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A Dream Come True

A night guard's secret crush for the princess of the night has his dream come true one very special night...

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bahatumay

bahatumay #1 · Dec 9th, 2012 · · ·

That escalated fairly quickly.
Quite a few you're/your mistakes, and Capitalization was Random and A Bit off at times.
It's light, it's fluffy, but it's not great, really.

quill and ink

quill and ink #2 · Dec 10th, 2012 · · ·

I like it keep on going bro

Blood_Script

Blood_Script #3 · May 26th, 2014 · · ·

this was a wonderful short story I like short stories and wish i can do one without writers block lol. anyways sorry it took me so long to get to reading it, but at least i read it lol, hope to see more or we can work together on a short story if you like hope to hear from you soon