In the city of Manehattan crime happens every day, many times and for every possible reason: money, desperation or even boredom to only name a few. Theft, robbery, mugging, fraud, racism and different acts of violence and intolerance are the bread and butter for the Manehattan City Guard. But there are deeds so nefarious that not even the brave mares and stallions of the guard can deal with them.
Connemara Special Investigators Manehattan (CSI for short) is a special investigation unit established to solve grisly murders and deeds so vile that no sane pony could imagine.
Chapters (3)
Before I began reading the fic...I hear this...
A CSI-MLP crossover with Pinkie in it?
It seems that this could be.....
The best story ever.
YEEEEAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
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In my head it's actually a mixture of all the CSI themes when I think about it. And a little pinch of NCIS
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We yet have to see about that, but thank you for your enthusiasm
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CSI ? NCIS ?
THAT IS MOST WONDERFULL !!!
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Well, other than the formatting, it feels about right. I have faith.
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Specifications please
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I think you need to put some spaces between the paragraphs, as it actually helps make it much neater. Right now it looks kinda stuck together.
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Good point
Edit
Aaaaand modified
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Glad to be of service. I am now waiting for my own story to be approved by FimFiction.
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What is it about?
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Pinkie discovers old-school swing jazz.
And the story is now visible! yay!
Now it's my turn to complain and point out tiny irrelevant inconsistencies!
it's good so far, just some minor spelling errors
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Enlighten me
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I shouted why pulling.
I sighted.
I suppose it's just those two.
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check
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Hm... Johnathan Crane... Now that you pointed that out... Too much watching Tim Burton and Johnny Deep somehow warps your mind... Not that I'm complaining
So enlighten me senpai and point out my mistakes
I like finding stories by lesser known authors. Little diamond in the rough.
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Good sir this little heap of scribbles is my début and I certainly have still a lot to learn 
Nevertheless thank you for your kind words of praise 
Lesser known authors?
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Is that the same guy, she met before ?
My shipping sense are tingling...
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We shall see about that. I could always kill him of in a cheap attempt of adding some drama to the show. Who knows...
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NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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What's 'Connemara' ?
Also this is Det. Pinkamena Diane Pie right ? Not The Cupcake Psychopath Pinkamena but the tough mare det. Pinkamena right ?
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1. Real world: a pony breed from Ireland. Story: someone/something.
2. We shall see about that...
Besides that - I know the third chapter's taking long but I'm giving the fault to the the nearing holidays and other duties at the university
(Joke) Alt. Title: Smell The CSI
Um... Dang, I can't think of a pun.
hanged=hung
That put me of=put me OFF
fallowed=followed
his a looker=he's a looker
still looking forward to the rest of this story
i'm looking forward to some point in the story where she gets drunk and Pinkie comes out
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1.CHECK. I wrote it while on the train it has to have some mistakes
2. Isn't the pace too slow?
3. It's already enough that I made Joker even more like Johnathan/Ichabod Crane than I originally intended
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1. I have also started writing on the go, I write my chapters right into a document here on the site so I can work on it from my phone/tablet
2. you need to set up the world and the characters in it so starting off a little slow isn't terrible.
3. What does Ichabod Crane have to do with anything? Is he secretly the headless horse?
Though now I understand the Tim Burton/Johnny Depp Comment 
JOHNATHAN Crane is Scarecrow from Batman (Begins mostly, but he's in the other two Nolan films too, also the comics) He's a doctor, he's an intelligent kind of crazy and just the way Sour Note acts on the train gave me that vibe. Not as much in this new chapter
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I saw the surname Crane and the first thing that came to my mind was Sleepy Hollow. When I reread your comment today I realised that you meant Scarecrow... Too many books and movies 
Nevertheless that's his role - to be weird 
Even weirder than Pinkamena 
1. Yeah it helps with the motivation
2. Whatever.
3. Yes I know
A friend of mine noticed that Pinkie's the main protagonist after the 3rd chapter
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You'll certainly love the introductions of Rarity and the other mane six
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sweet
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If Pinkamena became a detective. Who is the Element of Laughter ?
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You'll have to wait for that - it's one of the more important parts of the world setting
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DUDE!
i.imgur.com/ClUob.jpg
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DUDE! I loled
And no, she will not act as Horacio
Looks good, faved and waiting for updates
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You know life, work etc. are constantly getting in the way. Nevertheless I hope to finish this one day 
Thank you for the fav! But I'm afraid that you'll have to wait a little bi... Eh, what am I even saying a LONG time for the next update