Here's a few ideas for a title, for this story: Spike's magical fingers. Massages by Spike. How to please a mare. Spike has the magic touch. You got the touch, you have the power. And etc.
I have a feeling that this story could become just as great as Spike's Sexual Misadventures. Which is something i would look greatly forward to, that is if you have planned the story in such a length.
So I'm guessing the rest of the Mane 6 and many more mares are gonna be getting full-body and internal massages? Have to agree the title doesn't work anymore.
Wait did I seriously just only write that! Let me get in depth. This was trully enjoyable not only will this continue but the possible implications are mind tingling! Spike is the swagon with three, count them three, mares! One could have been a one time thing, another is lusting over him with a passion, the other has fallen to the pleasure. Where this will go I have no idea but then again I'm not the one writing.
Spike's Swag has been turned on, now every mare would want a piece of his hands. And here I thought you were going to break Spike's crush on Rarity so he could be with Applejack.
Well, I noticed a few errors, but not bad. I do hope to see a little more Sparity, but I'm all up for Spike getting all the mares The title does seem to need a change though. You also appear to need to add character tags.
Its is possessive form of it; it's is "it is." You only seemed to have made that mistake once though.
And to everypony else, the Title stays. I have a plan. Three chapters from now it will all become clear. Be patient my lovelies. You will not have to wait long.
I pictured Twilight coming clean and Spike responding to her with something like this:
"Well, Twi...if it makes any difference, I never actually had sex with Applejack or Rarity. I just used my hands. So I technically still have my virginity. But..." He looked up at her with a tentative smile. "...you can have it if you want."
Well, so much for that. This update was great regardless! It's about time someone recognized Spike's value as a masseur in a society occupied by creatures with hooves. There is only one fanfic, not here on FiM, that pairs Spike with the Blossom sisters. Here's hoping Spike's interview will be a hands-on test. And if Trixie shows up at that spa, I will jump for joy. Not that expecting her to, but it would be awesome.
Coming back, I like that Spike's first time was with Rarity. It makes the more sense than any character aside from Twi, who could be considered even. The only thing that bother me per-say is that I can't tell if Rarity has romantic feelings for Spike or not. Some parts definitely seem that way, but certain other parts give it a friends with benefits feel.
1945349 In 'Winter Wrap Up' Twilight says that the ponies of Ponyville have been wrapping up winter in the earth pony way "for hundreds of years". And in 'Family Appreciation Day' Granny Smith reveals that her family founded Ponyville when she was a filly. Ergo, Granny Smith is 'hundreds' of years old....
There's more?
Yes, so much yes!
While I will definitely follow this... the titel of the story doesn't seem to work anymore.
Bravo Sir! That was entertaining as fuck and had me laughing and fistpumping in joy.
Here's a few ideas for a title, for this story:
Spike's magical fingers.
Massages by Spike.
How to please a mare.
Spike has the magic touch.
You got the touch, you have the power.
And etc.
This fic has be at the edge of my seat now.
Spike, sir, you are a playa!
"plot hole." and dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png
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That last one sounds familiar to a song I remembered
Hey! You stole my joke! :)
I have a feeling that this story could become just as great as Spike's Sexual Misadventures.
Which is something i would look greatly forward to, that is if you have planned the story in such a length.
Very Nice.
1933607 That last one was intentional.
I was hoping someone would notice .
Mission accomplished!
So I'm guessing the rest of the Mane 6 and many more mares are gonna be getting full-body and internal massages? Have to agree the title doesn't work anymore.
Well this is going in a good direction!
Keep going!
Wait did I seriously just only write that! Let me get in depth.
This was trully enjoyable not only will this continue but the possible implications are mind tingling! Spike is the swagon with three, count them three, mares! One could have been a one time thing, another is lusting over him with a passion, the other has fallen to the pleasure. Where this will go I have no idea but then again I'm not the one writing.
Very nice! I do feel sorry for Twilight though.
Omg that reference.
I died.
Aaaaaanyways, loving the story, keep it going! The idea behind this is far too little used, and it's refreshing to see it!
...More?
The inclusion of Sparity just gained you another favourite.
I only expected this to be a simple SpikeXApplejack fic, now I can't wait to see where this story progresses.
Commence read.
Well, that was interesting.
A Blarog? What's going on there?
And then Rarity.
twilight's gonna be so ma~~~~~~d
OH HELL YA
Wasn't this a story about Spike and AJ a few chapters ago?
LOVED IT
Spike's Swag has been turned on, now every mare would want a piece of his hands. And here I thought you were going to break Spike's crush on Rarity so he could be with Applejack.
a Balrog? seriously? simply awesome!
I don't need to be washed! Oh wait
Well, I noticed a few errors, but not bad. I do hope to see a little more Sparity, but I'm all up for Spike getting all the mares The title does seem to need a change though. You also appear to need to add character tags.
Its is possessive form of it; it's is "it is." You only seemed to have made that mistake once though.
1933619 I couldn't resist. I had to use your suggestion! It was brilliant.
1933646 Eeyup.
And to everypony else, the Title stays. I have a plan.
Three chapters from now it will all become clear.
Be patient my lovelies. You will not have to wait long.
Oh man, I so seen this cumming!
Awww. Poor Twilight. I really hope she gets her do eventually.
Love it love it
Nice story but like a few times before, double dicks made me stop immediatly. Nevertheless keep the like I gave you
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how about 'Spike's Lucid Domination'
More chapters to come, you have just gained my eternal gratitude. I can't wait to see where this all leads to.
1940377 heck yeah.
I pictured Twilight coming clean and Spike responding to her with something like this:
Well, so much for that. This update was great regardless! It's about time someone recognized Spike's value as a masseur in a society occupied by creatures with hooves. There is only one fanfic, not here on FiM, that pairs Spike with the Blossom sisters. Here's hoping Spike's interview will be a hands-on test. And if Trixie shows up at that spa, I will jump for joy. Not that expecting her to, but it would be awesome.
Coming back, I like that Spike's first time was with Rarity. It makes the more sense than any character aside from Twi, who could be considered even. The only thing that bother me per-say is that I can't tell if Rarity has romantic feelings for Spike or not. Some parts definitely seem that way, but certain other parts give it a friends with benefits feel.
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I'm not sure how you determined that, but if it's true, it just confuses the picture even more.
1945349 In 'Winter Wrap Up' Twilight says that the ponies of Ponyville have been wrapping up winter in the earth pony way "for hundreds of years".
And in 'Family Appreciation Day' Granny Smith reveals that her family founded Ponyville when she was a filly.
Ergo, Granny Smith is 'hundreds' of years old....
... or a liar.
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Thank you for explaining that, but I think I prefer the Granny-Smith-is-a-compulsive-liar angle.
Balrog.... I see what you did there sir
1945457 Also, you have the second coolest avatar I have ever seen.
You have the approval of the demon council
Victory.
Stand by for awesomeness in < 8 hours.
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I demand for moar!!!
His penises were having a duel inside Rarity? That sounds scary.
1959975 YES it was a penis duel! It was a furious battle man! You should have seen it. It lasted for days! There was thunder and lightning and shit!