This is too freaking great!

0.0 OMG im loving this so much so far please please continue

1868775

I like your profile pic, so cute!

1868789

I'm glad you like it, I'm hard at work on the third chapter.

Awesome chapter. Keep going!

This story is too good, please keep them coming

Very nice indeed, keep em coming.

I am loveing this story keep it up!

1 word

awesome

"The DAAW is strong with this one!"

My very own quote. (I think...)

Perfect fit for this chapter.

I am really enjoying this story. Keep up the good work.

The story somehow remind me of Xenophilia but only a little but you caan't escape the similarity if you are basin on the same world and character, so i see a it evouling in great story, if only chapters were little longer.

I have no problem with clop whatsoever but glad their taking things one step at a time, adds more to the story and the daww moments aren't bad either; not by a long shot...

damn good one

I love the cover art for Trace.

1874782

Thanks, It took me awhile to finish it

This story is just so captivating! I've read stories such as 'Green' and a list of other good reading articles, but none caught my eye as much as this. I NEED more this story...I'm dieing without it.
Favourited, Thumbed and Followed. Hope to see the next enthralling chapter up soon!

1888473

*giggles* I am so glad you and others are liking my story. I will hopefully have the next chapter up real soon.

Yeah, I really am liking the story. Thumbs up, dude.

Wunderbar.

Sorry in advance!

Trace could tell he was losing his patients with these questions and sighed...

Patience.

I've always tended to try and woe stallions...

Woo.

Like itching a scratch...

You mean 'scratching an itch?' Or is that one intentional...? Because though I've joked about it I've never seen anyone actually reverse both at once .

you are number one

The progression here feels a little rushed. Writing off the problem, as it appears, with 'I didn't judge based on appearances' seems cheap.We're not talking about someone with a crooked nose here. These girls all look like literal barnyard animals. Because they are. Ish.

Hoping it's addressed further I future chapters,

I'm liking the story so far, and the 'Xenophilia' inspired feel is fun. My only small gripe so far is that the pacing of this chapter seemed very rushed. Other than that it's been an enjoyable read so far.

I've read three Human in Equestria stories and so far my problem is the same: Origin. Let us know how he/she got there. It's easier to get into the story and to better know the main character. Otherwise: I like this.

This is disgustingly cute.

This chapter brought up bad memories.

Alright I'm loving this now, a tad rushed but nothing big I like how the date actually went pretty entertaining to read.

I didn't notice the tags so I didn't notice Lyra was in this story. xD

I bet anything that one his friends will come over and see him with Lyra and get the wrong Idea.

3454418 I actually never try to look at the tags so I don't know where the story will lead.

We also agree on this being slightly rushed, but oh well whatever. I am still enjoying it!

Chapter one: "hmpf seems to be just an other HiE... let give it an other chance..."
Chapter two: "OK!... where do I sign?!?"

to be honest; Xenofilia feelings are coming up, you dear sir... or madam... are doing a good job ^^

I like Lyra is not completely obsessed with humans, only likes them.

4224701 Same I have only read a couple stories where she is not that one crazy mare (at least when it comes to H.I.E. tails) your human and you though has to be her at her craziest.

4224701 first I loved this chapter and story in .Second and I'm happy Lyra is a normal and not obsessed with humans and hands.I loved how the story is coming along.I can't wait to see what happens between them next and any other mares to join his herd.I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.

Thumbs up number 777 lucky me.

Love the story so far especially the different societal norms.

I like this Lyra, she is slightly goofy and very lovable.

Lyraaaaaaaaaa

>>Laurai That was my reaction

I don't know why but the ending of this chapter just sorta warms my heart a bit

Anyone else getting xenophilia vibes?

Also why are next to no words abbreviated even in speech? There's a load of "I will"s but no "I'll"s etc.

In the future. Yes you can start a fire in the way they used but it takes an enormous amount of energy and time. In this situation flint and steel would be much better. Before lighters or matches were common place that's how they would have started fires.

2822780 - I ageee with you. A social taboo like that was overcome a bit too easily. Especially when the previous chapter went to a lot of effort to set up *just* how uncomfortable he was about the subject.

2822780
Thinking the alcohol played a role. Remember drinks there are a lot stronger due to physical differences