This is a story of the moon and the true pain they lay on the dark side of it. The pain and suffering that no mother should ever go through.
In her banishment to the moon, Princess Luna would not only feel alone be she would also be broken. The pain of the loss of a foal is something no mother should ever go through.
For the next thousand years Luna would morn her lost child and plot her revenge on the sister who let her die.
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Interesting
, I haven't seen this take on the story yet. I say asides from the few typos it was all around great. Waiting for the next chapter! 
Onwards! To the next chapter!
You had me emotional by paragraph 5, and in tears by paragraph 9. I applaud your writing abilities!
i knew i would feel sorry for luna when i read it
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Wait till I post chapter three. You will be happy, sad, hurt, and feel bad for Celestia. But im not going to kill her, just her spirit.
2290565i feel bad reading your reply because i'm thinking of whats happening and that makes me feel sad
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Don't fret. It wont hurt....much. But like i said Celestia is going to play a big part in chapter three. But i will say this, there will be no form of violence in chapter three. It will end with a little bit of hurt, but it was the only way things could stay the same. I think we will like the end. And i may use this to go into my next story.
I'm gonna go with yes...
Bla bla bla when u GON update bla bla bla
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sorry i havent updated. i lost all my info to the account and just got it back. Between that and school i havent had time to write. sorry guys
My god... even I thought Celestia went too far in this...
That part where Luna had a change of heart...
Oh, I wish Lunar Dawn could be brought back.
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im working on that in another story.
Posting the fourth and final chapter now.
And i revised chapter three. I would read the new chapter three before reading chapter four
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The new updates are in. New Chapter three and i the end in chapter four
Boo
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Explain your boo please. I would like to know what you did not like
Wow. Two years...
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Yeah between college and everyday life I just never found time to finish it. But I finally did it.
Not bad