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why does it suddenly have the change in charictor ?
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1841442 I'm attempting to show the character's changing mood or personality. He is pleasant and cordial, the next minute he is apathetic and a bit daft. Appreciate the comment.
I actually cannot finish reading this.
I've sat through every story I've read. I've hated 120 Days Of Blueblood, yet I still read through it. I've read through all sorts of messed up things.
But THIS. I didn't know it was possible that I would actually want to stop reading a story because of how brutal it was. I nearly cried at how brutal the character was being to Apple Bloom, one of my favorite characters on the show.
So yeah, in my entire life of making it through horrible and absolutely disgusting stories, THIS is my cracking point.
It's not a bad story; far from it. It's just that what's the use of all the violence in FIMFiction stories nowadays? It seems like everyone is thinking they're making gold when they're actually just plain disgusting.
Like I said, a decent story, but you could've toned down the abuse a little, if you wanted to attract more viewers.
Appreciate the comment Kiryu123.
1902057 You should read "Stealing Harmony" by RapeTrain-Express. If you haven't guessed from his pen name what the story entails, it isn't pleasant. This story is pretty tame compared to that fic. The story isn't as straight forward as this story is with abuse but it is so much worse when the character does other things. In fact I would say out loud "Holy shit." when reading Stealing Harmony especially when certain fillies are involved. You probably wouldn't like it though since Applebloom is in it as well and she goes through much more than this story has put her through... at least for now.
Damn talk about a beating. Good chapter.
1902522 Thanks alot.
1902519 I actually read through Stealing Harmony, and for some reason, it didn't disturb me as much as this fic.
But still, to make sure nobody gets the wrong idea, I didn't think this was a bad fic. In fact, it was way better than I thought it would be. I knew it would get dislikes, but I didn't expect them to go over the like bar.
I liked it just because it was the only story to make me nearly puke.
So I don't think the story's bad, and once I gather enough courage, I'll try reading Chapter 3