Note: the mane 6 are in their early 40's and have kids that are teenagers. I don't own the picture I found it on Bing so all credit of the picture goes to whoever made it
The mane 6 enjoyed their lives until Discord came but thankfully it was temporary. But since then they been acting weird.
What happened while Discord was free? What will happen to the children? But most importantly what will happen to the mane 6?
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I'm going to apologize to a couple of people whose writing I called shitty earlier.
o no not the kiddies
At people who are gonna be a jerk
DONT COMMENT
2026408 Easy there big eye. I could easily know who this people are just by looking at their username. And I guess there are one of those people who reviews story mixing it with a little bit bragging.
Alt. Title: The Rise and Fall of Twilight Stardust and the Elements from Mars.
That was a joke, by the way, before you get all jumpy and delete this comment as well.
This comment will probably get deleted, seeing as three other comments were deleted all at the same time, (Most likely for having an opinion.) but your writing could use some work. Lots of grammatical errors, spelling mistakes, and no real plot. So you've introduced your characters, but have them doing nothing. For a fight with Discord, they all seemed awfully calm about what had gone down. I may be a bit biased, as I tend to dislike whenever OC's are created which are related to the mane 6. This story is all dialogue, with no description of the area around them or their actions. Because of this, the story seems to take place in a void, where everypony is standing around motionless except for an occasional movement, such as standing up or getting on a train that appeared from nowhere in the same area where Discord was fought. Commas seem to be something your story lacks, as everything just goes straight on ahead, without a single break. The established characters don't follow their personalities, and the OC's have no personality.This could work, but needs a lot of improvement. englishchick.com/gifs/badfanfic.gif
Sincerely, Brosparkles
Your vindictively counterproductive action of deleting comments is very, very detrimental to your success.
This will probably be deleted as well, but you have to look at the comments in a helpful light instead of being a complete douchebag and deleting our comments. Think, maybe they can be helpful, I mean, anyone that's insecure will probably lash out for discredit to their stories, I did, once, but I learned that it was to help me. Learn from this.
Also, Bing's for pussies, real men use AskJeeves.
What, you thought I was gonna say "Google?" Please, act like a gentleman.
Know what I'll just ignore all you. This is so stressful.
2028400 Come on, don't be a pussy. You're not going to be well liked on this site if you go around being a dick (ie. deleting comments) and ignoring criticism, and if people don't like you, they're not going to read your work. Ergo, it's better to be nice and listen to what people have to say, as it can help you improve, write better stories, and get more readers.
2028816 oh my gosh. You act like I'm the only person on the hole website that deletes a few comments and I take advice not fuckin insults like people calling me a pussy!
2032737 No, it's the same little speech I give to any other egotistical author such as yourself who think they're God's greatest gift to writing, and that nothing they write can be bad. Let me tell you something: you're not. Now please, don't be a dick. I tried to give you some advice in my previous comment, but you threw it back in my face.
2032737 Sorry, but people don't like it when authors delete comments. It shows the author as a coward who can not take a few bad comments.
One thing that you need to have a successful story is to leave an impression as an author. Shouting obscenities won't show you off as a good person.