Free To A Good Home

by SilverMoon01

Gaining Trust

Author's Note

Yea, so, I know that this is pretty unoriginal and I need to get a few more details in, as well as make it longer. Just keep in mind that this is really hard for me, being only in the fifth grade. xD

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December 1st, 2012

A week later, I was pretty used to going up to my treehouse after school - and during weekdays, all day- and my mom always thought I was just playing outside, which made her happy. But it made me happy as well.

You see, I had two My Little Pony fillies - Rainbow Dash and Twilight Sparkle. Cal had Rarity and Applejack, while Charlotte had Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy. Whenever we walked to school together, we would report on how our fillies were doing.

Twilight trusted me since I first took her to my treehouse. She had signaled that by touching her hoof to my hand and nodding. Why she had been so quick to trust me, I don't know. But RD was my problem.

The energetic filly would mess up the treehouse and snort at me when I saw the mess she had made. Rainbow would try to convince Twi that I could not be trusted, but luckily, Twilight objected. Dash was also learning how to fly, so I had to lock the windows and close the doors so she didn't escape.

I wanted Dashie to trust me. But how long would it take? I fed her extra apple slices at dinnertime, gave her Caramello squares for dessert while Twilight only got a small Snickers bar, when RD got hurt by crashing into the wall I nursed her back to health, and yet she still resented me!

Well, I guess I had to keep trying. Perhaps Dashie will come through soon, and until she does, I'll be patient. Besides, she will one day grow up and maybe talk! Then maybe we could work things out...

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December 2nd, 2012

Today I checked out a book from the school library. It was called "How the Rivers of China Were Made and Other Tales of Lore". I figured that Twi might like to get some reading done, if she even knew how. I know that Tales of Lore might not be the best choice to get the unicorn filly reading, but it seemed pretty exciting to me.

Sure enough, when I handed the golden book to Twili - Yes, I did start calling her that - she seemed engrossed in it! I asked her if she would read to me, and to my surprise, she can talk! She must be older then Dash. She read about The China River Legend to me out loud.

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Long ago, there were no rivers or lakes on the Earth, only the Eastern Sea. In this sea lived four dragons: the Long Dragon, the Yellow Dragon, the Black Dragon, and the Pearl Dragon. One day, as they flew from the sea to the sky and played in the clouds, the Pearl Dragon pointed down to the earth and cried out for the others to come and look. On the Earth they saw many people putting out fruits and cakes and burning incense sticks while they prayed. One white-haired woman, kneeling on the ground with a thin boy on her back, was praying, "Please send rain quickly, God of Heaven, to give our children rice to eat,"-for there had been no rain for a very long time and the crops had withered, the grass turned yellow, and the fields cracked under the scorching sun. "How poor the people are!" said the Yellow Dragon. "They will die if it doesn't rain soon!" The Long Dragon agreed and then suggested that they go and beg the Jade Emperor for rain. He then leapt into the clouds and flew towards the Heavenly Palace with the other Dragons following close behind.

The Jade Emperor was in charge of all the affairs in heaven and on earth and he was very powerful. He was not pleased to see the Four Drogons rushing into the Palace. "Why do you come here instead of staying in the sea and behaving yourselves?" The Long Dragon stepped forward and said, "The crops on Earth are withering and dying Your Majesty. I beg you to send rain down quickly!" The Jade Emperor pretended to agree with him and repsonded, "All right. You go back first and I'll send rain tomorrow." The Four Dragons thanked the Emperor and flew happily back to the sea.

Ten days passed and no rain came to the earth. The people suffered more and more, some eating bark and roots, others forced to eat white clay when they had nothing more to eat. Seeing this the Four Dragons felt sorry for the people because they knew the Jade Emperor cared only about pleasure and never took the people to heart. They decided they could only rely on themselves to relieve the people from their misery. Seeing the vast sea the Long Dragon said he had an idea. "Look, there is plenty water in the sea where we live. We should scoop it up and spray it towards the sky. The water will be like raindrops and come down to save the people and their crops!" "Good idea!" said the others. "But", the Long Dragon added, "We will be blamed if the Jade Emperor learns of this." "I will do anything to save the people!", the Yellow Dragon declared. The others Dragons agreed and they flew down to the sea, scooped up water in their mouthes, and flew back into the sky where they sprayed water all over the earth. The Four Dragons flew back and forth, making the sky dark and before long the sea water became rain and it poured down from the sky. "It's raining! It's raining!" the people cried. "Our crops will be saved!" They leapt with joy as the wheat stalks raised their heads and the grasses straigtened up.

The god of the sea discovered what the dragons had done and reported it to the Jade Emperor who became enraged and ordered the heaveny generals and their troops to arrest the Four Dragons. Being out numbered, the Dragons could not defend themselves and were soon captured and brought to the Heavenly Palace. "Go and get four mountains to lay upon them so they can never escape!', the Emperor ordered. The Mountain God used his powers to make four mountains fly from afar and pressed them down on the Four Dragons imprisoning them forever.

The Dragons never regretted their decision and determined to continue to do good for the people, they turned themselves into four rivers, which flowed past the high mountains and deep valleys, crossing the land from the west to the east, and finally emptied into the sea. Thus they became China's four great rivers-the Heilongjian (Black Dragon), the Huanghe (Yellow Dragon), the Changjiang (Long Dragon), and the Zhujiang (Pearl Dragon).

"Wow," I heard Twili say, tears in her purple eyes. "Why would the Jade Emperor ignore the Dragons' pleas?"

My heart skipped a beat and I held the young filly in my arms gently. "Because some beings - whether mortals or gods - can be so selfish, that they will let innocent beings die of hunger and thirst." I explained softly.

Then Dash walked in and saw the unicorn crying. Dash immaedietly took Twili away from my grasp, thinking that I had hurt her.

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December 2nd, 2012 (Night)

I walked into the treehouse to check on Twi. I had been doing that since she read that Tale of Lore. That's when I saw little RD staring out the window, looking sad and lonely. Her rose eyes shone in the moonlight and I could hear little whimpers.

I sat next to Dashie silently, and she didn't object or snort at me. I finally spoke after several moments. "Are you okay, Rainbow?"

Her gaze settled on me and sighed before looking back up at the stars. She raised a front hoof and seemed to reach for something in the sky - Perhaps a dead friend or relative?

I now realized that the cyan pegasus had to have had a mother. Then I seemed to share Dash's thoughts. It was a rainy evening when a gray pegasus with wall-eyed eyes and a chestnut stallion with a tie on stared down at me/Dash.

"It'll be alright, Rainbow Dash, my sweet." The stallion said gently as I seemed to whimper. "Three humans are waiting for you."

The wall-eyed pegasus touched her hoof to my cheek, to sad to speak. A portal opened and everything went black.

"You were abandoned by your parents, weren't you? I understand now..." I murmured to Dash. The filly blinked at me and smiled. Her hoof touched my hand and we nodded in unison. I held her in my arms and we stayed like that for several minutes, watching the stars.

Comments

[SilverMoon01]

Yes, a new chapter! I felt actually kinda good about this one! Especially since the Legend part. Thats my favorite legend - The Tale of The Four Dragons.

[Levimos]

Hmm.. this story has potential.. i shall watch this and see how it goes

[SilverMoon01]

After rereading this, I have to say that this reminds me a bit of My Little Dashie...

[viowolf]

1720053 i wonder why?... is it because its the same idea? but all things aside this is a pretty good story especially for a 10 year old, so here take this mustache I really liked the fact that you made Derpy and Dr Whooves here parents, at least i think you did it might just be a trick

[boredbrony365]

I am a 5th grader too but a boy and from a diffrent contrey so i dont speak or write very well

[SilverMoon01]

1728413

Actually, I did make Derpy Hooves and Derpy their parents. I wanted to include them somehow, so....

[boredbrony365]

u know that all this stuff of fillys on earth is becuse of MLD

[voyager 1]

There needs to be some thing like i don't know GTA V ONLINE! that would be awesome

[justintym4fun]

I realize that this comment is VERY late, considering when this chapter was released, but...

I think that you did a good job, especially considering your age at the time of writing. You are very descriptive, using specific color names as well as incorporating emotion. If you decide to pursue writing, I think you would be good at it.

P.S. I don't know if you've heard of FIMfiction's School for New Writers group, but if you haven't, here's the link. They have a lot of helpful resources for writers, including how to create OC's, World building, and all kinds of other topics, with more added all the time. Just a thought,if you decide to continue writing (be it fan fiction or original stories.)