After the horrendous cliffhanger, then there's no sex!? I'm sorry to say I'm very disappointed. Now I'm stuck having to write the second chapter myself (which will remain unpublished I might add. I don't steal others' work.). Or of course I could just start over from scratch. But then again, fitting this in without making it look like "fuck me slave" is really impossible except for the direction you took with it. And we don't need a clone of your story floating around. But maybe I'll think of something else. I dunno. But I do know that I'm not one for strange plot twists. No pun intended.
1901568 No sex? Did you read the second chapter? Just because there wasn't classical intercourse does not mean 'no sex' Look at all the F/F clopfics! I'm just saying, you need to broaden your limited definition of what you consider 'sex'.
Anyway, I'm actually really surprised there aren't more "Spike give AJ a backrub and then sex happens" clopfics after that episode. By all means, make your own version. I'd read it.
Jeezus Christ, he got his entire arm in there?! Ahahahahahahahaha!
This was both hilarious and sexy! As I expected, she totally took him around the world all the way into Magical Fun Land. This will be a moment that Spike will not soon forget. I give it a thumbs up! More AppleSpike is always a good thing.
The only thing I thought when she said more the first time I was instantly like 'oh look, fisting.' then you took it to an extreme. I fucking love it and the only face I can make is Me Gusta.
1901590 I get what you mean about the lack of back rubs leading to sex fics after that episode though I do hope they're on the way. I'm also hoping for a fic where Spike uses the power of back rubs to become the harem king of Equestria.
1902215 Well to be fair I had to go from 0 - 60 from the canon episode to... well that. There was bound to be some character shifting in thier attitudes. And some of it can be... a lot to take in?YEEEEEEEAH!
1902330 I don't write anything half-way. Glad you enjoyed it.
1903048 To be honest, I really had trouble with an ending at all. I didn't want to bother with them having actual sex since his tiny dragon... tool, would be grossly undersized compared to his stallions' counterpart. Maybe someone will write a sequel to this later when he grows up years from that day and comes back to 'give her a back rub' for old times....
Man that wa crazy I just kept thinking how deep is this chick and I thought she somehow "ate" him that way *shivers* but it was actually just Spike stuck on her now. It was actually a funny ending, but at least he'll actually lose his virginity to the pony he loves.
This is now part of the few favorite Clop stories of mine. This was slightly arousing, then it got hilarious when Applejack began begging. And that ending? OH GOD
Wow, I don't believe it. I've got to read this when I get the chance. I distinctly remember reading a comment on the youtube video of this episode. It said "Anybody else think that there's going to be some AJ x Spike clopfics because of that massage scene?" I can't wait to check this out, btw, I absolutely love your username and avatar picture Mr. Shakespearicles
Damn, that was so hot and too damn funny, and that ending, wow. That might call for a sequel or atleast another story with the idea of Spike using massages to get some fun-time with the other mares, lol.
This didn't move up to the top of my Favorite List... Luckily I stumbled across it again because I don't think it's even left the Popular Stories box yet
1905872 I'm the most surprised at it's popularity out of anypony. I swear I just wrote this on a whim based on that gif. I expected maybe like 20 views and hopefully more Thumbs up than down, but this? I guess I just write good sex. I'll have to get in on that Self-cest contest... Link
After the horrendous cliffhanger, then there's no sex!? I'm sorry to say I'm very disappointed. Now I'm stuck having to write the second chapter myself (which will remain unpublished I might add. I don't steal others' work.). Or of course I could just start over from scratch. But then again, fitting this in without making it look like "fuck me slave" is really impossible except for the direction you took with it. And we don't need a clone of your story floating around. But maybe I'll think of something else. I dunno. But I do know that I'm not one for strange plot twists. No pun intended.
1901568 No sex? Did you read the second chapter? Just because there wasn't classical intercourse does not mean 'no sex' Look at all the F/F clopfics! I'm just saying, you need to broaden your limited definition of what you consider 'sex'.
Anyway, I'm actually really surprised there aren't more "Spike give AJ a backrub and then sex happens" clopfics after that episode. By all means, make your own version. I'd read it.
Damn...
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Stamina is right!
Jeezus Christ, he got his entire arm in there?! Ahahahahahahahaha!
This was both hilarious and sexy! As I expected, she totally took him around the world all the way into Magical Fun Land. This will be a moment that Spike will not soon forget. I give it a thumbs up! More AppleSpike is always a good thing.
1901826 Well, when you look at how small he is, his arm is about the size of a stallion's... stallionhood.
1901911
Well, that is true. You gotta point there.
Still, I just can't help but picture Spike thinking, "Holy fucking shit, I think she's eating my arm... and it's so hot."
The best part is that he gets fucking stuck, that was a great touch. Ahem, and excuse the potty mouth.
I fucking support this!!!
Bah, the first chapter was better. Their attitudes completely changed
The only thing I thought when she said more the first time I was instantly like 'oh look, fisting.' then you took it to an extreme. I fucking love it and the only face I can make is Me Gusta.
1901590
I get what you mean about the lack of back rubs leading to sex fics after that episode though I do hope they're on the way. I'm also hoping for a fic where Spike uses the power of back rubs to become the harem king of Equestria.
I love the ending! Thanks for posting!
1902509 Yes. Story. Now. SOMEONE!!!!!
Whats going on in Applejacks mind when she realized he's stuck.
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Spikes actual reaction to this predicament
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Twilight's take on what shes witnessing
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Fantastic! And totally laugh out loud hilariousness! Well done my friend. Well done.
Remember how I said I'd tell you when we're in too deep?
That . . . was . . . awesome!! The last line under the picture is a bit of a coup out though.
I love that just one scene in the episode has inspired so much.
I knew!
Everybody fucking knew!
Knew that this would happen when that part came!
And that's once again another reason this community is so hilarious in a good way.
1902215 Well to be fair I had to go from 0 - 60 from the canon episode to... well that. There was bound to be some character shifting in thier attitudes.
And some of it can be... a lot to take in? YEEEEEEEAH!
1902808 DO IT FILLY!
1902330 I don't write anything half-way. Glad you enjoyed it.
1903048 To be honest, I really had trouble with an ending at all. I didn't want to bother with them having actual sex since his tiny dragon... tool, would be grossly undersized compared to his stallions' counterpart. Maybe someone will write a sequel to this later when he grows up years from that day and comes back to 'give her a back rub' for old times....
... maybe it'll be me. Maybe. If you're all good.
Best ending ever.
1903332 'flowed' Giggity! th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2012/308/c/e/quag_dash_by_rosaha12-d5k025q.jpg
1903376 Done!
1903048 I just thought of a new post-pic one-liner. Leaves it open for a sequel!
U Liek?
dude
man
dude
i need a smoke now. that was gooooood
Well that was interesting. Didn't think he would get stuck.
Hilarious and hot at the same time. The only "Bad" thing about this is that Spike didn't have his share of pleasure.
1904163 That is a perfect analogy.
ALSO: Added Clop aid link to story. Here is a copy of the link
really REALLY NSFW
1904248
Um which one? ^^;
Man that wa crazy I just kept thinking how deep is this chick and I thought she somehow "ate" him that way *shivers* but it was actually just Spike stuck on her now. It was actually a funny ending, but at least he'll actually lose his virginity to the pony he loves.
This is now part of the few favorite Clop stories of mine.
This was slightly arousing, then it got hilarious when Applejack began begging.
And that ending? OH GOD
This story?
DANOUTTADAN
Wow, I don't believe it. I've got to read this when I get the chance. I distinctly remember reading a comment on the youtube video of this episode. It said "Anybody else think that there's going to be some AJ x Spike clopfics because of that massage scene?" I can't wait to check this out, btw, I absolutely love your username and avatar picture Mr. Shakespearicles
Skipped to the end to find this ..... this....... I don't even know........
I knew it was only a matter of time before this or something like it showed up. Frankly it's rather a fair shade later than I expected.
Ha Ha Ha! I knew this would happen lol I'll read it later.
Damn, that was so hot and too damn funny, and that ending, wow.
That might call for a sequel or atleast another story with the idea of Spike using massages to get some fun-time with the other mares, lol.
Can you say "Spike's Happy Ending Massage", LMAO!
How fun. sadly, Applejack may have turned Spike into an addict, if that last sentence is to be believed ;p
Not that there is anything wrong with that...
LOL I was waiting for this...
There's literally an animated .swf of Spike "fingering" AJ.
Saw it yesterday.
This didn't move up to the top of my Favorite List... Luckily I stumbled across it again because I don't think it's even left the Popular Stories box yet
1904294 Glad you liked it!
1904577 Pick up the phone because he bucking called it! BTW thx, about my username. I agree that it's pretty badass.
1904652 DUDE! Spoilers!
1905592 >>> Here you go.
1905872 I'm the most surprised at it's popularity out of anypony. I swear I just wrote this on a whim based on that gif. I expected maybe like 20 views and hopefully more Thumbs up than down, but this? I guess I just write good sex. I'll have to get in on that Self-cest contest... Link
1905985
*Opens Link*
*Eyes Widen*
*Closes Link*
Should NOT have clicked on that link.
...
*Opens Link*
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I CAME
I like........ very much like
WELL NOW
Mature tag- that's good
Random tag- that's bad
Sex tag- that's good
Featured- that's better
Cover image implying obvious clopfic setup- Read Later
1906268 3.bp.blogspot.com/-3bjGgiPu4Y8/T5hdE43-YzI/AAAAAAAAC9w/MALzzJMyPuA/s1600/i_came-paper-doszlam-doszedlem-orgazm-my-little-pony-mem.jpg
OMFG!!!!!!!! That ending!!!
WHY DID MY MIND FORCE ME TO READ THIS?!
It's good, but still.
WHY, BRAIN?!
mmmm Lower... More... LOWER... MORE
Oh, Aj, you dirty devil, you...
I read it. And I must say it was a good read. And I that ending totally came from nowhere. Always nice to laugh after a little clop
1906506
Read Later? This fic is too awesome for that!
I lol-ed here. That's all I have to say.
Something like this was inevitable I suppose, the producers only stoked the fires in that scene.
Just wait, when Twilight finally gets him out, he'll be holding a tiny Balrog in his soaked hand.
So this is making the rounds on Tumblr. (NSFW) pic related.
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1902107 bro hoof /)
:) and if i had a nickle for every person that had a pewdiepie related comment towards me i would be a millionare