
Much improved over the first chapter. I did not notice any particularly awkward sentences or grammatical issues.
Hey when Rarity ask to be his mare, does that mean like just another way to say Fuck me, or did she actually was asking to be his permanent girlfriend?
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You could say that it meant both.
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And just to be clear, all the mares judgment or bonders are pretty much shot down do to a lust that is virtually hurting them…but still respect a Stallion or human in this case, if he already had a marefriend?
Just to questions:
1) Is this society, use the herd card?
2) You never answer, why he don't tell he is a human? (Are you have something plan for the future?)
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Wow so many questions. Well first off there is no herd. For your second question, yes I am saving the human part for later, though not much later he'll tell them around Ch.5 if not six. Oh and just for future questions, Daniel never really had a girl friend. Everything that one thought he should of said plays a more important role later on.
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Ok, thanks sorry for bother you with so many questions. Now is a race to see who will win Daniel heart, so far Shy has the lead, with Rarity in close second and Zecora not to much left behind.
The next chapter will be post soon?
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Yes, very soon.
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Oh right I can't wait
hmm not bad, i can't wait to read more hopefully you post the next chapter soon
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I can tell. It's just a little jarring to suddenly have to apply "I" to a different character every few paragraphs, especially since I don't recall you doing that for the last three chapters.
Also, Applejack's accent is somewhat unwieldy for use in narration
him being chased oddly reminds me of playing black ops 2 zombies.
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That's not odd. Like the zombies, the mares also want to eat his meat.
If I was in that situation,I'd wait t until I was alone,then either ding a sharp instrument or a towel,and slit my own throat and/or hang myself :/ I don't handle stress very well....
song fits the mood I think
Daniel, you stand guilty of making fluttershy cry. your punishment, eternal rape.
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This is giving me sooo many ideas for my story Love's hunt.
I found inspiration in a weird place.
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You know what they say: "Inspiration always comes from the strangest places"
Now it's getting good
Okay, the chase scenes were pretty hilarious, also I liked how Daniel and Fluttershy meet. Oh and also Zecora's BJ scene.
Here's another thing. No one's remarked that he's not a pony. It's not that hard to figure out. It's not like Equestria doesn't have its share of sapient species, so they're not unfamiliar with the concept of males of other species. He is hairless, has no tail, no wings, no horn, and is likely a pink/dull white color with no fur. You'd think someone would have remarked on this by now, even if they are horny out of their minds.
You just did what people in horror movies do, the most wrong angle most obviously bad choice.
Third times the death sentence in a horror movie....-_-
No Daddy! I can never have enough!!!!
Sincerely, Daniel Jr!!!!!LMAO