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Master Maze


Welcome to Canterlot Academy, a prestigious school where one can achieve their dreams. Set up by Headmaster Celestia, its doors are open to those with potential, regardless of financial and social standing. With a wide range of programs designed to focus around discovering and pursuing one’s talents, it is the perfect place for self-discovery. Which is good, because for new student Kyle Stockman, a tragic accident has erased all traces of his past from his mind.

As Kyle tries to pick up the shattered pieces of his life, will he rediscover himself and recover his memories? Or will he be doomed to never remember, to never know who and what he’s lost?

Chapters (2)
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And here's the first chapter folks, I hope you like it. Since this is an alternate universe of sorts, there are a few additional tidbits I'd like to explain so that there's no confusion.

The Coming of Age Ceremony is related to cutie marks. I'll be explaining it in more detail later on, but when one receives their cutie mark, they receive a new name to go with it. This is why how "Pony" names end up reflecting their personalities.

Regarding Unicorn horns, they generally aren't visible unless the owner's hairline is extremely high, or their hair is very short. As for pegasus wings, they generally keep them hidden when on the mainland to avoid making a scene, but there's no restriction on the island.

With those little bits out of the way, I hope you all enjoyed the first chapter. Let me know what you think, good, bad, and otherwise. I'll hopefully have the next chapter up soon, see you all on the flip side!

hmm this seems promising, keep it up I am intrigued. You deserve a mustache :moustache:

There's been a lot of these 'school stories' popping up recently, but after reading through this first chapter I can happily say this one is worth the read.
Keep up the good work.:twilightsmile:

I tuned it all out, still stuck on thinking about what that bird/orange was going to tell its family when it got home. How would it explain what happened to its wife? What would the kids think? Would they be teased for the rest of their lives, being the kids of a flying, chirping orange?

Godspeed, bird/orange. Godspeed.

Interesting start. I'm going to have to keep my eye on this one.

Cool so far, also image cover made me think of this

Ha, Dragon born. Can he shout like in the tales of old?

He used to be able to, but then he took an arrow to the knee.

1817996 Damn arrows always taking away what people used to be.

More chapters. More updates are needed. The suspense is killing me.


I liked this and you should too.

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