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Apple Bloom is Best Pony1,692 stories ·929 members

The return of the blanks.

Applebloom has had a happy life until the day THEY return.

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Ravings1

Ravings1 #1 · Dec 19th, 2012 · · · Nightmares. ·

interesting

Journeyman

Journeyman #2 · Dec 19th, 2012 · · · Nightmares. ·

I won't downvote, but please, for the love of god, format your story. It hurts the eyes to see nothing but walls of text and discourages people from even giving your story a chance.

NyxLover

NyxLover #3 · Dec 19th, 2012 · · · Nightmares. ·

I have the story before i think scoot and sweetie will die. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

rosa4558

rosa4558 #4 · Dec 20th, 2012 · · · Nightmares. ·

1827141 Oh ok.Sorry I'm new at this (well sorta new) And I haven't really written anything like this befre so...

Yasturo

Yasturo #5 · Dec 21st, 2012 · · · Nightmares. ·

Tons of problems, might want to get a editor buddy.

baronessbyron

baronessbyron #6 · Mar 11th, 2013 · · · Nightmares. ·

1827141 I'm afraid I have to agree. I'm the one doing the fan art for this, and it is hard to do when A. you haven't given me any direction, and B. I can barely get through the story. thus, i have taken it upon myself to edit this story, free of charge or guilt.

rosa4558