When an echo from the past catches up to the present, the world will be pulled into chaos and destruction. Can Twilight Sparkle and her friends save the world from those who would destroy it? Or will they destroy it themselves?
With the prophecy coming true the leaders of the world hang with baited breath. Celestia has locked herself in the chamber of memories and Luna struggles with ruling the kingdom and abating the growing concerns of their people as they question why the engines of war are beginning to stir
And yet through it all, The residents of Ponyville remain unaware. Except for one Twilight Sparkle, who finds herself dreaming of a impossible place with what she has been told was a impossible creature.
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Very interesting concept. I always love a good fic that delves into the surreal, mysterious realm of dreams and the mind.
That said, even though the concept kept me interested, the writing itself could use some improvement. Do you have an editor? If not, you should look into having somepony edit your work before publishing it.
Still, I really do like this fic. You kept just enough information to pique my curiosity; I'm curious who the mysterious alicorn is and how he can apparently read Twiley's mind. So, I'll be tracking to see where this goes.
And the plot thickens. I have to say, while there is an occasional grammar error here and there, you seem to be very skilled in keeping just enough information secret to keep the readers curious.
One thing confused me, however--is Twilight completely trapped in this place? That seems to be the implification based on her failed escape attempts, but then you mentioned something about Twi not telling her friends...
That said, I still really like the concept you have here, and also the 'mindfreak' style reminiscent of Inception. Keep up the good work! :)
Please tell me you gonna continue this story.