A human, named Trace, is guided by the mane six in learning the pony way. Fitting in is terrifying as everypony seems to be out to get him. Read on as he learns to fit in and ends up fighting off the immense loneliness of being the only human.
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Poor Trace. getting raped left, right and centre it seems.
*read the first few sentence*
Ahem..
I saw that coming
After all that, what does he expect to happen with Lyra? A conversation?
He's a little dense, this one...
I dunno why, I always feel uncomfortable reading stories with heat. But that aside, good chapter. Poor Trace.
I bet that humans are unaffected by the pheromones produced by mares in heat. So, in the end, Trace was not forced into anything and Lyra's worries were unfounded
read the these 5 chapters love it going straight into my favorites just like this pic
That was hilarious, although Trace is pretty freaking dense. Can't he see that the ponies aren't themselves while in heat? Talking to Lyra would seem fruitless if her mind isn't all there right now. Well I digress this has been my favorite chapter thus far.
Fluttershy now, DUN DUN DUN!!!!!!
If the cover pic is Trace, he looks very effeminate. He also behaves somewhat like a woman: he's very meek and sensitive, he follows his emotions before he makes a plan, and he has this aloofness about him like a quirky girl in a sitcom.
Over all, Trace is a nice guy, but not a very good example of males being dominant in his society. I get the feeling that that's the point, though.
Infinite fabulous
Audible gasp!
What an incredible plot twist which no one could possibly have seen coming from a mile away! It's a good thing the not-at-all-cliche heat plot device is not at all cliche and hasn't been used a hundr-
Yeah, I'll stop there. The only reason I'm not giving this a dislike is that I thought it seemed interesting at first. But then I saw that it's the same kind of story that throws in heat even though it's absolutely idiotic. And the story was looking so good too...
Is it so hard for authors to do something original that doesn't involve a plot device that is always used, is always used for the same thing, and always leads to the same issues?
Huh, I just read the rest of the chapter, hoping it got better. Instead, all I got was the worst example of character assassination I've ever seen in a relatively serious story.
I'm seriously tempted to dislike this. This one chapter completely destroyed any enjoyment this story had, and managed to ruin any attempt at characterization through an insanely out of place plot hole.
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This story uses the idiotic plot hole of heat. That plot device tends to involve all the characters being completely stupid in order to further the plot. Basically, if a story needs OOC characters, then use the heat card.
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meh, i guess i could agree to that.
This guy is a sucker for punishment
1911143 have to agree here...
I mean I understand that the character is supposed to at least meet all the mane 6 once during their heat... but dam thats just recless of him.
After getting almost raped by pinkie, which was a rather intense escape scene, he marches on towards twilight for the chance of gathering informations, ok here he thought Twily might be able to control herself better, because she's intelligent enough to overcome her own heat... But that isn't how this natural phenomenon works! Dammit Trace! Twily told him earlier, where they had that little argument about relationship advices, that she's always cooped up in that library for reading sessions and spends alot of time alone, which of course means she'd be very unstable during heat and when confronted with the opposite gender. In addation to that, Twily doesn't exactly handle stress and temper good either!
After beeing in contact with her for over 2 month, he should have very well noticed.
Ok he got lucky, did break her mental whirpool of lust with a few tears and got away, he musst have learned the messages now which was at least understandable in the consent of: "RUN, STAY BACK, STAY AWAY, DON'T ASK ANY OTHER MARES and HEAT'S A BITCH" with a good example of two mares running wild for him... But even after that second attempted rape and Twily's little lecture, he STILL moves on towards Rarity?
Oh well I guess all good things go by threes huh? WRONG!!!
I suppose the fact that he was almost killed or at least severely damaged, doesn't help his capebilitys of comprehension much anyway, so YACH WTH!
Move on to Fluttershy! Maybe she, the pony who is mostly unsocialized with that entire dam Village,
knows where sweet Lyre, who doesn't seem to have many friends here aswell >insertlyreiconhere<, resides... yeeaaaahhh riiiiiight!
Anyway still a good story though, but I wonder if he will make it through this trail 'unbucked'!
PS: The only reason why Trace wants to find Lyre is, to comfort her poor soul, tell her that she doesn't need to be sorry and that it's alright what they had done. At last he needs to say, that he still loves her, dispite the heat, and doesn't care if he was seduced by beeing exposed to her 'scent'... Surely if Lyre gets all 'godzilla in estrus mode', he'll need to haul some ass and get da hell out of there XD!... But I don't think that will happen since there is a missing comedy tag here on this story *sigh*.
2309767 I'm a pessimistic person but your comments so far make me sound like a freaking optimist.
Damn this chapter was eventful quite the read that didn't bore me in the least.
I must continue!
The awkward moment when every female in town tries to have sex with you. I don't see the problem.
RUN YOU FOOL! GO HOME AND DEFEND YOURSELF!
I loved this chapter man he is all kinds of stupid.I mean it should be clear by now that he should just go home but he just keeps pushing his luck and it's just a matter of the before it runs out.One more thing stupid what part of you can have marble girls and girlfriends.If something does happen just add them to your herd.I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.
3505208 I know right
Am I wrong to be looking forward to Fluttershy raping Trace.
You know this came to mind.
Damn...is he just stupid? Doesn't he learn?
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Yeah. He's going to find her, then comfort her (then she bangs him into the ground), then he walks out and it's the princesses out for a stroll or someshit.
I wish I could get a piece of this guy - he's denser than any building material I've seen...
All we need is some sort of a mare parade or something.
Also, can't he just fuck 'em so that they're lucid enough for five fucking minutes to actually answer him? Doesn't seem like it should be that much of a deal... They're friends, right? Friends help each other out.
This chapter really is an embodiment of the average "HiE harem protagonist and ponies are in heat" story