A human, named Trace, is guided by the mane six in learning the pony way. Fitting in is terrifying as everypony seems to be out to get him. Read on as he learns to fit in and ends up fighting off the immense loneliness of being the only human.
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Had a great day at school, then play some awesome halo 4, founds out this story updates.......
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Oh God, sob stories... I never have liked them. I'd be a liar if I said that I thought this was getting better as it went along; I made a comment a couple of chapters back saying this is getting too sweet and cute and everything for my taste, and the sob stories aren't helping to be honest. I'll stick with it, but I doubt it will change much.
his dad must have been part pony coming up with those names
For me, it's really good!
You know it bro (^.^)/)
(Relaxing sigh) the wonders of being drunk
Well, it is good to see Trace and the girls are doing okay. I love Trace's families names: I am a big sucker for naming schemes. The, "You can just wait there until your herd arrives and I will herd them to your room," pun gave me a good chuckle as well.
One thing though. This line: "The tall bipedal human's," that made me laugh. It is just nitpicking, but it has already been established that Trace walks on two legs, so the sudden reminder that he was bipedal just seemed off.
Excellent, as always.
Going forward, I wonder if they're going to accept a stallion into the herd, after all Trace has indicated he's bisexual. It would be interesting to see how the group dynamic would be, and how other ponies react.
2451616 this comment made my night
also Go home Trace you are drunk!
I was just thinking about this story the other day, before this chapter came out, wondering when this would update. Totally forgot what happened. I had to do a little recapping. Great story!
I half your bill --> halve
Is that why you don't talk about your parent's anymore? --> parents
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Thank you just went back and fixed it.
2453231 Yeah that would be interesting too. Well all we can do is speculate until we get more chapter *hint hint*
Heh, this thought just came to me and I thought I would share it with you for this story. Since gender roles are swapped in Equestria and are so prominent, it would be funny if Trace and Lyra got into an argument and she was the one who had to sleep on the couch!
Then she would have to be the one to try different ways to try and apologize to him! That would be hilarious.
Maybe I'm just being greedy, but I wish this story was updated more often...
2490910 The more and more I read your idea, the more I like it. This is coming from someone who has had to sleep on the couch on more than one occasion eh!
Great story so far. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. :)
10 more days to the monthly update (I hope!)
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I'm so glad so many ponies like the story to the point that they regularly check for new chapters and try to keep track with when I usually update. I do apologize for not updating as fast as I used too. I usually post whenever I get done with a new chapter and it gets edited and etc. I've finished the next chapter and sent it to the editors. We usually toss it back and forth between one another until we are happy with the chapter. So it shouldn't be too dreadfully much longer before the next chapter.
2549631 lol Maybe it's a case of too many cooks spoiling the broth!
2549631 I love this story but for me, and I'm sure that there are a lot of other people who would agree, it's kinda hard to be invested in a story when updates come so rarely, that when they do come you have to go and reread previous chapters to remind yourself.... I'm just saying.
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I know what you mean. I'll have to try harder to update more often, so I don't keep everypony waiting.
2549631 That was..... three weeks ago!
Pretty good story so far. Is it just gonna be Lyra and Fluttershy or are there gonna be a few more joining the herd?
2697129 Well this story was inspired by Xenophilia....
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Well yeah, it was deeply inspired by Xenophilia and I couldn't help but take parts from the story. I try to keep it original, but it's going to have tid bits from Xenophilia.
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To be totally honest, I don't know... I have a small timeline of what I want to happen, but I'm not sure about adding another mare/stallion. This shouldn't be a spoiler since even I am unsure what's going to happen, but I'm thinking once Ever Growing Friendship is over, I may add a separate continuation for it. Only time will tell.
2715099 I think that was what attracted me to this story in the first place, it wasn't a rip off of Xenophilia as some other writers did, yet contained some of the elements from Xenophilia that I found interesting.
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That's exactly how I was hoping it would be. Not a rip off, but would have tid bits.
Seems trace is somewhat similar to me, I'm bisexual, pretty effeminate for a guy to the point that I get confused for a woman at the mall by both sexes, I'm not one for violence but talking it out first and resort to it if there is little else I can do, and my sis is more man then I am as well.
To the point that we both question if we switched genders. xD
Still loving the story gonna continue.
When I'm drunk I tend to laugh alot but not being mean. That's why I enjoy drinking during summer. Laughing while drunk helps me forgetting how hot it is... and I'm strangely starting to like Trace. He's nice looking for a guy.
Pen Quill, Trace, and Doodle, named by a father who Trace doesn't know very well. OK, it's pretty clear he was either a pony or raised in a pony culture, and that's going to be a fun twist. Always fun to see some plot to go with the...plot. Perhaps their father was one of the three humans mentioned in the book Twilight is researching, or otherwise related to them.
I loved it all so much it had some awesome sweat and funny parts and we got to learn about there family's.I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.
I think the story is okay but I can use a little bit more work