A human, named Trace, is guided by the mane six in learning the pony way. Fitting in is terrifying as everypony seems to be out to get him. Read on as he learns to fit in and ends up fighting off the immense loneliness of being the only human.
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Amazing story.
Love the storyline can't wait to read this chapter
Love this so much cant wait to read more
I was just thinking about this story earlier today and it gets a new chapter when i get online!
(weather is also oddly similar to that in the story too, coincidence?)
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Yeah, it has been really cold lately XD though, I haven't any snow yet. I heard it snowed in the mountains north of where I live, but nothing except ice here
2 gals, 1 dude, 1 bed.
Every man's dream.
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Actually, my dream is 5 gurls, me, and a huge bed.
At the risk of being cliche:
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Love story. Request MOAR!
Wow! I must say. To me this story rivals Xenophilia in its greatness!
Depending on how much farther you take it; you may even surpass it in every way!
I dare say you are close to surpassing it as it is!
Even without comparing it to Xenophilia; this story is one of the BEST HiE I have read so far.
I look forward with great anticipation to future chapters!
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I'm really happy to hear you say that. me and Bytestorm have really worked hard on this story and to be honest, I'm not all that good at Grammar and Bytestorm really has done a good job a catching mostly all of my mistakes. Also giving me good pointers and telling me how to improve. I suppose it is really a two way street though, how well the story is compared to how easy it is on the mind and eyes to read.
I am very nitpicky when it comes to my own mistakes, so I deeply criticize my own work, but I am happy that is good enough to be liked to at least one person, let alone all the readers that are following it. Sorry for my little rant, but your comment really lifted my spirits about this story. Thank you!
Awww they are so cute together.
I wonder what did Shy prepared for they date.
Hmmm, so humans actually existed in Equestria before? I sense some worldbuilding incoming
2078154 Remember friend, a mistake is never a problem, so long as you are willing to correct it. Mistakes happen all the time, and I am no stranger to them either. I know of no one who does not make mistakes.
whoa there this story just caught my interest i shall gouge on it later
Okay, as many of you (Nah, probably none of you) know, I hate Human in Equestria fics. I hate them with every fiber of my body.
But this is different.
I've found only five of these stories that I enjoy (Now six, adding this). I will say this: I really wish that authors on this site would write more of these. Stories with this theme. Most of us are sick and tired of the whole "Wake up in Ponyville" or "Find portal and become pony" and whatnot.
The point is, thank you Author. Thank you for writing a decent fic.
One favorite and like.
Watcher.
-Gamedash.
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Yeah, I'm like you. I'm not much for HiE fics and was surprised I wanted to write one after reading Xenophilia. Far too often writers poorly write or rush the early story, desperately wanting to go ahead and get the facts shoved into the story on how they got there... I just kind of... Shoved the whole thing under the carpet for later, so to speak.
However, I am glad that you liked it and understand where you are coming from, I very rarely like HiE fics too; so, I am glad to here that Mine and Bytestorms story it is well enough written to be one of the actual good ones. yay
2083046 Which chapters were they in? I am a little embarrassed that I missed those.
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just let me know where the mistakes are later and the corrections and I will go back and change em.
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all fixed now
I'm sorry to say that this story sucks.
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I'm sorry you didn't like it. You mind telling me why so I can try and make it better?
I would say this is one of the better HiE fics out there. Mostly due to the fact that the characters show actual personality and develop with the plot. Honestly that is one of the make or break things for romance in my opinion. Please continue writing this good sir.
Hmmm the romance is very very rushed, the part were angel's sister offered Trace one of her babbies seemed rather odd, most of the characters show little to no personality. When I read the first chapter I felt like this story was going somewhere but then you started to rush and force the relationship witch started making me dislike it. Please don't think I completely hate your story its just that there's a lot of parts where you could of done better, also if your trying to keep these chapters coming out on a schedule for people please stop, I rather wait weeks for a new chapter that's actually good than get a shity one the next day
Oh and don't take my stupid opinion to heart or anything, I'm just an idiot, so yeah
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don't worry, I kind of thought the romance was rushed too, but I'm still learning. I'm planning on another after this one. Hopefully the romance with Fluttershy wont be as rushed.
2086826 From my point of view, the focus characters maintain a certain level of honesty, transparency, and perhaps they all wear their hearts on their sleeves, so to speak. So I understand not liking the sameness of them all. The personality differences aren't there, but the personalities themselves are.
As for the rushed romance. I also understand this; but in relation to story timeline, and the fact the the personality types of the characters are almost guaranteed to "fall hard" as it were, lastly coupled with the incoming heat that would logically intensify emotional responses, I find the speed at which the romance occurred to be mostly acceptable. Were it not for those 3 factors, I would agree with you wholeheartedly.
We most certainly could have elaborated on these, but I do not want Thunder to lose focus on the goals of his story by stressing the details. The level of detail that was put into Xenophilia, and other great stories, is a level that needs to be worked up to; and a beginning author would burn themselves out before attaining that goal.
The part with the sister offering a baby as a pet, well I can see where anyone would have a problem with it. Seems, though, to fit the canon, as it would appear that almost every non-predator animal, and even some predators, actually want to be pets. At least the ones around Fluttershy that is.
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I was actually basing the pet thing on the episode where Rainbow gets Tank. All the pets literally begged to become a pet, so I just assumed that a mother would take every step possible to get her babies a good home. Plus rabbits have babies like crazy, so they would be less emotionally attached to let them go. At least that was where I was coming from on that ordeal. I don't mind the dislikes because I know everypony has different views and everypony can't possibly like everything that is out their.
I actually like the notion that humans are either mythical creatures, or lived on the planet in the past. Happy to see it implemented here.
And aww dem feels Lyra with shy is pretty adorable xD
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Well, they have videogames, according to Hearts and Hooves Day...
sorry for this but what do any of you think about people that have more then one lover like Trace and his group I for one don't mind per say as long as they all love each other good for them.(not referring to the religious ones that do it) (I should just shut up and enjoy the story)
Thank you for using proper thermodynamics.
I loved this chapter it was awesome beyond awesome it just keeps getting better.They are all so sweet and cute together.I can't wait to see what happens next to them all and I can't wait to see what happens between them all next I can't wait to see where this story is going to happen next.And I can't wait to see what happens on there on there date.
its must use magic to work then, pheromones
mostlydon't work across species barrier.Or maybe chemicals by osmosis/diffusion, in the er...
Hope Fluttershy and Lyra can get over their differences and make out freely in front of Trace.