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This all looks familiar.
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was thinking the same thing. Maybe they were edited and reposted?
I found a few things that you may want to edit.
You may want to delete that third quotation mark.
There should be a comma after "lying" and this sentence should end with a question mark instead of a period.
That should be "we're".
That should be a period.
And there should be a comma after "her" and this sentence should end with a question mark.
I thought this story died what's going on. I remember they saying the store was no longer going to be on here and they were moving it somewhere else. was it take over or what. what's going on let me know. are you just rewriting some parts because if that's the fact I will just put it back on dead stores
What happened to the armor and sword?
Yay! Crimson Mist is now on Daniel's party! I'm sure Daniel will form a kickass team! Though I hope we'll see Crimson Haze again, I like her.
And now, what will Daniel do to Dr. Crimson now that he found out she's Crimson Mist's aunt?