Every Sunday, Rarity gives back. But how much is she willing to give to save the life of one little orphaned filly who is desperately crying out for help?
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Richie Richter
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This was perfect. The only thing that could make it better would be a sequel.
"That story was bad."
"And the author should feel bad."
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Probably the greatest lines ever written by mankind.
Loving this story!
2643074 Really? Wow. I submitted to EQD, so that's the only chance I've got of getting in the feature box at this point. Thanks though. It was a lot of hard work. Nice to know it wasn't for naught.
Took a while to read, but that was awesome!
Favorited, liked, praised!
I am sad that it is over, though. Any chance of a sequel?
Your writing was fantastic and story was amazing and just.... just....
GAH! Words cannot describe my love for this story. It's nice to read something this good that doesn't have a romance tag (like everything else seems to)
Loved it!
The story felt good, and did you write this based off that comic that was on EQD a while back?
Like I said, the story was good, but many of the lines didn't feel very Rarity. I tell this to one of my regular writers a lot. He does a lot of RD stuff and sometimes has (in the past) had problems making them sound RD. He is far over that now considering his main story is over 100k words. If you want some help I'd be happy to have him take a look at the RD lines and I could help you a little with the Rarity lines. (Rarity is best pony)
But overall, a good story. I've only completed the first chapter but often getting through 4000 words is difficult due to time constraints. (I shoulda gone to bed, I've got almost a ten hour day tomorrow)
Just beautiful. I found myself hoping for the ending so much that I think my heart hurt a little. I know people comment about feels a lot when they read stories but this one really struck a cord.Great job on this one and I hope for more greatness from you soon.
How can there be so few comments!!!? I've read most of this story ( in one sitting) and haven't seen anyone make a note of just how great this story is! Can't wait to see how this ends.
Always great to have a happy ending! Part of me wants a sequel, but a bigger part doesn't, but that's up to you. Writing and everything was great and I'm amazed I haven't seen this featured. Great job!
That was pretty sweet. I have to say, I didn't think it would turn out like this, and I mean that in a good way. A sequel would be nice.
I know this has nothing to do with this great story but at the end when I read the sentence "No more lies." this song immediately popped in my head. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RLxIE9IQOJs
This is probably the best Rarity-centric story I've read here.
'Rarity, What's a dragon doing in your boutique?" Asked Silver carefully quietly.
"That's My precious scales Spikey Wikey" Rarity answered.
Silvers eyes grew wide and she said one word "COOL !"
This is a criminally underrated story.
I love this story
Please do a sequel